Title Toss Voting

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Please read the following poems, and then PM me with the poem you want to win.

    Well done to all who submitted a poem, and thank you to all those who vote.

    Good luck!

    I will post for voting Sunday night, if I have enough votes! PLEASE VOTE!

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    #1
    Choices that we made

    I have never known
    the life, as time had gone.
    If ever you had been there,
    Would you have known?
    I lay awake all night,
    and think of it, we might
    have made our own ways,
    through the choices we made.
    If ever I knew all this,
    was ever right for us-
    the life we live here,
    Is it a fake or a dream?
    If it's all a fake,
    then I would want to dream,
    for I never want us,
    to pull apart from each other,
    for all the choices we made.
    But then, when I wake up,
    I face the reality and realize,
    that the time had really gone,
    and life has become a tyranny-
    a filthy truth, that reflects
    yourself in me,
    for all the choices that we made.
    Now I know better,
    the life we chose for us,
    was nothing but,
    just an ugly truth.
    Even then I wish,
    it to be a dream,
    for all the choices, we haven't made.

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    #2
    Travelling Through Tears

    Ah I found you,
    in a sea of salts; in the tears of your eyes!
    I found you.
    There was a tiny drop, a dew of hope
    that I kissed good bye;
    A good bye to remain on my lips
    when I kissed your cheek,
    And now, you are mine.

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    #3
    Something is Missing

    Something is missing in this room,
    the windows are open - with curtains
    that slide to the presence of the sun.
    My day starts. My bed is made.
    I am dressed. I'm soon to walk away.
    Into the kitchen, I have breakfast.
    Every one else had left.
    I do dishes. I clean the house.
    I prepare dinner.
    Every one else comes back.
    I'm soon to walk away.
    Into my room, I write. Then I read :
    "Something is missing in this room,
    the windows are open - with curtains
    that slide to the presence of the sun.
    My day starts. My bed is made.
    I am dressed. I'm soon to walk away.
    Into the kitchen, I have breakfast.
    Every one else had left.
    I do dishes. I clean the house.
    I prepare dinner.
    Every one else comes back.
    I'm soon to walk away.
    Into my room, I write. Then I read :
    Something is missing in this room,

    Is it you?"

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    #4
    Home sick

    Does the dog miss
    the stick or the caster,
    or could it be this
    longing to return
    to the master?
    Have you ever
    had the blues
    When you finally
    had to choose
    to leave your home
    to go out and roam,
    and get home sick.
    You just could not kick
    that lonesome feeling
    that had you reeling.

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    #5
    Daylight

    Daylight is a gift
    that often comes
    to give us a lift
    after our darkest
    hours

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    #6
    I See that Thing in your Eyes

    I wonder why. I wonder why.
    Is that I see that thing in your eyes?
    It's something bright. Oh bright,
    like a child that studies in kindergarden.
    And the bell rings. And the child sings,
    while a mother taps her feet in a hurry.
    Look at the street. Look at her hips.
    Is it the way her skirt swirls?
    Is it the way she walks with a swing?
    Or perhaps, is it the way she smiles
    when her child hugs her back?

    Oh I wonder why. I wonder why.
    Is that I see that thing in your eyes?
    It's something bright. Oh bright,
    like a lamppost in the night, like the light
    in the cars when people drive. When people arrive
    Home. And they laugh. And they dance.
    Hear the music. Hear the conversations.
    Is it the pitch in their voice?
    Is it the way their mouth moves?
    Or perhaps, is it the way they hug
    when they arrive, when they say goodbye?

    Oh I wonder why. I wonder why.
    Is that I see that thing in your eyes?
    It's something bright. Oh bright.
    Is it the beauty of life?

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    #7
    Basket of Muffins

    A basket of muffins
    good enough to eat
    in my hungry mind
    does not seem complete.
    Though full of maple
    and honey so sweet,
    not the kind of staple
    that can really compete
    with togetherness
    which is concrete.
    I honestly confess.

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    #8
    Love's Enduring Promise

    Love's Enduring Promise
    an entity does care.
    Even when it seems
    no one is there.
    The anchor will hold.
    The spirit is in the air.
    Love need not be bold.
    Love need not be rare.
    In order to receive
    Love must give.
    in order to relieve
    that spirit must live.

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    #9
    Murder by Midnight

    Murder by Midnight
    acquitted by dawn.
    All common sense
    seems to have gone
    Many victims take
    their last breath
    while often hearts ache
    in this culture of death

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    #10

    In search of the past - I came across something
    wicked, a secret passageway to empty void of
    my heart that yearns to be filled and distracted
    from the harshness of reality.

    The air we breathe was once filled the pain of grief;
    you were once looking for love in the midst of daylight
    - homesick from the chilling world of empty ghosts of
    wanderlust.

    and that's when I first set eyes upon you
    (whether it was a choice or an act of god,
    I lost control of my emotions and fell
    for you).

    Like a basket of muffins - my heart was
    ready for easy pickings.

    You were like a volcano in New York -
    the hearts of many you captivated but they
    were accompanied with the thoughts of
    survival (you had a tendency of burning
    everyone that braved the boundaries and
    waited for you to come around).

    I was naive - a child at heart to think that
    love's enduring promise would satisfy
    my whims. It was only after a drunken
    fight that I realized while justice sleeps
    that you were seeking murder by midnight.

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    Only by travelling through tears had I been able
    to pen the expressions that lingers in my heart so
    please excuse my writing.

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    #11
    Labyrinth

    Please excuse my writing, I'm so home sick and
    tired of traveling through tears in this world
    of empty ghosts in search of the past;
    we're all looking for love, or at least
    love's enduring promise: its cornucopia,
    blessings handed out with a basket of muffins
    as we ignore the pain of grief - love's heartburn.

    It's our choice, our own free will;
    it's in our control, and I won't blame it
    on an act of god, like something wicked,
    like a seething volcano in New York,
    covering the desperate lovers in Central Park
    stumbling in drunken fights of who loves most,
    setting fire to the air we breathe - God's murder
    of all worthy sinners by midnight flows of lava
    while justice sleeps through the daylight hours.

    But you! You can show me the secret passageway
    through which we can escape our past
    without straying too far into a future
    preconceived without our present consent.

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    #12
    Please excuse my Writing

    Please excuse my Writing
    The oxymoron I'm citing
    is the poet in a box
    afraid of the paradox
    of escaping, the run
    of the mill for one,
    secondly individuality,
    thirdly a formality
    of a fourth dimension
    I often dare to mention.

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    #13
    The pain of grief

    In search of the past;
    Daylight, traveling through tears
    While justice sleeps

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    #14
    Home sick

    please Excuse my Writing,
    the air We breathe
    was murder by midnight!

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    #15
    Looking for Love

    Looking for Love
    in a fair face,
    I have looked above
    praying for grace,
    Angels were sent
    some passed me by.
    Where have they went,
    up in the sky,
    on a high cloud
    where I'd be proud,
    to look for love?

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    #16
    Travelling Through Tears

    In journeys through the years,
    we have shed a few tears
    on the echo of fears
    the silent night hears.
    Thoughts on destination
    we have shed a few tears,
    praying for salvation.
    Did some of us take time
    to see reasons for rain
    or search for the sublime
    in the midst of our pain?
    Did some of us take time
    In journeys through the years,
    to make it not in vain
    in journeys through the years?

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    #17
    While Justice Sleeps

    While Justice Sleeps mothers weep,
    praying for the violence to cease
    Their sons and daughters seem to sleep
    as loved ones also long the rest in peace.
    Something wicked in the air we breathe
    laced with smoke from a fire
    may cause anger to seethe.
    What does divine justice require?
    I rest my case with a sad face
    as cowards stand their ground
    While Justice Sleeps mothers weep,
    where harmony can't be found
    will the violence ever cease?

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    #18

    Murder by Midnight with a Basket of muffins

    She stood under a light
    within a dingy city,
    she called home,
    holding a basket of muffins
    as the moon kissed her softly.

    The sapphire specs of her iris's
    were enhanced by the waiting,
    anticipation is a killer of love
    within the deep, depths of
    midnight.

    He whispered muffins were his favorite
    a year or so ago, and soon they would
    embrace over food and her loving eyes
    would seal the kiss they both had longed for.

    Her tattered stockings had warn during the light of day,
    for alzheimers alters her thinking and concept of time,
    but she waited every year-

    Under the moon, at midnight, with muffins-
    and the forgotten memory of the murder that took
    place before their meeting and greeting of a love
    never to be born.

    A womb of sacred thoughts comes alive when the heart is lost in a world of confusion.

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  • Beautiful Soul
    10 years ago

    Great poems all!

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    Nice job!

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    Voting!

  • Larry Chamberlin
    10 years ago

    Good works!

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Only 6 votes in?? I need more please. You know you want to... please xxxxxxx

    Will leave this open until tomorrow night. xx

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    If you don't vote, you won't matter!

    ^ whoever said that.... does it apply in this thread?

  • Larry Chamberlin
    10 years ago

    If there are 18 poems in there ought to be at least 18 votes.
    Come on people, even if you vote for yourself, someone will win (cause I did not vote for mine).

    Remember Pirates III?

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    8 votes in, but we have a tie.

    I am definitely closing this tonight, so if no one else votes, we will just have a draw win.

    Remember, you can vote even if you didn't write a poem for it. xx