Title Toss Voting :)

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Well, here are all the poems from the challenge. Please read each one, and PM me with your 2 votes. Example:

    1st - poem 1
    2nd - poem 2

    Your 1st vote will get 10 points, and 2nd vote will get 5 points. So please make sure you all vote twice!

    Voting closes Saturday night, and I will announce winner on Sunday.

    Good luck all.
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    #1
    In Time

    In time just like a clock on the wall
    our batteries too will die,
    And there will be no more ticking
    Nor tocking... just a clock on the wall
    That people will watch
    And wonder, is this the right time?

    But when is the right time?
    if not when its batteries are fully charge?
    that the clock creates in minds
    The illusion that any hour, is indeed the right time!

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    #2
    Years of silence

    I had enjoyed the peace
    before my head was overflowing
    with so much thoughts.

    My secret is echoing on
    the tip of my tongue
    wanting to scream out to
    be heard.

    The helpless silence of
    reality lies still like a
    blackout.

    All these years of silence
    wants my voice to be
    finally heard.

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    #3
    Shelter From The Storm

    Smokey
    grey clouds
    blanketed the sky
    overshadowing me promising
    a torrential wet and gloomy rainfall
    I stopped to put up my shelter that would protect me from the drizzle.
    And
    then
    after
    A
    Rain-
    bow
    forms
    with
    all
    its
    vibrance

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    #4
    A Husband's Appreciation

    She has borne up with my idiocies
    for years of silence, muted
    due to her love of my greater being,
    which, at times, it seemed
    only she could see.

    It is because of my cognizance
    of this plain fact that I try to act
    in ever decreasing stupidity
    hoping to live up to her belief
    in who I might become.

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    #5
    The Incomplete Poetry

    Today, I decided to write about you
    and tell the world
    what you mean to me.

    --

    We were together,
    a hundred memories before,
    but out of sight doesn't always mean
    out of mind- at least when its you!
    Still, I thought words would bottle
    every fragrance of yours
    within a poetry which belonged to us
    and that I would leave it behind
    as a remembrance of our incomplete story.
    But, the paper was scribbled with
    pointless circles and incomplete words

    .

    .

    .

    Emotions sometimes are too shy to speak!

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    #6
    Empty Eyes

    Stare at a white ceiling
    Not seeing not hearing
    Just looking at nothing
    but one thing
    Death

    God embraced another soul
    Welcoming His child
    Once again He said
    "Welcome home child"

    Red roses bloomed
    On the day Death held his hand out
    To a child of five & said
    "Take my hand the pain is gone now"
    Letting the body to stare at nothing
    But the soul saw everything

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    #7
    In Time

    One will join humanity
    While another fares ado to the
    position they held
    Grace will not be in a farewell,

    Years can go by yet none see the value
    of past moments
    Hearing now to the history of yesterday
    Is never quite enough

    Birthing & dying is all the same
    Ying &yang in everything
    Time comes when you see
    In time & wave your hand

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    #8
    The men in green

    she was afraid of the men in green
    during the years of silence:
    their truth was made of stainless steel and bodies.
    (And her heart was too small
    to understand darkness)

    One pallid day, they kidnapped hell,
    creating a new order for the lambs,
    after the march of the hundred thousand.
    it was 1968 and life was censored.

    whenever she looks back in time,
    there is a girl reading in the shadows,
    feeding her demons, dreading the light.
    but the men in green are still there,
    asking the same question
    she can't answer.
    So, tell me you now.
    you who were brought up
    in the dark:
    what are wings for when
    you long forgot how to fly?

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    #9
    Alpha & Omega

    From the Alpha in a fraternity
    to pointless circles in eternity
    each individual has a goal
    not to mention an endless soul
    some believe begins at points
    like the pinions of the joints
    of heavenly angel wings
    and the flight the pivot brings
    in celestial cycles with no end
    no philosopher could rescind .

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    #10
    Audience in your Hand

    She thought you wanted control, that
    you and I were great conspirators of an
    ancient Greek city the myths greedily
    chased after.
    I know you, and you're nothing like an
    Emperor who rules a naive Empire.
    So while she believes you control
    others, influencing me to follow like a
    horse grazing on dead summer grass,
    I will know the truth.
    And that will be enough for now,
    as the sun sets and you breathe
    for no one but yourself.

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    #11
    Compulsory Tears

    I was never told when to cry...

    My father never drafted up a schedule,
    never held a timer to my skull, shouting,
    "after these angry words I will make you
    lose your mind."

    No, these tears were always my own and
    soon, I molded them to be almost
    nonexistent,
    only crying when night could shield me,
    protect my identity.

    And now, I am able to cry and not worry
    who may see.
    For I know if you catch me, you will not
    shudder away, but reach out like a
    dreamer to a rainstorm,
    understanding that rain needs
    to fall in order to heal the earth.

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    #12
    Shelter From The Storm

    Day is almost night
    I refuse to lose this fight
    I've fooled around much too long

    As I check out my past
    I know that I've been last
    But in you I still hold strong

    Give me the strength I need
    to be able to succeed
    And in you I'll be able to stand

    Night is now day
    It does not matter which way
    By you Grace on my feet I always land

    But to everyone I know
    I'll show your purpose and my goal

    For in you, I AM ABLE TO STAND.

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    #13
    Years of Silence:

    A few weeks ago this little girl
    who's really not so little anymore
    turned nineteen and her only
    birthday present was a court summons
    to see the man she hates the very most.

    She had a story to tell
    not too long ago, but she
    didn't know where to write it
    and nobody knew how to listen.

    Well, today, she saw that man
    she answered everyone's questions
    to the best of her ability
    and I wonder how bad that taste.

    And as they told her
    to step down from the stand
    she looked into the judge's eyes

    and said,

    "Please sir, let me say
    one thing more, for the jury,
    for my mother, for you, and
    for myself. Please?"

    Well, normally he would have
    sadly, quietly told her no,
    but considering the nature of the case,
    the story to be told, he nodded,

    "Go ahead, Darling."

    So that little girl, with fading
    cherry hair and brown eyes so smooth,
    stood up and looked everyone in the eye:

    "We have all done something and felt terrible,
    maybe we ate the last cookie in the jar
    and did not know how to tell our parents,
    or maybe we broke our friend's favorite toy
    and tried to hide it, when we were young.
    Others have done bigger things,
    things that kill innocence and pieces of people
    before they are ready to die.

    There is one person in this room who cut me
    many years ago, I will forgive him, but to this day
    I am still bleeding. I don't think
    he gets that.

    He scarred my mother and countless others,
    little girls who didn't know what they were doing,
    people who just needed a friend,
    and this is all they get,
    him in a trial pleading not guilty
    when he knows he in fact is.

    This whole room knows he is.

    I have forgiven him.

    But I don't think others will.
    They don't know him the way I do.
    I'm sorry, but they don't and he
    is a bastard, a filthy, slimey,
    disgusting, twisted bastard.

    It's time you realize that, Dad."

    With that, she stepped off the stand,
    walked out of the room, and sobbed right outside the door.

    That is why people need to listen
    to everything they hear,
    not to pick up sounds they think they understand
    but to comprehend the pain in each one.

    So more people do not end up
    like this poor wilting rose.

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  • Hannah Lizette
    10 years ago

    Some very lovely pieces here! Great job everyone!

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    Yes, "Great job everyone!" They get harder to judge every time

  • BlueJay
    10 years ago

    I agree that each time is more difficult to judge they are really good