DD Challenge Voting :)

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Well done to everyone who submitted poems for this, they are awesome.
    Please read the following poems, and PM me with your vote. I will announce the winner tomorrow night.(Sunday)

    Anyone can vote on this, so please do.

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    #1
    Dry December

    I met you between a pile of snow
    and a man shoveling frozen feelings
    onto a desolated road.

    You were grey grass. The type
    that made man wonder about life,
    but I watched you Tumble off
    into a deep hole where skeletons
    resurrected fear in your broken bones.

    Then you asked,
    Where have my greens gone?

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    #2
    December's Dove

    Your love is a glove
    that catches me when I fall.
    I feel secure. I feel like an ugly duck
    who transforms into dove
    whenever your touch
    makes me fly in love.

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    #3
    Drunk December

    We roasted memories
    inside of a log cabin,
    unaware that the world
    was flirting with tradition.

    We were here first,
    you whisper from your
    meek nest under the
    earth's foundation.

    I reassure you, nothing
    can change that.

    Sunlight filters through
    and snowflakes pat the
    windows though we are alone.
    No one visits or tries to
    understands what a
    humble life means...

    Yet, nothing can depress us.
    Not even this weather or
    those who are more
    intoxicated by a
    modern winter scene.

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    #4
    Damselflies And December

    Memories of
    those Damselflies
    cannot be
    written in a
    beige sand.

    I spent a
    December afternoon
    lost in
    the reminiscences
    of those Damselflies.

    Every December,
    I wait
    to watch
    those Damselflies dance
    to the
    echoes of
    your laughter
    while you
    tell me
    how the
    first snow
    falls over
    where you are.

    Amihan carries
    a story--
    a Tagalog folklore
    that makes me
    envision the
    shapes of
    the things
    to come.

    No matter
    how much
    Mnemosyne
    personifies memories,
    she will
    not be
    able to
    create tragedies
    that can
    make Damselflies
    hibernate in
    the caves
    of your
    long lost
    December reveries.

    The colors
    of those Damselflies
    are stunningly vivid.
    (No one
    would have
    ever thought
    they have undergone
    incomplete metamorphosis)

    In order
    to understand
    how dreams
    are created
    to be distant.
    I will
    continue chasing
    those Damselflies
    and wait for
    the day
    you whisper
    in my ears
    how the
    sun sets
    everytime
    December ends.

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    #5
    Darkened December ( Poetry-Prose, Part 1)

    "Rise up and Touch the Sun," my mother told me as she slid brown bangs-curtain like, out of my face, but I was blanketed with lukewarm thoughts in front a window of nostalgia to even noticed a cup of hots hugs waiting for me in the living room.

    "Hurry up," my siblings shouted
    from across the corridor as my sister whispered beside my mattress, "mom, a book tucks people into bed," but I told my mother while flipping my hair pass below my forehead, "depression does the same without creating fake fantasies in our heads. So perhaps tomorrow, when the sun is out - I'll open that window with optimistic hands, I'll extend my fingers to touch the snow beside the windowsill, and I'll finally feel the ice inside my heart, melt slowly on my skin.

    Until then, if you don't mind, I'll just sleep. "

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    #6
    December in Damascus

    Perhaps I had become
    immune to inclement
    weather. After all,
    I've lived most of my life
    dodging blizzards of bullets,
    taking shelter as shrapnel
    plummeted streets,
    streets where fear flooded gutters
    and blood froze drains.

    I vaguely remember
    that hail is a small lump of ice
    that stings the skin
    when it hits.
    Hail has long taken on
    another meaning for me.

    So, when snow falls
    on the streets of Damascus
    it is eyed with suspicion.

    This white powder that
    spreads so silently...is it
    a form of white torture?

    And, I hold my breath
    and wait...

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    #7
    December Dalliance

    and...

    there you were,
    ice-skates at angles
    I didn't think possible,
    arms flailing as you
    headed straight towards me

    then...

    CRASH! THUD!

    as a tangle of arms
    and legs came together
    in an unsophisticated ball
    of human limbs

    then...

    as you stuttered your
    apology and tried to
    regain your composure,
    while offering me an
    unsteady hand you said

    "Please...let me buy you
    a drink to heat you up".

    An afternoon of hot chocolate
    and cake followed as we
    chatted, flirted and
    grazed hands
    more times than one

    but...

    as the long shadows
    of bleak afternoon sun
    crept behind rooftops
    and evening's chill appeared
    we both knew it was
    time to part

    and...

    as gloves and scarves
    were pulled into place
    and you helped me
    on with my coat
    your hand brushed
    my cheek as you said...

    "Well, we certainly broke the ice in more ways than one"

    and...

    as our eyes locked for the
    last time I thought

    "I don't even know your name"...

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    #8
    Drunk in December

    I'm not a vagabond, from far away
    you would die to be my home,
    hold me in your arms,
    yet I express myself in rags;
    I still see my clothesline when I
    breathe against the window,
    and its lack of wavering fabric
    wasn't made for Christmas lights.

    I know my love for you is sober,
    and I know I need wine for fuel,
    to ask you if I'm pretty,
    eyes dazzled by possibiility.

    I would grasp onto you
    as if begging for coins
    just to lose them in a well.
    I would latch all of my sorrows
    onto your lips, if only
    to silence my cries.

    But December has sent me
    too many invitations, and
    I don't want you to be
    another tourniquet.

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    #9
    December Determinant

    End of year retrospective
    but expect no bargains
    for this purchase costs
    greater now than before:
    what have you become
    In the past twelve months?

    Have you invested your values
    or squandered the year
    running with the red queen?
    Given lip service to world
    grief while stashing goodies
    to snack on during movies?

    No one ever died a death
    more inglorious than sitting
    before a television choking
    in their lazy boy recliner;
    no one missed more than
    the kid who helped out.

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    #10
    Derelict December

    Partly because I couldn't be drawn to care,
    and partly because my bed is warm
    I didn't go to class today.
    Forgive me.
    I awoke to warm sweat between my toes,
    a languid sweetness of body that conjured rest,
    that forbade the stark intensity of sky, and wind, and winter.
    The frozen grass by my doorstep was impenetrable,
    the squirrels and birds, those malignant
    demons of sound, couldn't rouse me from my nest.
    Forgive me.
    I am comfortably timid and bent in silent reverie,
    I am weak and easily swayed
    by the will of blankets.

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    #11
    Dead by December

    Beneath my ribs, an intrinsic understanding of
    warm muscle, steady breath...
    an elegant shifting of life
    that draws me ever forward and down,
    cradling and insistent.
    But what I wouldn't give to be still
    as the cracked ice on dead grass,
    to expand and grow like crystalline frost
    on a window, to fall fearless and
    cold, like snowflakes to a drift,
    lifeless and glittering
    under distant stars.

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    GOOD LUCK ALL xxx

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    Excited to start reading these, great work everyone!

  • Beautiful Soul
    10 years ago

    These are great poems well done everyone

  • Hannah Lizette
    10 years ago

    A really hard choice to pick my favorite! All are truly awesome, great job! :)