FOP #1

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    5.7 Special Occasion

    There's a candle lit
    in your honor
    and you're not here
    to make the wish.
    There should be
    twenty candles
    but what's the point
    in remembering your age
    when you can't celebrate
    here with us.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    5.8
    Wild Card

    There's a thistle in
    her mouth, she's sucking sweetly
    waiting for bitter.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.1 Senses
    I long to dunk my toes
    into your drunkenness,
    where I can feel your breath
    lingering, and I can know
    that it means something.
    There are moments
    where the distance between us
    feels almost too comfortable,
    not that you'd notice.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.2 Funny

    I tripped, I trapt, I liffed, I laffed
    and realized
    I couldn't spell a word
    I decided to try
    spackling my eye
    and realized you were a turd.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.3 Formed Poetry

    The sun sets on the
    top of the ocean, and I
    suck my breath in awe.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.4 Country/State/Town

    My heart is nestled
    in the back roads of Oregon,
    filled with fir trees and country roots.
    You'll find solace in the sunset,
    and a breath of fresh air
    when the first rain
    hits the pavement.
    God creates a beautiful image,
    and this place is His masterpiece.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.5 30-36 Syllables

    Photographs capture
    beautiful moments, but in the rare
    time it holds a tear,
    The emotion steals my breath,
    as I begin to weep with the subject.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.6 Religion

    God, my God
    please do not
    leave me be.

    I'm praising you
    silently, publicly, feverishly
    in this storm.

    Come, hold my heart
    in your hands,
    and rescue me.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.7 Christmas

    The bow in her hair
    matches the one
    on the tree,
    and she decides
    to flee, run from the snow
    and laughter,
    away from the heartache
    of what used to be.

    Presents mean nothing
    without his presence,
    and she can't believe
    another year
    has gone by.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    6.8 Wildcard

    Poetry flies off fingertips
    occasionally dripping
    eloquent lines,
    trying so hard to
    relay the emotions
    you hold inside.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.1 Senses

    Tick, tock.
    I hear it crash
    loudly in my temples
    and feel myself
    throw up on the sidewalk.
    It wasn't meant to be this way.
    There's no oxygen, I cannot breathe.
    My ribs are covered with
    shrink wrap, but my swollen heart
    is about to explode
    out of my chest.
    Can it be over, yet?

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.2 Funny

    I'm not a funny woman
    and I steal stupid jokes
    of thunderpants and sticky sticks
    that make no sense at all. One day
    I'll find my funny bone
    lodged in my brain somewhere;
    that's where it must belong?

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.3 Formed Poem

    Waterfalls tumble
    rushing water into pools
    natures wet fortress.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.4 Country/State/Town

    A life has been changed suddenly
    never expecting, although believing
    that it could happen,
    I fell in love with a country,
    guard down, my heart was softened
    under God; He smoothed my edges
    as though His hands were sandpaper.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.5 30-36 Syllables

    I lifted my heart
    from pomegranate seeds
    and anchors,
    making the mistake
    and forgetting the one
    who drew along my ribcage.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.6 Religion

    There are wars
    in the name of you, God,
    but don't they know
    the enemy is at hand?
    You do not call
    bombs to land
    on believer's hearts.
    You usher in peace,
    and take care of justice
    on Your own.
    May we learn from this
    to seek Your blessings.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.7 Special Occasion

    My tiny hands
    will soon envelope yours
    and I can't wait
    to feel the rush of love
    only an aunt can feel.
    Please hurry, cupcake,
    as we are impatiently
    awaiting your arrival
    into this world.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    7.8 Wildcard (Senryu)

    Where have all my club
    mates gone? They're all in hiding
    from poetic games.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    8.1 Senses

    In the kitchen,
    my nostrils are swarmed
    with goulash and dumplings,
    the pitter patter of sizzling
    and the cursing from grease stains.
    Your arms are covered
    up to your elbow with flour
    and spices, and I can't wait
    to taste the flavors.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    8.2 Funny

    There once was a man named Joe
    who decided he needed to blow
    his nose, you pervert, don't you know
    kids on this website, they do go!

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    8.3 Formed Poem

    Dandelion fields
    cover all the green pastures:
    flowery landscape.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    8.4 country/state/town

    Food stalls align the street, the smell
    wafting around old ladies collecting tin cans
    from abandoned seats. Coca cola, fanta, other brands
    almost in hiding, like lovers in a shady alley, always in pairs.

    The smell is rare here, around Kuala Lumpur,
    a concoction of dirty sewer water and re-used oil,
    hardly hygienic ... but oh so nostalgic.

    In the restaurants, you will always find geckos
    sticking to the ceiling, as if threatening to skydive
    into your noodle soup. But this is home,

    the pineapple-like palmtrees and calloused hands,
    this is what it feels like to invest your sweat
    into a broken place that remains majestic
    with all its roaches filling up the cracked pavements.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    8.5 30-36 syllables

    Clothes from overseas
    sneak into your suitcase,
    pile up in your spare room -

    closet's too small.

    One month later, those clothes
    are sent overseas, lacking your touch.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    8.6 Religion

    Demented men as
    Evil controls minds that
    Murder innocent children
    Only for their cause
    Nobody should die
    Save for these savages

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    8.7 special occasion

    On a Valentine's day,
    people curl up like stray dogs
    into their blankets, dreaming
    of chocolate fountains.

    Why drown the sweetness of strawberries
    with the bitterness of chocolate, though?

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    8.8 Wild card

    With my poker face
    no hint of shame
    winning a game
    losing cash a disgrace

    My hand is mild
    victory now bleak
    but to help this streak
    a hidden card is wild.

    (sorry couldn't resist)

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    9.1 sense organ

    Nose to nose - a puppy's saliva
    stuck to your upper lip, and you can't help
    but smile, as if it were a threatment to rid yourself
    of the pseudo-moustache you've always hated.

    There's light in you, despite the dark brown
    of your eyes, or the scar on your chin
    from falling on the pavement when chased
    by a dog, at the age of 8, when I lost my spark.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    9.2 Funny

    Plip plop
    my ploop plopped
    plopping along the pluppin'
    water. Frit frat, jungle cat
    plippin' along the plep.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    9.3 formed poem - pleiades

    lovelorn

    Like a pregnant apple,
    losing faith of falling
    lovely, punctured by worms.
    Leeching all your juices,
    loneliness hollows out,
    lest the breeze places you
    like a treasure in hands.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    9.4 country/town/state

    Great Yarmouth this town
    that I can call my home
    in the brochures it is pleasant
    painted with tint of pride

    but the truth is this towns a hole
    that supports scumbags
    the chavs and the dossers
    that drive us all insane.

    maybe that hole
    should swallow the lot of them
    then great Yarmouth could then be
    a green and pleasant town.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    9.5 30-36 syllables

    Orange juice is guided
    alongside your elbow,
    into your sketchbook.

    Pastel heart bleeds a sunset,
    remindful of the boy
    who pulled your piggytail.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    9.6 religion

    One book
    written long ago
    edited beyond originality
    whispering half truths
    to humanity
    making sheep from men

    to believe is to entrap yourself
    in a time warp
    where stoning is acceptable
    during a half time interval

    to speak out is punishable
    by death via torture
    sanctioned by your lord

    but there is a flip side
    which is why confusion reigns

    some people need hope
    dare to dream of an afterlife
    that only a god can bring.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    9.7 special occasion

    Pandan leaves are wrapped
    around pink and green dishes,
    aligning like turtles along the candles.

    The drums and hums emerge
    infinitely, a permant chaperone
    into your new home.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    9.8 wild card

    Smoking clouds judgement
    abates anger
    mellows mood
    destroys dental
    lines lungs
    causes cancer
    habitual
    stinking
    dragging
    life ending
    fun.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    10.1 sense organ

    I hear the melody of my phone
    from underneath my pillow,
    like it's some magic reminder
    that I'll dream about the train station again
    where you'll arrive, broad-shouldered
    and packed with experience,
    but still blushing like a silly boy.

    We will have lunch together,
    coffee steam and tea's dampness
    roaming around our tongues,
    and far too much chocolate.

    But when I wake up, I hear
    the afterecho of the train
    entering my window,
    leaving the door.

    I am reminded that reality
    is only tea without sugar,
    bread without butter,
    both of us being students
    without stations to look forward to.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    10.2 Funny

    Lickadicksaywhat
    Is what he said to me
    in such a mumbled tone
    that I had to strain to hear

    Lickadicksaywhat
    he repeated with a smirk
    holding back a laugh
    ready to explode

    Lickadicksaywhat
    he finally had me
    my puzzlement won

    what?

    I asked.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    10.3 formed Haiku/acrostic

    Reared in bloody fields
    Encourages a new hope
    Delightful poppy

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    10.4 Country/town/state

    Tea drinkers that detest a queue
    yet too polite to cause a fuss
    depicted as bowler hat wearing
    reserved bores
    Us Englanders should do so much more.
    To show the world we can have fun
    to laugh and dance with the best of them.
    But truth be known we will never exaggerate
    as good as the Americans
    with their overflowing plates.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    10.5 30-36 syllables

    Darkness pokes out my eyeballs
    as daylight deserts me again
    thinking clearly was something
    that moved out when the mist settled.

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    10.6 Religion

    Bile on paper
    Idiotic lies
    Bribing men
    Losing believers
    Eroding humanity