Anyone Please!?

Hey guys! I would really appreciate it if I could get some comments and rates on some of my poems.
Any of them will do. Just want to know what you guys think of my writing.

P.S. I know there are some spelling errors in some but I am still currently going through them all to get the grammar fixed. I just want to know what you think of the poem itself.

Thank You!

P.S. I will return the favor: Kinda like a game:
One poem comment on mine = One poem comment on yours
2=2, 3=3, etc

Reply back here on this post the number of poems and I will do yours!

Lets have a little fun with it!! lol

*~BrittBratt~*

I am gonna comment on one of yours called two little object. Will you comment on my newest one called Rose.

Thank you so much! And I will get to your poem later today. After work lol

Thank you if you do.

I believe i have commented on about 3 of yours. I am planning on commenting on alot more. Your writing is amazing!