I am trying to improve my writing...

Hey, i dont mean to be a burden or anything, but im kind of stuck right now, i write soooooooo much poetry and most of it is just venting my feelings so its not written well. I am going through so much stuff right now, and writing is my only escape. i dont really know how else i would get my feelings out. i want everything to be honest, because i beleive that i really need the advice to improve.o if you could please read some of my poems and give me advice to help me become a better writer, i would appreciate it so much.
~thanks

Write different mediums.

Stories are a huge release. They can be true, honest, comlete fabrications of anything, bare faced lies, horrific, sad, joyous and momentous.

Diaries or journals are great for keeping the pen moving or keys tapping and is a great way to keep yourself honest.

Thanks Mally

i really appreciated that. :)

I think it would be better to put your works that consist mainly of venting into a Weblog, or some kind of journal, like Bret said.