LTFR BATTLE THREAD

  • Larry Chamberlin
    10 years ago

    8-9. Must include a time or date

    "It must be 5 o'clock somewhere"
    she said, raising her glass with a smile
    but the smile seemed weak
    and the drink too strong
    for so early in the day.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    10 years ago

    8-10. This poem must rhyme at least once throughout.

    Once I rode to a coffee plantation
    in the back of a fruit truck standing
    amid watermelons, such elation
    when fruit they were handing

    Poem 80

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    9-1-A formed poem

    MoriaBella (Acoustic)

    Multiple personality
    Organized to be "mother, wife,&foe"
    Ready to guard or attack anything
    Instictly guarded like a rose
    Arising from Death to be an angel

    Beware her lure
    Exactly like a vixen mermaid
    Lovely vioice
    Lethal reasoning
    A warning has been told

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    9-2-26-28 syllables
    Regrettably yours

    This letter had been penned
    With ink that dripped from
    a blade
    said how sorry that person was,
    Signed

    Regrettably yours

  • Maple Tree
    10 years ago

    9-3. Include "a bridge(s)" or "a kiss(es)" either by the words, or through metaphor.

    I found a stash of kisses
    hidden behind my desk
    filled with endless
    hugs and quiet moments
    alone-

    This chocolate is divine....

  • Maple Tree
    10 years ago

    9-4. Use a song title for the poem's title.

    You are my Sunshine

    Days are filled with darkness
    clouds shall never depart,
    the light within my soul
    has been shadowed
    by the memory of you.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    10 years ago

    9 - 5 nature

    Evolutionary note

    Vertebrates typically
    have four limbs
    because it provides
    the greatest stability
    for the least
    use of resources

  • Larry Chamberlin
    10 years ago

    9-6 free choice

    She picks up litter in the park
    because she believes it right;
    her son serves as a marine
    says her welcome home banner.

    She volunteers her time
    to run the neighborhood
    website and newsletter
    donating her router space.

    Her mother-in-law lives
    in a specially built add-on;
    her yard and garden glow
    With year round blooms.

    She puts up a sign
    for a candidate of a color
    not accepted in this red state;
    for that she is damned.

    When I see this intolerance
    against one so worthy
    I am shamed and so
    I put up his sign as well.

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    9-7*8-10 lines

    Mother

    Why do you have to be so cold?
    I'm your child regardless that you
    didn't birth me
    You raised me for 20 some years
    Yet you can't call me "daughter"?
    What is wrong with either of us?
    Is it that I wasn't a boy?
    Was it that you were so cold since born?
    I don't know why I ponder this
    For I know that it will always hurt like a
    Silent blow

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    9-8-Must include a body part in your poem/title

    Eyes that bleed in suffering
    In cold realization that life is pain
    Can't trust no more
    Not even one's heart,

    Mother you make me want to pick up a knife
    Dig into my flesh once again
    I've been sober for a year
    Why do you have to evoke this suffering?

    I've been used by you
    O but you're so proud to show case me
    "Good daughter doesn't party
    Works and is polite
    Stays by my side like a good child"
    I hate being your lap dog
    But in the end I thought you were better
    No matter how many wounds you
    Have inflicted on me through the years

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    9-9. Must include a time or date

    I was born August 26 1955
    a wonderful time to be alive
    in the US of A
    Every single day

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    9-10. This poem must rhyme at least once throughout.

    Coming to the end of the relay race
    Need about ten more for second place
    With not much in common with Peppy La pew
    Does it stink that bad to be number two?

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    10-1-A formed poem

    Friends (Acrostic)

    Forever loyal
    Remaining there even after the scars are gone,
    In trusting them I find light
    Ending the darkness within,
    Dreaming of a new home
    Sacrificing the past for a new one

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    10-2*26-28 syllables

    Smile

    Queen why so down?
    Smile bright for the war
    has already been done,
    The soldiers are home
    No need to mope,
    Just smile for the ones that
    need hope

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    10-3. Include "a bridge(s)" or "a kiss(es)" either by the words, or through metaphor.

    Crossing Bridges

    Guardian Angel Crossing Bridge was in my mind
    the most inspirational painting I could find
    to remind me of the protection of a celestial being
    with all the other things I sensed without seeing.

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    10-4. Use a song title for the poem's title.Dust

    Nothing left of yesterday,
    but memories of what we shared
    The times you looked my way
    as if you really ever cared.
    The wrinkles they've found you
    and covered your sad face.
    To your nature you were true
    until you had fallen from grace
    As light has turned to dark
    seems joy has turned to sorrow
    dust has settled on its mark
    I hope it rains tomorrow.

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    10-5-Category must be nature

    Mate

    The sun is married to the moon
    Together they create an eclipse
    Showing their love,
    All things have one special mate
    None can say they didn't have one,

    Nature will always show the beauty
    With it it comes in darkness and light
    But put together only the beauty wins
    With knowledge is the hope
    To see what nature has always been

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    10-6-Free choice of any poem at all

    Big Beautiful Women

    I'm not a stick
    who's a size 4,
    I'm a woman with a lot of curves
    & not ashamed one bit,
    You may not see me gorgeous
    Then again you're not married to me,

    I wear heels like them skinny women
    Sure I might break them
    But I wear them too,
    I make my money just like you
    It doesn't matter that she has "beauty"
    Since I'm the one with brains,
    Daddy always said "Women with curves are always the best"
    Since mommy was a big beautiful woman
    I'm not ashamed one bit

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    10-7. 8-10 lines

    Have you heard the word?

    Of all the words I have heard
    in all passion that's been stirred
    while my soul freed liked a bird
    Love is the one somehow blurred
    Of all the expressions inferred
    to honor feelings to which I referred
    in the many events that have occurred
    I will seek to understand it undeterred

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    10 -8. Must include a body part in your poem/title

    Pulling My Leg

    In logical fallacy the question begs
    why do we seem to be always pulling legs
    The truth is narrow, the path is straight.
    Must the way of deception become our fate.

  • -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
    10 years ago

    10-9-Must include a time or date

    May 22,2013 was the day she took her life
    Shattered our "perfect lives"
    Made the Ice Queen cry,

    Her daughters looked at me with sorrow
    I couldn't help but wonder
    If I should've been the one dead
    They didn't need me
    They needed mommy who loved
    For I couldn't love even if it was to save
    my life....

    May 22,2014 I still mourned
    I was a year sober
    But I couldn't move on
    Her spirit was trapped by my side....

    July 4,2014 the day of independence
    I set her free
    I still miss the wife that made me smile
    But now it's time to move on...

  • Michael D Nalley
    10 years ago

    10-10

    Alpha to Omega(Triolet)
    I want to end with a strong finish
    The alpha and omega so to speak
    So that the quality will not diminish
    I want to end with a strong finish
    but my fresh approach is wearing thinnish
    I never bothered to learn Latin nor Greek
    I want to end with a strong finish
    The alpha and omega so to speak

    Poem 100
    A strong finish indeed!