Need a Comment?

Hi guys! If anyone wants a reader or a comment on a piece, let me know. I'm happy to offer insight or revision help too. Tell me which pieces you want me to read and leave a link. :)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1230382

Please and thank you :)

This one if you don't mind:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1229939

thank you in advance

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1230394

Thanks. :)

Beautiful Soul and Everlasting, I did both of yours! I hope my comments were helpful, please take them with a grain of salt and use what you want. :)

I'll read Love Letters today!
Feel free to send me any other pieces you want read. :)

Thank you! I loved your comment very much :)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1230456

Thanks :-D

I haven't figured out how to copy & paste on my phone, lol so I cant provide a link.. but my newest piece is called Deterioration. Thanks so much if you get the chance to take a look at it! :)

Plz rate and comment any poem u want

That tis very noble of you
could you read all my poems?? They are only 240. If you do that for me I promise to write more poems.

Any of my formed poetry please :3

Hello, I am new and would appreciate any comments that you may have on my writings. Presently I have posted 4 poems. Thank You

My Newest one and I bearly got my phone on Friday so beats me how to copy and paste my link but please and thank you