TEAM TWO'S THREAD

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

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    NARPH
    POTP
    AMREEN
    EVERLASTING

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    1. haiku/senryu
    2. poem about hunting/ or fishing
    3. poem with 28-30 syllables.
    4. Winter
    5. 6 lines
    6. WILD CARD (any poem)
    7. Include the words... "the new girl/guy"
    8. a life jacket

    Use the prompts however you want to. As long as your poem includes the prompt, or hints at the prompt, it will be accepted.

    Good luck.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    In the wilderness,
    a duck landing, ducks bullets;
    a fisherman bleeds

  • Narph
    10 years ago

    #2
    tuna's in the wet,
    scales slipping in the sea
    the net hitched, the breath the breath
    pushing from the light.
    tuna's in a bucket
    scales splinter sun from sea
    the gills splayed the gills the gills
    heavy liquid fight.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #3

    This classroom is a playroom,
    the teacher said with gloom.
    I want it to be more like a courtroom,
    But What should I do?

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #4

    He has hidden himself from me,
    tangled in flannel sheets and
    marshmallow dreams.
    Spring gives birth to peonies
    and wild daisies,
    yet he still exists,
    only poking his head out
    to verify that his heart is
    frigid and that the world
    cannot be this warm.

    I stay miles away,
    trying not to be affected
    by his gloom...
    though I am reminded
    of his scent, of peppermint
    and bergamot
    that linger during March.

    He is nicknamed winter,
    yet it is I who has become
    frosted.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #5

    This contest is a test that I can digest,
    though I must confess, that it feels like a quest.
    Can I suggest to not take a rest?
    But if you must, please ignored my request.
    We have no one to impress, I must attest.
    This is a matter of expressing what we feel in our chest.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #6

    No words to ease this headache.
    Ache ache ache,
    my head aches
    when my many failures
    are signals you receive
    twenty miles away.
    The radio and the clock
    chase each other down
    corridors,
    and I am translated
    in fragments.
    Ache ache ache
    until I can't think
    for you or me.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    # 7

    The new girl here, sits in her chair;
    in front of a desk that creaks and creaks.
    It creaks like hard-wooden stairs
    that squeak and squeak
    as her brother's feet step the stairs
    to be near her.

    She sits and writes before he arrives.
    And with a pen in hand, she smiles.
    Though at times, she cries and writes.
    Believing no one sees her.

    But as her brother comes near her room
    The desk creaks and creaks
    and the stairs squeak and squeak
    Yet she writes and cries,
    Believing no one sees her.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #8

    You are the water, I am the land.
    Boats sneak past your conscious
    while I am too shy to venture out.
    Life has been guarded for me,
    as two feet that travel in sure steps
    for I am versed in sand and shore,
    not in the swaying movement of waves.
    Yet you always try to persuade me,
    spitting out a life jacket
    because you know I cannot keep
    myself afloat.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #1

    a man licks his lips
    at the kids across the street;
    hand closes shutters

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #2

    On a Maryland lake,
    you and I fished for
    opportunity-
    the sun beamed
    happiness
    while we sat
    on opposite sides
    of a rowboat,
    learning patience
    and virtue.
    We cast our lines
    and the hooks dipped
    into water,
    where we deceived
    the innocent silver
    bodies.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #3

    as the night sets,
    He, the moon, drank stars
    till full.

    as the day came
    She, the girl, watched the moon
    from her room, in the afternoon.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #4

    We made snow angels on that
    Christmas eve,
    pretending we were eternal-
    made of fairy dust that would
    waltz on our eyelashes,
    and breathe spirit
    into our senile hearts.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #5.

    6 lines of people, people wearing suits
    everyone stares at their watch
    Time ticks and tocks, their glasses fall.
    They are blind, blind, blind...
    I see the train arrive, old man stands
    tattered clothes, he smiles.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #6

    Energized, you made me feel energized-
    radioactive spiders crawled within me
    and caffeine spiked my veins.
    Soon, I was racing toward heaven,
    climbing a 30-story building
    in order to jump the night,
    startle it, and fly to tomorrow.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #7

    In the neighborhood, the new guy skateboards.
    Every girl, watches. Every child, watches.
    He skates and skates feelings in them.
    Up and down.
    Up and down, the feelings go.
    "He is cool. He is not."
    The new guy falls. Everyone laughs.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #8

    She was the girl everyone recognized
    twenty years after high school,
    the hands they knew healed grudges,
    the eyes that would speak of kindness.
    Yet, her funeral is today.
    Her coffin is unrecognizable as flowers
    weep in all directions, stems holding each other
    and petals tearing up.

    The world was waiting for someone like her,
    and she was waiting for someone to save her...
    For God to send down a life jacket,
    one that would ensure safety around her
    thoughts, instead of her

    unpredictable subconscious.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #1

    a cellphone vibrates;
    driving to the hospital
    a future father

  • Narph
    10 years ago

    #2
    when the tree fell,
    the forest didn't cry out
    or taste the metallic
    earth seeping by the roots.
    nor later did the forest cry,
    though it certainly heard
    the bullet screaming
    through the air
    the thickness amassing
    by the ferns.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #3

    Rain-soaked operators
    have left my machinery
    slick-
    my soul has become
    rusty,
    a hurricane without incentive.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #4

    There's a ball of snow in her hand,
    where she feels the ice burn her skin.
    flakes touch ground
    flakes touch ground

    Pines are covered in white.
    a robin nestled in a branch, flies.

    She feels bless
    She feels bless
    with the spirit of Christmas in her chest.

    A voice calls out her name,
    She looks left. She looks right.
    The street is a ghost at night.
    A lamp flickers atop her head.
    She looks up. She looks down.
    Her shadow showcases her silhouette.
    The snow in the ground mounts her feet.
    A voice calls out her name.

    Flakes touch ground
    Flakes touch ground

    The ball of snow falls off her hand.

  • Narph
    10 years ago

    #5
    There once was a man
    who had only one nostril,
    no other nostril could one see.
    But lucky was he, for no other
    could sneeze with such
    elegant accuracy.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #6

    Wild like a lion:
    untamed, fierce, hungry.
    He roars. He roars.

    I made him french toasts.

    But he wants meat!

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #7

    The new girl levitates;
    she floats in crowded hallways
    and never manages to
    cause a scream.
    High school is a new skin
    she must wear,
    without any excuses to escape.
    The new girl is already a ghost
    in this abused town,
    unable to be remembered
    at seventeen years old.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #8

    You said:

    I'm the ocean, I'm the ocean!
    And you are, you are a castaway,
    In me, you'll drown in.
    soon
    soon

    You said:

    "I'm the ocean, I'm the ocean!
    Alas, do not resist."

    I say:

    You are the ocean. You are the ocean.
    Sure, I'm a castaway.
    But he, he, he is my life jacket.
    He saves me from your shallow depths.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #1

    Senryu

    Pleading for your grace
    on an old telephone line,
    when nobody's home.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #2

    Ravens croak their flight deep into the mountains,
    hound dogs sniff deers from afar the distance.
    A riffle shoots.
    It shoots and kills tranquility off a forest.
    Waterfalls mourn.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #3

    You are needed on this Earth,
    so riot against the habits
    that mar your true character.

    You are not a pattern.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #4

    His character was Winter, cold, too cold.
    but his heart was home:
    warm like his hands, warm like his touch.

    I had to knock his door
    I had to knock his door

    To refuge myself from the blizzards of love.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #5

    Intense are your eyes,
    gleaming behind spectacles,
    distraught by the sounds
    moaning from the alleyways.
    Your world is not mine,
    your fear is not what I know.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    # 6

    You are a blade for crimes:
    too sharp, too sharp.
    But not too sharp to cut deep flesh
    and get away
    without leaving at least
    a single trace of blood.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #7

    The new guy doesn't remember any of their names.
    He doesn't choose to.
    He calls them friends, but in reality, they are victims.
    Each day his neighbors receive an invitation written
    from a dusty typewriter.
    But not just any neighbor,
    the ones who have harassed him, embarrassed him
    with stares that harden his face.
    They don't know what's he's been through
    yet they ruin the town with tales of his dirty culture,
    arriving at his apartment for dinner, perfectly on time...
    and they don't leave until the EMTs' have confirmed they are no longer living.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #8

    footprints on the sand;
    a life jacket lies forgotten
    on the shoreline

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #1

    Midnight will combust
    when humanity becomes
    scared of transitions.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #2

    May be, it was the smell of food from yesterday.
    May be, it was the hunger in me..

    that I hunted and I hunted the pantry for cereal.
    that I fished and I fished a bowl with milk to catch some cereal.

    But the hunter and fisherman in me, had no skills.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #3

    Gas station blues-
    the lights weren't Vegas
    though I filled
    the tank all the way
    in hopes
    of a new cross country
    adventure.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #4 Winter

    it must be your hands,
    the bubbles in the chocolate at brewing point,
    the taste of warmness dispersing through my bones,
    the feeling in my chest like this is home,
    the calmness radiated from your lips
    when all I do is watch you...

    It must be your hands,
    the condiments tossed on a soup
    the vegetables in the cutting board
    the food you cook,
    when all I do is watch you...

    It must be your kind hands,
    that welcomed me into your kitchen,
    that greeted me in this cold winter,
    without you even asking my name.

    if it's not,
    I don't know...

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #5

    You smeared her mascara,
    inspired in her a new parasite
    until everything about you became
    a twisted romance;
    you wanted what lovers drank to,
    to never remember the awful yesterdays.

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    #6

    letters bounce off the lines of my notepad.
    I rubbed my eyes. But I'm too tired.
    keyboard good night, I'll see you
    when sleep no longer makes me blind.

  • Poet on the Piano
    10 years ago

    #7

    Every childhood memory you battled.
    Each read like a horror story never finished,
    an abandoned house you could never
    warm up to.

    Two doors down, you listen to a voice.
    A song, for the first time in decades.
    It is neither happy nor sad,
    and the emotions intrigue you
    as feelings flood your soul-
    you are no longer numb.

    The new girl,
    becomes your rescue.