FOP #3

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    PROMPTS

    1. Must write a poem to yourself, or about yourself.

    2. Must mention a member's username on this site (active, or inactive) yes, you can use your own.

    3. War

    4. Poem must mention money, or a type of sport

    5. Wild card

    6. must include at least one colour, AND one shape

    7. Category : nature

    8. Double Form ( either double of the same form, i.e 2 haikus, or, 2 different forms joined, i.e a Tanka followed by a haiku.)

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.1 transport + weather

    Riding your bike around Amsterdam
    can be quite unsafe - silly teenagers
    on scooters swishing by on the left,
    trams travelling by on the right,
    and tourists crossing the street
    two feet way from the crosswalk.

    During winter, when snow falls,
    more than a handful of people
    slip and break their legs
    whilst rushing to school,
    then the teachers scold them,
    and they break again next year.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.2 3 x 3

    You held her hand like a seashell,
    with care, and with wonder,
    as if taking her to the beach
    would summon sirens.

    Then, she was deadwood,
    fueling the campfire in the sand
    as if to keep the beasts away.

    Whilst deep inside, it was you
    who hungered for Atlantis,
    and you, who wondered
    about black magic.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.3 royalty

    One flick of the finger
    and she was dragged beneath
    the guillotine, for not stroking
    his ego, like an animal's supposed to.

    The villagers scream to burn
    the witch, but never to burn
    the king, despite the sorcery
    of hate, he's come to teach them.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.4 first time

    And your lips felt like rose petals,
    gently scarring me for the first time.

    When you poured tea for me, my cheeks
    blossomed like a bouquet, artificial.

    Meeting you was a dream turned sour,
    a chapter I cannot subdue.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.5 wild card

    In the crowd, baldness lit up
    like a discoball, and I wanted to
    run up to him, ask about his story,
    but by the time I was in the middle
    of the dancefloor, drunken boys
    circled around me, thinking
    they could woo, by the time
    I could squeeze through the wall
    like ectoplasm, I was infected
    by ignorance and the smell of Jaeger.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.6 formed poem

    old owl blinks at you -
    chaperone of sleepwalkers
    before they stumble

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.7 clothing

    My room has become a jungle
    of t-shirts, one hanging like a sloth
    over my chair, most hiding beneath my bed
    like lions, targeting their preys,
    and me, I'm just a silly girl
    with a photo camera, shooting
    pictures of humankind
    in their natural environment.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    17.8 love

    I would love to give in, stop thinking
    about being one of the many gems you fished
    out of the ruins, stop thinking
    I should be grateful, or how you'd
    have to put up with my complaints
    about you, leaving me in the dark,
    eating too much meat, not exercising,
    having too many girls leaning
    on your shoulder, gaming too much,
    caring too less, absorbing
    too less sunlight, etc, etc.

    a list of complaints, almost longer
    than the 1000 things I hate about myself.

    But I can't give in, and I can't
    stop thinking

    about you.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.1 TRANSPORT AND WEATHER

    On the rain-splattered journey to
    the airport I realised that I had left
    my passport in 2005.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.2 3 VERSES 3 LINES

    I cried a little when Auld Land Syne
    Was chorused by black-and-white characters
    I had been entranced by.

    I cried a little in the science lab store room
    With 6 year's validated on a slip of a4
    Paper cradled in my hand.

    I cried a little when I visited you
    With flowers to place beside your headstone
    and memories to revisit.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.3 MUST MENTION ROYALTY IN SOME WAY (CROWN, HEIR, PRINCE, ETC)

    Princess, you must have mistaken me
    For someone who would fight dragons
    Or scale fairy-tale turrets to kiss you better.
    I cannot give you caricatured affection,
    Only hold you close and keep you safe
    From the winds outside our doors.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.4 FIRST TIME

    The first time sharing a cigarette
    In the smoky beer garden with you was
    The best and the last.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.5 WILD CARD

    In the waiting room of the hospital's
    ER department, a man paces
    Furiously, biting his non-existant nails,
    While a woman sobs silently into a
    Hanky designed like an American flag.
    I count the pins on the noticeboard,
    Count the products in the vending machine,
    Anything to distract from what is happening
    In the next rooms.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.6 FORMED POEM

    Mountain snow glistens,
    Reflected by a pearl moon
    And the stars above.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.7 MUST MENTION CLOTHING

    The red underwear in the wash-closet
    Told a story that words didn't need
    To utter.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    18.8 CATEGORY: LOVE

    The way the nape of your neck looks
    When you rest your head on my lap and
    Make elephants from clouds reminds me of
    Tree carvings, valentine cards and all the things
    I try to measure, and can't.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.1 Transport and weather

    The wing-mirrors were stiff and blotchy
    Like a teenagers acne-ridden face, the wheel rims
    Were cracked and ready to make their
    Bid for freedom. It didn't start on really cold mornings
    But my first car gave me more memories
    Than any other.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.2 3 verses

    Nobody believes me when I say
    How I was abducted by aliens with
    Cone shaped, wart-freckled head things.

    They clicked their language and their spaceship
    Was a giant corn-flakes cereal box. They plugged
    Me into plasma and I became a harpsichord.

    They dropped me back on a desert island
    That slowly turned softer and more familiar
    Until I was sitting on my couch, at home.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.3 Royalty

    I don't feel I deserve to wear
    The crown you've given me. It feels heavy
    On. Cumbersome with the weight of your
    Expectation, sleepless and awkward
    On stormy nights.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.4 First Time

    The first time I ventured onto the road behind
    The wheel of my car was frightening as
    If it was the driving test itself. Dad sat
    In the passenger seat and was sat-nav clear
    In his instructions: 'second-gear, watch the bend.'
    Soon it got dark and Dad was on lights duty as I couldn't
    Work them properly and turned them off with the wrong
    Flick of my wrist. It was long and short
    At the same time and it is a journey
    I will never forget.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.5 Wild card

    The temple stood, triangular and orientally
    Spectacular. Flanked by bamboo-inspired forest,
    it looked as I imagined it did to the orange-clad
    monks who lived there in an age more
    religious, more secular.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.6 Formed

    Rainwater trickles
    Across land, finding itself
    Building clouds again.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.7 Clothing

    The bandana you bought from a stall
    In Lima and used to wipe your brow
    With on Death Road looked meagre, folded
    In your suitcase. It looked out of place here
    At home but I understand how you wrapped it
    Predominately on the handle of your wardrobe
    As if it was too revolutionary to be imprisoned
    With the other clothes in the wardrobe prison.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    19.8 Love

    Four letters can't be defined in many more,
    Even when strung together as ornate and
    Sacrificial words. That combination of letters
    Exists on paper as negative photographs of
    Moments that are more alive in the annals of
    Living memory than in the superficial mash-up
    Of alphabet soup.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    20.1 Transport and weather

    We rose above the airport, above the
    getting-smaller city in our Boeing 737,
    until the outside the window was the grey
    marriage of cloud. For a few seconds
    the plane shuddered and I held my chair
    more firmly until the sword of sunshine
    scythed through and we were cruising
    where the weatherman didn't have to
    worry about.

  • Melpomene
    10 years ago

    20.2 3 verses

    I have walked your graveyards
    with you, stepped over the bones
    of every woman before me and

    planted daffodils in their ribcages
    as symbols of peace. When we first
    met, their were vows between us and

    loss between us. We had inscribed our
    love into the brickwork
    of Greece.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    20.3 Must mention royalty in some way (crown, heir, king, prince etc)

    The palace is filled with servants
    and maids, polite as children, and
    the rooms are decorated with fine art
    resting in golden frames: Feasts
    in the dining halls and banquets
    in the ornate drawing rooms.
    But at night, no amount of precious
    objects or fancy guests can fill the emptiness
    that lurks in the walls, that sleeps
    in the partisan beds.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    20.4 Include the words, "first time" or, base the poem on the idea of a first time at something.

    I encouraged myself to make
    a second first impression after
    I caught you in the record shop
    updating your Spice Girls collection.
    Years later I still see you in ways
    I never have before.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    20.5 Wild Card

    I woke up after dreaming my fingertips
    were udders, linked up like webs
    to dairy machines extracting
    all semblances of my poetry.
    And I wasn't able to....

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    20.6 Form

    Winter's frozen stare
    nestles with the frosty night
    crystalising land.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    20.7 Clothing

    The boots cut into our already swollen
    ankles as we trudged along the trenches
    to the frontline. Johnny was getting sick
    and Podge was muttering Hail Marys
    under his breath. The rifle was heavy
    in my hand and as we readied ourselves,
    mud-soaked and gaunt for the rush
    into no-mans land, I tried to remember
    the smell of freshly cut hay from
    the valleys of home.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    20.8 Love

    I often wondered about the maturity
    of people who carved cartoonised representations
    of a fist-sized, blood-filled, valve-infiltrated organ
    on trees with their summer flings
    thinking they would return in future
    to a time they will soon forget.

  • The Princess
    10 years ago

    21.1 Transportion and weather

    You were the stranger sitting across
    from me on the 9 pm train to Alexandria,
    flipping an old coin while rain entered
    through the gap in our window.

    I was the stranger sitting across from
    you, holding a book of old-city photography
    to my chest as if it were a child with
    cold hands.

  • The Princess
    10 years ago

    21.2 Must include 3 verses

    Your reflection in the mirror,
    three feet behind me, all shadow,
    light and angles shifting.

    Your hand in my hair,
    loosening my bun,
    pins falling to the floor.

    The silk of a shawl
    slipping softly from
    my shoulders.

  • The Princess
    10 years ago

    21.3 Mention Royalty

    You move your white, white
    king to safety of square G1
    but he's no match for
    my dark-eyed queen,
    mate.

  • The Princess
    10 years ago

    21.4 First time

    This is for the first time
    you removed my eyeglasses,
    Lifting cold fingers to your
    sun-warmed skin,
    asking me to feel,
    instead.

  • The Princess
    10 years ago

    21.5 wild card

    This morning life was a child
    with her hands dripping milk and
    maple syrup.

  • The Princess
    10 years ago

    21.6 Formed poem

    Last night he dreamt
    Of roses braided into her
    Violin-coloured hair and
    Eden half-sunken in her eyes.

  • The Princess
    10 years ago

    21.7 Piece of clothing

    The red dress you loved
    is now burning in the fireplace -
    for all the mistakes
    we foolishly made.