Talent contest Voting

This is for the winning champion of the talent contest.

Please read each poem, and PM me with the poem you want to win.

Please vote, and remind others to vote.

Good luck.

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#1
Title: Heaven - Car Metaphor

Too Late, we crossed the Intersection.

I didn't know what hit us -- just
----passing by, our bodies felt "lighter than our breathing."

The world overcrowded by violent traffic,
---- Our heart was to the car a green light

to a parking spot where it could crash
---- for eternity. I screamed for you to dodge it.

instead you held me in your arms
---- gazing and waving hello to its windows. I wanted us

to evade it -- but you did not.

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#2
Religion causes wars

Juxtapose belief with pain and suffering
remember those who died through desire
to believe misinterpreted ramblings
lifted from ancient tomes
wars were never won, just lost by idiocy
the god bothering lunatics and the bible burning morons
Religion is a cult, fashioned to control
A pyramid system designed for zombies
faith an excuse for poor behaviour
where is killing taught?
Do the top of the chain truly believe?
should murder continue to hide behind hypocrisy?
How many people will die today in the name of your lord?

Or yours?

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Many votes?

A lot of them right?

Still just the 2 votes... 1 each (obviously)

I just can't get people voting on the challenges I host. :/

It's a tie!

Congrats Darren. I too cheated! Those were poems that are already in my account.

Thank you for the contest Saffie.

Yay!! A tie. I would not have been ashamed to finish second to luce. Thanks for the contest Saffie and congrats luce.

Lol sorry guys about the voting - you both done well, so congratulations.

Will need to think of bribes for people to vote???

Votes and comments always tend to work. ;)