Independence Challenge- voting

  • Chelsey
    11 years ago

    Here are the poem entries for the quickie challenge I hosted a few days ago. Voting will last until Sunday night. Results Monday morning.

    PM me the number of which poem you're voting for.

    Thanks for participating!

    #1 Caged thoughts

    My hand feels the war
    raging between my thoughts and pen.
    A few words diameter my thoughts
    while the pen inks out a blot.
    The words turn captive
    and the thoughts- silent;
    as the pen rules a blank paper.

    Yet the words never plan to surrender
    just like the former imprisoned India,
    and get buried under the pride of the pen;
    which boasts to have carved sapphire stories;
    yet forgets a vintage truth-
    the wisdom of a pen is spined by an array of radiant words.

    And the words determine
    to spread across the confines of the page
    liberalizing every dime essence and worth they hold.
    The mind hence unbottles the wrinkled thoughts
    which forces the pen to scribble on the untouched canvas.......
    And a revolution dawns.

    Words to be included in the poem as mentioned :

    1 synonym of freedom : Liberalizing
    2 antonyms : captive, imprisoned
    A birth stone : Sapphire stories (Bright stories)
    Lights : radiant words
    Something of value : vintage truth
    (just being a lil creative)
    Ref. of some kind of Independence : Imprisoned India ( Indian Independence )

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    #2 Pocahontas

    Garnet dreams scorched upon the land
    By the people who think they can take what they want
    Their greed engorged
    By the promise of gold
    They slaughter to carry on satisfying their desire
    Reaching out thieving hands
    To shackle the land
    But the natives don't lose hope
    They will fight for their freedom and land
    Without the liberty of being able to give up;
    It's do or die
    Flashes of rifle shots tear down lives
    Blood spatters on the dusty ground
    Who are the savages now?

    Bare feet fly through the woods
    The beating of the drums seeming to shatter the Earth's very core
    She knows the path that she must follow
    She has chosen her own destiny
    Flinging herself on the ground between the enemies
    She begs to stop this war

    Reference to independence:
    But the natives don't lose hope
    They will fight for their freedom and land
    Birth stone: Garnet
    Something of value: Gold
    Something that lights up: Rifle shots (old rifles where you have to light a fuse to shoot)
    Synonyms and antonyms: Shackle, freedom, liberty

    Note: Pocahontas is about when men from England sailed over to America to take the gold they thought that the natives had (which they didn't have any of). They planned to kill anyone who stood in their way, and they went to fight the natives but Pocahontas persuaded them not to fight, and the English left in peace.
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    #3 Lantern.

    Was it that long ago I was restricted,
    by soldiers of our country wearing
    badges I turned away from,
    to give my life for another in the womb?

    I now face each storm arising among
    the unpredictable desert winds.
    But I know independence-
    it is unable to be redefined for it
    is our very soul that it exists to shine through.
    Independence, to raise my children
    in soil not bound by regulations as to
    how many breaths can be blossomed
    from our home.

    My daughter's daughter was days
    away from liberation,
    but now she is a lost voice
    still being searched for in lonely
    hours where a hero is needed.

    An emerald stone stood surely around
    her ring finger,
    while time kept guessing when beauty
    would betray a soul striving for
    freedom to be acknowledged,
    as the most beautiful art.

    Confinement. Incarceration. Liberty...
    The chronometer precisely counting
    memories as it stood at the windowsill
    while my granddaughter became Death,
    but not its shadow.

    She was a lightning bug
    caught up 'tween winter's passage,
    and her light is no longer stuck,

    it's burning for all of earth
    to open their eyes and no longer
    settle for making peace
    with darkness.
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    #4 Conversations with Freedom

    The night keeps you fumbling
    on left over portions
    of a conversation, while fireflies
    hang wingless from the moon as it bares
    down upon empty streets.

    There are no footsteps treading the
    corridors of our town, and existence is
    to be kept in the stitches of a duvet,
    between the rubble of our sins,
    and the pages of a passport,
    for we are detained as half baked and impractical,
    yet unfettered are our souls.

    There are moments when we approach
    the thread and ponder on unravelling
    what we cannot express, but our shadows
    drag us back to comforting rooms and
    unopened windows, draped in topaz curtains and
    smudged with urgent fingerprints.

    There is always someone beside you, or half a step behind,
    wedging you in yesterday and the first chapter of independence
    lies unwritten in a suitcase that's yet to be made.

    And the night hides a diamond, but you are oblivious,
    for if you'd touch your skin with love, you'd see
    just how precious you really are.

    You wouldn't stay and let life bound you to the walls.
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    #5 King's Jewels

    They found an emerald
    on the King's crown
    (buried beneath the Earth
    the day he sought liberty)
    glistening - rainbows bouncing
    off the jewels, a royal magician.

    They didn't know he had
    jewels, a quiet man
    who kept to himself, a King
    almost in poverty - forcing
    his servants to leave enough
    elbowroom for him to feel
    the leeway in his decisions.

    Perhaps he had more to hide
    than they realized.

    Independece = Liberty, fleeing, seeking solace.
    Freedom words = liberty, elbowroom, leeway.
    Something of value = crown/jewels
    Birth stone = Emerald (May)
    Something that lights up = Jewels in sunlight

  • Lemon
    11 years ago

    Going to be so hard to pick a vote!