FOP #1

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    9.4 Club Name

    She walks under
    the moonlight, muses surrounding
    her, waiting for
    that moment of inspiration

    she clings to.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    9.5 Formed Poem - Acrostic

    She laughs, watching the movement
    happen in front of her,
    easily finding her comfort zone.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    9.6 Alcohol & Drugs

    He loses himself in the darkness,
    spiraling downward
    into a violent rage -
    drunk on a mixture
    of Jack and Coke,
    believing this makes him
    the confident man
    he cannot soberly be.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    9.7 10-13 Lines

    I play with words
    and attempt to fixate
    on them, but find myself
    distracted - I can't seem
    to find my reality,
    lost in translation, lost in
    a dreamer's world.

    I want to find my focus,
    afraid it's melded within
    the political rants
    of wars that will never change.
    We are broken people.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    9.8 Metaphor or Simile

    A princess will be born,
    with glitter in her veins
    body wrapped around
    the fingers of every
    person her presence graces.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.1 One animal and one number.

    She walks along river banks
    skipping stones,
    two at a time
    and loses herself
    in the moment.

    Where she stands,
    she is queen - ruler
    of her surroundings
    and emperor of
    this time.

    She quiets herself
    among the swimmers -
    fish flopping
    after their meal,
    and she feels
    content.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.2
    Wild Card

    His truck is full
    of heartbreaks,
    memories and sex,
    drunken mistakes
    and passionate goodbyes -
    yet we can't seem
    to part.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.3 Life

    She rubs her swollen
    belly, full of pregnant promises
    and a reminder of
    her solider, may his soul rest -
    a child
    unable to know their father,
    because of the vicious hatred
    in this world.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.4 Club Name

    She finds herself
    drinking in the dark,
    sinking into bubbles
    and murmuring
    fragments of poetry
    into the water. Her life
    is spun on tales she weaves
    and lines she can't help
    but whisper to herself.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.5

    Formed Poem Ottava Rima

    Sorrow fills the brokenhearted, she finds
    herself whispering, praying for blessings
    to sweep into her life, filling her mind
    with the chorus of angels, who will sing
    praises of God, who has begun to outline
    the map of her life, a joyous time rings
    once obedience comes into play, she
    that God Himself will set her free.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.6

    Alcohol or Drugs

    Her veins are full
    of acid
    and she tells
    me she can
    feel
    her sounds..
    they are
    jumping
    at the seams and she can't
    stop
    the rambling and constant
    slowing of
    her
    .. words.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.7
    10-13 lines

    An old farmer
    leans over his rake,
    and watches his grandchildren
    bring in the day's harvest -
    corn, tomatoes,
    potatoes and an abundance
    of responsibility,
    accountability and pride -
    no better lesson was learned
    that this on the farm.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    10.8

    Metaphor or simile

    Seven women sit
    on the stairs of a school,
    dirty from the days work
    yet clean from the hearts
    of the children. Their smiles
    become nourishment for the soul
    and a bridge into eternity.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.1 One animal and one number

    I heard a small crack at the window and
    a tiny feather floated beside it. I went outside
    and, sure enough, saw one green finch
    broken-necked on the path. I went to get a bag
    to act as a shroud but when I came back with it
    another finch stood, beside the fallen comrade,
    unmoving. I edged closer and touched it with
    an outstretched finger as it remained, statue-like.
    I left him there to mourn his loss and when
    I came back a few minutes later he was gone.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.2. Wild Card

    Chips of all colours stacked in the middle
    of the table, 'raise' 'call' 'all in.'
    My face was poker but my heart was beating like
    a brass band drum. The turn, a jack of diamonds
    and my inwardly my spirits slumped. I glanced
    at my competitors across the table, tense, confident,
    nervous. It was time for the river and I knew
    I needed a wild card

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.3 Life

    Simple red, iconic, like the paper
    the articles were printed upon: starlets,
    interviews, opinion-changing photographs
    from places internet hadn't yet reached.
    Black and white covers, sepia tinted mid-sections,
    a visitor to Mr Dunkin's sweet shop in a corner
    of the bronx and a resident of the White House:
    To see the world, that was the purpose of Life.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.4. Club name from this site

    Already I am searching for figments,
    tiny fragments of poetry amongst
    the ramblings and crossword-puzzles of
    my mind.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.5 Formed poem (No haiku/senyru)

    Acrostic

    No! Say it isn't so,
    On the second day we are to see no more

    Haiku's or Senyrus, Saffie the cruel!
    A deprevation of simple way over the
    Indignant, hated formed verse.
    Killing the easy way out will, no doubt
    Usurp our cunning speed-writing plans!

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.6 Alcohol or drugs

    The last I remember was the swish
    of vodka trickling down my throat,
    at the nightclub bar. I don't think
    you were there but when I woke
    in a taxi backseat, you were. The smell
    of chips released my nausea and the drums
    in my head played einy miny mo on my skull.
    And I lied to my inebriated self
    to never drink again.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.7 10-13 lines

    I felt that in your company
    I could do the things
    I never could pluck up my
    reserves of courage to try
    before. With you I wanted to sing
    outside the shower and waltz
    where others might see. I wanted
    to hold your hand and listen
    to raindrops falling around us
    and whisper it in your ear.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    11.8 Metaphor/simile

    The words slipping from my bed head
    are as cliche as my 17-year old self:
    acne decorated, free-rhyming, pen wielding
    poet of poets. The slip of time is funny
    and erogenous and tragic and
    everything.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.1 One animal one number

    99 red balloons soundtracked
    the roadtrip segment from junction 6
    to the moment we were rudely interrupted
    by a stray stag intent on playing
    motorway chicken. He was probably
    killed instantly, unlike the Ford Fiesta
    passenger in the adjecent lane that skidded
    for its final time.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.2 Wild Card

    Senyru

    Electric guitars
    screech harmoniously, bent
    on changing the world.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.3 Life

    It wasn't long after I was dropped
    at the campus gates, hugged my parents
    goodbye and dragged my luggage into the dorms
    that I, shy and clumsy, bumped into
    to a raven-haired girl and her pasta dinner,
    blundering my way into friendship in this new,
    educational step of life.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.4 Club name

    I remember, roboticly looking out the back
    seat window on our way to Galway, catching sight
    of two chestnut horses, galloping in delight
    the expanse of their field as the farmer tried
    to catch them for breaking. Even my child's eyes
    admired their free spirits, their grace and their ability
    to run race my mind's eye 15 years later.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.5 Formed poem

    Tanka (syllables 5-7-5-7-7)

    The Angel's Command
    yellows and gathers grey dust
    beside Lonely Planet's
    Thailand guide. Thousands of words,
    maps, hours of knowledge, use.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.6 Alcohol or drugs

    I went a full three days before
    powdering my nostrils once. I managed
    for a week not to wake the kids
    in the middle of the night. I achieved
    peace with my wife after years of fighting.
    And I went a lifetime before realising what
    I had lost along the way.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.7 10-13 lines

    My passport pages are as blank
    as no memories. Empty as lost tales
    about the markets in Cairo,
    non-existent tribal tattoos of Oceania
    or of sunstroke medicines in Alice Springs.
    The pages taunt me,
    echo as only paper unweighted
    by ink can. Only
    the ally of time can help
    me win this battle against
    unadventure.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    12.8 Metaphor or simile

    The chess pieces stood, like an platoon
    of redcoats, tall, straight, tight. Their ranks
    were fearsome, their movements frightening.
    But the superiority of the general
    pulling their strings was the most
    disconcerting of all.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.1 One animal one number

    Translucent, reflecting the water they
    floated in, hundreds of jellyfish
    broke in the water as the chartered boat
    sliced its way to the islands. They looked
    alien, graceful, silent. Their shadows,
    if they cast them, must have seemed as unusual
    to the sea bed scraping crabs in the shallows
    below as that of the boat, whale-like
    in the sky above.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.2 Wild Card

    I'm sick of wild cards, give me instead
    a morsel of something solid to manufacture
    some inspiration on. This vagueness draws
    on the well devoid of water. This ambiguity
    gives me everything, and nothing, to work
    with.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.3 Life

    You could wrestle with the doctors
    prognosis, you could spar with the wrinkle
    of time. You could ask God to intervene
    in your prayers or could look for some solution
    in discredited medical journals. But when it comes
    to the end, you have to remember the sentence
    given you at birth, set your affairs in order
    and lie down to say goodnight.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.4 Club's name

    There is a nagging buzz in my ear,
    an urge to release the voice within
    that has nibbled at my conscience these
    past months. But it whispers in a language
    I have yet to decipher. It breathes a song
    I can't find the lyrics to.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.5 Formed poem.

    Sedoka

    Leaves fluttered gaily
    upon the breath of summer,
    sheltering bird nests and songs.

    Autumn's chilly wind
    sends swallows on their way south,
    lamenting the bronzing tide.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.6 Alcohol or drugs

    The way the rich brown nectar sat
    amongst the ice cubes, like a microcosm
    for a Northern Ocean after winter was comforting.
    It was familiar in a way that the world around
    me could never be. The pockmarked dartboard
    in the corner and the tempermental jukebox
    with the flickering left light were the home comforts
    I couldn't have. The bitterness at the back
    of my throat as the whisky trickled down
    was the lesser of the many evils
    residing a few inches north in the cavity
    of my mind.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.7 10-13 lines

    Short lines, punctuated
    in a bohemian-
    like fashion help
    hide the
    lack of meat,
    substance on the bone
    of this piece
    of words I can barely bring
    myself to call a
    poem.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    13.8 Metaphor or simile

    As fast as the wind, I ran,
    as I always do, down the meta
    alley I go to when faced with a bank
    of ideas as empty as the real banks
    in my country. I have nothing else
    to say here. I have nothing
    else to withdraw and my overdraft
    is over.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    14.1 One animal and one number

    I had only purchased my new Audi TT
    2 days before a cat burglar relieved
    my garage of it while I was busy at
    the car parts show choosing which air freshener
    would go best with the red leather seats.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    14.2 Wild Card

    I dreamed that night in my new room
    in my mothers house in the town of Spoons
    about the first day in the new school tomorrow.
    I envisioned being useless at PE, getting
    lost and being sheparded around by over-eager
    classmates. And in Science I imagined a strange,
    Dracula like figure with yellow eyes that I would
    fall desperately in love with and start a series
    of angsty adventures with. What a weird
    dream.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    14.3 Life

    The midwives passed by the entrance
    to the mortuary each day on their way
    to their work. The newborn babies first saw
    light of day at its entrance, on their way home
    to start their lives. Architects must have a
    dark sense of humour.