Prompt Voting

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Hi everyone, well done to everyone for submitting all of your poems.
    Everyone can vote for this, whether you have submitted a poem, or not.

    Please read all of the poems below, and PM me with your votes. Please vote for 1 poem for each day, so you should send me 4 votes in total.. such as:

    Monday - poem 1
    Tuesday - poem 2
    Wednesday- poem 3
    Thursday - poem 4

    I will leave voting open today and tomorrow, and Post the 4 winners on Sunday morning, which I will then take to another vote.

    Thank you xx

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    MONDAY POEMS

    #1
    Despondency:

    8 AM always comes around too soon,
    it's never enough time to organize
    his perfectionist mind. Last night was
    another struggle and unwritten pages
    are still left burning inside a poet's
    heart. There is always so much to
    do for everyone, everyday. But while a
    shade of yellow blesses the world, he'll
    be living in the darkness of despondency.

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    #2
    A Poet's Lament

    No amount of sweat, tears or blood
    can ease the blues of this poet
    for thoughts and words may flood
    but in setting them down I blow it.

    Perfectionist that I am sees jumble
    where in my head was beautiful rhyme
    the trouble causing me to grumble
    is overworking 'til I'm out of time.

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    #3
    untitled

    In the colorful spectrum of ability
    the Creator God gives to each entity
    at the time of conception to birth
    rainbows connecting mankind to earth
    It is black and white on reflection
    and all in between to perfection
    To be a poet inspired by a poetess
    is to reach for blue skies for progress
    A true perfectionist is rarely ever satisfied
    So we work tirelessly in order to be pacified

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    #4

    The Lady with the Seven Scarves

    When the cock crows, a woman springs out of a
    borrowed mattress, to sing her way into morning.
    She humbly duets with the city pavements as they
    gleam in fresh raindrops, adoring how water splashes
    on bare skin and leaves a scent where she
    can breathe anew.
    Setting up her table across from the Basilica of Saint Francis,
    her neck carries seven silk scarves her father collected
    from Italian Baroque streets.
    And as hungry hearts wake to a tangerine horizon,
    and eyes drink fresh sunlight, she becomes a poetess,
    a perfectionist who must arrange colors with rhythm
    and dignity.

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    #5
    Flower Poetry (Petals and Thorns)

    I was born a poet
    And, as a young child,
    I would pick words like flowers
    Contorting them, absentmindedly
    Into little woven chaplets
    Of pinks, blues and yellows
    Which I would wear as my crown
    As I danced in sunlight,
    Grass kissing my naked feet

    But the poet grew
    And so did her ambition
    I became a perfectionist
    Cutting myself on splinters
    As I wove my crown of thorns
    Words became my tomb
    And I, my tyrant
    Because nothing that I create
    Can ever be the perfection that I crave

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    TUESDAY'S POEMS:

    #1
    Untitled

    Dreams, soft as tissue
    gently fade and disappear
    as summer ends

    and

    my head doth bow
    as a sleepy daffodil
    in anticipation
    of sombre days

    yet...

    as I scatter the confetti
    of your farewell note
    amongst autumn's
    drifting leaves
    likening the tree's
    naked outstretched limbs
    to my own empty arms

    I realise I am sharing
    this approaching barren winter
    with mother...

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    #2

    Your Promise

    She wore your promise like a rose pinned to her breast
    "He will come back to me" she'd tell her friends over
    and over
    As they looked at her pityingly

    She would smile brightly at the people she passed in the street
    But her smile was always artificial,
    too wide, too bright
    And the colour of her shiny pink lipstick matched that of the strawberry milkshake
    That she would slurp as she sat in the cafe that you would take her to
    when you said she'd been working too hard

    But when the letter came telling her that you weren't coming home,
    her plastic smile finally broke
    And no amount of tissues could hold back the torrent that she'd been holding back
    for so long

    When the tears had finally subsided, from under soaked lashes,
    She looked upon your picture where you stood so tall and proud in your uniform
    A smile upon your face and the familiar sparkle in your eyes
    and she whispered
    "You lied"

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    #3

    Forever mine:

    Words are hushed by the stunning
    beauty of a Rose I call my love.
    Temptation makes our hearts dance
    the tango, especially tonight. I write
    a small letter saying this day will
    change our lives. Getting the box of tissues read, I embrace her and ask
    "will you be forever mine?"

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    #4
    Dried Tears

    The post came that morning;
    my mom sat at the kitchen table
    tears streaming down her face
    with a letter opened before her.

    Aghast, I asked what was the matter.
    Folding up a tissue she stood,
    it held a dried pressed forget-me-not,
    I laid my hand on her face, fearful.

    Father came home that night,
    held her long in his arms, tightly,
    yet neither said a word, to this day
    the mystery has never been revealed.

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    #5
    untitled

    Your hands were a native
    coral, as you spoke diligently
    to an aged typewriter,
    egging it on and on
    through Poseidon's tempest
    and Apollo's flares
    that brought the sun
    to a boiling point inside your
    skin.

    You harbored a voice as
    fragrant as a peony,
    typing a letter to
    your future lover,
    hoping she would
    never dig up
    tissue after tissue
    that littered your
    den...

    for you could not
    tear up the petals,
    and you could not
    silence the tear ducts.

    Your heart was a
    mourning river
    the Styx could never
    heal.

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    WEDNESDAY'S POEMS:

    #1
    Shedding My Old Skin

    I used to hate the mirror and love the scars
    A symbol of my own self-loathing

    I kept myself a slave to depression
    and wrote off my own future
    Nothing I did back then would have been good enough
    But it was my choice to be blind

    Eventually I
    shook off the shadows
    And picked up my battered and bruised smile,
    dusted it off
    And held my head high

    For so long I had blamed the world for my unhappiness
    Convinced myself that it was someone else's mistake that had left me
    in tears, time and time again
    But all I needed to do was to let myself heal

    My scars became silver strands
    like spider webs draped across my arm
    Laid out neatly for anyone who looked too closely to see
    A window to my past

    I don't hold them with the same reverence I used to
    Whereas once I wore them as medals of honour
    ("Look at what I've been through")
    they are now just an anchor to a time I'd rather forget

    For my life has moved on, times are happier now
    I live rainbow years
    after my years of rain

    I look upon my own face and see my eyes glisten with hope
    I was wrong to write myself off for I have potential
    I am beautiful

    My life is different now
    I love the mirror, but hate my scars

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    #2
    You are worth more:

    Get out of bed, a scar is just a scar when
    your arms hold someone else's mistake.
    Imperfections are a mirrors best friend
    but they are what make you beautiful.

    Don't ever doubt you are worthless
    to a society that wants you to be sad.
    Rise above all the negative words
    their tongues spew, they are the lonely one's.

    Don't give up because you are so much
    more, it's your life to live. Though
    sometimes I understand how you feel
    but just know, you will never be alone.

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    #3
    untitled

    I didn't carve this on my thighs,
    I did
    not.
    My hands are tied behind my back,
    my mind does not rebuke my heart,
    it only recalls what once was advocated
    as truth.
    I couldn't have.
    I could
    not.
    But I peek back,
    again and again and
    again.
    The mirror is objective,
    it reflects reality-
    this scar is an implication
    of someone else's mistake.

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    #4

    Mea Culpa

    This mirror lies, it is a false witness
    for it shows my chest whole and clear
    without revealing the scar showing
    my heart was torn out right here.

    You always said that you'd be there
    yet never could put it into something
    more than just words, loving actions
    were foreign and now you're nothing.

    Here I stand empty where you stole
    my future blaming it as just a break;
    but now I know better it was not you,
    it was someone else's mistake.

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    THURSDAY'S POEMS:

    #1
    The Wait

    He sips his coffee
    Staring out of the window
    As planes zoom by, taking people off to exciting places

    He reaches again into his coat pocket
    Lets his fingers brush the smooth surface of the ticket
    Just to check that it's still there

    His eyes wander to the clock,
    Slowly follow the second hand as it tick-tick-ticks
    His heartbeat seeming to fall into its rhythm

    A minute later, forgetting that he's already looked at the clock,
    He checks his watch
    It's two minutes slower

    In another five minutes, he checks his phone, ten more minutes left
    And one new message: "Where are you?"
    Sent from Amanda at 2:47

    He switches the phone off;
    He has a new chance at life now
    And, shrugging his coat on over the bruises
    He goes to take it

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    #2
    Second chances:

    Airplane tickets bought,
    waiting is the hardest part,
    nervous heartbeats race.

    Flight numbers are called,
    am I making a mistake?
    No turning back now.

    Baggage in the past
    will be left at this airport.
    Time to take a chance.

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    #3
    Outward Bound

    She took no chance with the security line
    clutching her ticket between her teeth
    she dumped everything she carried
    on the belt and into the x-ray machine

    As she raised her hands over her head
    the detector scanned her - she worried:
    could it sense a quickened heartbeat?
    Please, just let her get to the gate.

    Just like that she was through it all
    slipping on her shoes and her belt
    picking up her bag and racing away
    only to find the plane had left her behind.

    Soul heavy she turned to find an agent
    maybe another flight, another time
    then she saw him, bag over his shoulder -
    "I wouldn't leave without you."

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    #4
    untitled

    I grasped the rectangular ticket to Seattle
    with all the strength I had ever built up-
    strangers cuddled their phones to their
    chests like lovers and I could swear, I saw
    a child trying to signal goodbye to her
    imaginary friend. The air is musty, two day
    old hair and well-worn clothes marking us all
    as travelers. Yet it is in this where our
    heartbeats learn to love even more profoundly,
    taking a chance on an undiscovered life.

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  • Beautiful Soul
    10 years ago

    Great poems all and thank for this challenge saffie <3

  • Hannah Lizette
    10 years ago

    Beautiful pieces, great job everyone!

  • Beautiful Soul
    10 years ago

    Voted

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Only 4 people have voted??

    Posting the winners in the morning, so if you haven't voted, please do so quick!

    xx

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Vote people!!!!!!!!!

  • Beautiful Soul
    10 years ago

    Is there another tie?

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Yes, but there has only been 5 people voting. I thought more people would have voted??? I will post the results tomorrow morning, regardless of if there is a tie or not.

    Sorry to everyone who has participated in this, it always comes down to lack of voting lately for some reason?

    Thank you to all who has voted :)

  • Beautiful Soul
    10 years ago

    Okay.. you're welcome though. Thank you for the challenge

  • Everlasting
    10 years ago

    :)