Prompt challenge voting :)

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Please read each of the following poems, and PM me with TWO votes for who you want to win. 1st place(I will give 10 points) and 2nd place (5points).

    Example:

    I vote for #1
    then #2

    Winners will be announced on Thursday morning.

    Good luck all.

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    #1
    Title: The Husband's Secret

    Tell me tomorrow my sweet darling
    to look again through the keyholes
    When dreams fall apart
    And there's nothing left of yesterday
    But every slamming door...

    Tell me tomorrow my dearest darling
    To look again through the keyholes:
    the vision of you rearranging furniture
    seeking silence,
    After every slamming door...

    Tell me tomorrow my lovable darling
    to look again through the keyholes:
    The vision of Africa screams echoing in my ears,
    "Don't sing our song"
    Before every slamming door...

    Tell me tomorrow my sweet darling,
    to look again through the keyholes:
    The vision of a downloaded child
    becoming the book thief of our love.
    And I, in front of every slamming door...

    Tell me tomorrow, my dearest darling
    to look again through the keyholes
    Tell me tomorrow, my lovable darling
    That what my ears and heart yearn to hear,
    "I still dream of you."

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    #2
    I still dream of finding myself

    I have reoccurring dream
    where I believe keys
    are in my pants ,
    but my pants
    are lost and so
    is my vehicle
    I wake up unrested
    and feel like a lost
    naked soul

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    #3
    Serpents of Books

    Cloaked in ebony ink-

    I crossed over reality
    when chapter two fell
    into my lap like a cold
    splash of spilled water.

    Disguised exclamation marks-

    The crescendo of chapter
    seven left me spellbound
    into the night, when Gabriel
    sprouted his wings while
    lucifer spewed false truths
    and innuendos.

    Vandalism of the mind-

    My iris's became violated
    at the ending finale,
    my fingerprints matched
    the thief of the authors
    tainted, hard back cover.

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    #4
    Nothing left, but dust

    Nothing left of yesterday,
    but memories of what we shared,
    The times you looked my way
    as if you really had cared,
    The wrinkles they've found you
    and covered your sad face.
    To your nature you were true
    until you had fallen from grace
    As light has turned to dark
    seems joy has turned to sorrow
    dust has settled on its mark
    I hope it rains tomorrow.

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    #5
    The little orange Tree

    It grows but it gives no fruits
    Its soil is barren, infertile
    Not even the bees come near
    Because its branches nor leaves
    have flowers to attract them.

    A day for him feels like a year
    Where he withers in sadness.
    Not even the rain, his friend,
    Has time to pay him a visit.

    But one day, while in his garden,
    A woman approached him,
    She looked at his yellow leaves
    And she cut them.

    The little orange tree was groom
    Till bald,
    She stripped him out of his roots
    Till he felt lost.

    Then the woman moved him,
    She gave him a new home, a new garden.
    Where the soil is full in nutrients
    And the water is abundant
    Now the little orange tree has fruits.

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    #6
    Title: Silent Violence

    I still dream of escaping
    to a place where silence reigns:
    where the screams and pleas
    of battering rams against chests and faces
    that my father vents his spleen through,
    will no longer need be a secret

    I still dream of escaping
    to a place where the silence reigns:
    where I don't have to again look
    through the keyhole of every slamming door
    to see what the breaking of bones looks like,
    to hear them snap

    I still dream of escaping
    to a place where silence reigns:
    Where people don't sing our songs of violence;
    where a childhood broken can't fit on a memory stick,
    downloaded, by evil men for evil purposes -
    I am not a child anymore, never have been

    I still dream of escaping
    to a place where silence reigns:
    Where every bruise and broken bone
    proves my endurance, not my weaknesses;

    Tell me, Tomorrow, can I even reach you,
    or is this a fool's journey where dreams fall apart?
    No matter what answer you have left to give,

    I won't give up on seeking silence
    I won't give up on seeking silence
    I won't give up on seeking silence

    Because Violence is all I've ever known
    Please, just give me some Silence

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    #7
    Through Dusty Eyes:

    I know its eavesdropping to look
    through the keyhole on two people
    in love when one's a stranger and
    the other lives in your heart. But love's
    such a fickle thing and games like that
    are far too complicated to play.

    You see, it's just one thing when
    they are talking while rearranging
    furniture and something entirely
    different when they are kissing by
    the fire. Look again though, tell me
    tomorrow and wish me luck when
    I whisper through tears that I still dream
    of yesterday.

    I miss the way things were then.

    Don't sing our song to her between
    flickering flames and wondering hands,
    don't give her my hot tea or read her
    those hand me down poems you wrote
    for me first. Even remembering all those
    slamming doors and random fights over
    nothing at all don't make me want
    anything better or different.

    I know it's eavesdropping to look
    through the keyhole in most
    situations, but is that still the case
    when you're just a doll on a shelf
    bought for a girl you no longer know?

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    #8
    Chapters Beyond the Grave

    Poetry peeks through
    the keyhole of a
    dead writer's past,

    fumbling fingers
    look again at the
    life of a man who
    slammed doors in
    his own face yet
    yearned for
    someone (anyone)
    to announce that
    the thorns
    restricted in his
    rib cage are only
    permanent if you
    allowed them to
    grow roots -

    they twist
    like a barbed
    wire fence
    beneath a tombstone
    yet his words still
    ache to be felt

    again and
    again and
    again.

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  • Kakera
    10 years ago

    Good luck everyone, and don't forget to vote!

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    4 votes in so far - keep voting people - this could be anyone's win!!

  • Kakera
    10 years ago

    Come on guys, vote! If there's still time left. Time zones </3. (It's 17:30 Thursday over here, haha)

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    Leaving this open until tomorrow? Only have 6 votes in and all varied.

    If you haven't already voted, please vote.

    Thanks.

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    3 way tie at the moment, with a very close 5th place..

    Will leave this open through the day and hope to announce a winner tonight, please vote if you haven't already done so.