FOP #4

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    29.8 2Form

    this is the fifteenth
    time I've cried while counting these
    terrible pieces

    I must hang my hat
    up for the night, for seven
    comes way too early.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    30.1 me

    I was exhausted
    yet my hair touched
    my pillow - and my eyes
    flew wide open,
    unable to drift.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    30.2 username

    I used to love
    sitting in my grandmothers
    maple tree, high above ground
    where no one could find me,
    until the scent of homemade cookies
    filled the air.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    30.3 War

    I do declare
    that TC has a personal
    vendetta against us-
    at war forever.

    Or at least
    until tomorrow.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    30.4 money or sport

    I've never been a betting woman,
    every wager is money tossed
    down the drain.

  • Britt
    10 years ago

    30.5 wild card

    My legs look
    as though red ants
    marched over them -
    splotchy
    And itchy.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    30.6 colour and shape

    I woke up to the sun chequering
    In my room - yellow squares
    Gently reminding me of paper
    As I log on to pnq and find out
    That we've indeed burnt out britt.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    30.7 nature

    Crickets puff up their chests
    And rumble like an orchestra -

    To the crowd, only a slight chirp
    As the DJ drowns out nature.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    30.8 double form

    Sleeping dust rubbed out
    of my eye, like desert sand -
    unearthing vision.

    A dream-crushed shoulder -
    still reaching out to my phone
    pregnant with sweet text

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    31.1 myself

    I find myself a nuisance
    Even with the six-hour time difference
    Pulling my presence a little farther -

    But he keeps pulling me back
    Like A kite, and folds me up
    Until I'm hugging my knees again.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    31.2 username

    My oh my, what have you done
    To britt, surely we didn't ask her
    To stay up all night, wavering the flag
    Of FOP's pride - as I'm here again
    Back like an apology, hoping she'd
    Forgive us for sleeping early.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    31.3 war

    At one point, one needs to dismiss
    Their battlescars, like a papercut,
    And suck on their thumbs -

    In time, many more dishes
    Shall be broken, and you
    Will just have to wear gloves.

  • Baby Rainbow
    10 years ago

    PROMPTS:

    1. formed poem - but must be placed inside a free style poem. So write a normal poem, but add in a form somewhere throughout the poem.

    2. include an item of stationery, pencil, paper etc.

    3. Include a crime, or mention prison, or both!

    4. Mention homelessness, or poverty.

    5. Must include at least one rhyme.

    6. Category : sad

    7. include a piece of furniture

    8. write a poem about this site!!

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    1.1 freestyle and form

    Holy crap,
    can you believe this prompt
    a freestyle poem
    then drop in a form
    I am all written out
    but one thing I can do
    is add on the end
    a senryu

    he scratches his head
    puzzled at the lack of thought
    going into this

  • Darren
    10 years ago

    1.2 paper pencil etc

    with this pencil
    I can sketch
    your portrait
    to prove
    that you have no
    imperfections
    at least in my eyes

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    1.3 crime

    You caught me red-handed,
    hiding sachets of our locks
    mixed with blood - witchery
    to tie your veins to my heart,
    and all you did, was strike
    a match, and leave.

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    1.4 poverty/homeless

    with only lumps of bread
    he shared the street with pigeons,
    hoping for travellers to find him
    entertaining enough to take a picture
    as they tread on, double sandwich at hand

  • Saerelune
    10 years ago

    1.5 rhyme

    with hands clasped tightly,
    he strikes like a thunderclap,
    unexpected, but angry
    scarring birds as they flap
    through the trees

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    1.6 Sad

    I knew that reliving the past
    was not the best thing to do when
    the past was what it was, but
    that doesn't stop me from
    reincarnating memories, opening
    up old scars.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    1.7 Furniture

    The definition of furniture
    is fortuitous and grey: Here I
    am sitting on my bed and wondering
    if it is covered by the furniture umbrella
    of categorisation, of organisation.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    1.8 About this site

    The roundabout of PnQ will
    continue into the night until its
    cars run out of petrol.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.1 Form inside freestyle

    (Shape poetry)

    I already feel that this prompt
    will be the stumbling block upon
    which I fall
    d
    o
    w
    n
    ,
    that the irregularity of
    the marriage between
    freestyle and form
    will iritate my muse and mess
    p my inspiration.
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  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.2 Stationary

    The staple in my hand was a product
    of a deadly potion of early morning,
    hangover and the new self-stapling
    stapler somebody thought would be
    a great secret santa gift for me.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.3 Crime or prison

    I thought my drumroll heart would
    set the alarm, or that a German Shepard
    would jump out from a corner of the
    almost pitch black house - It was all
    I could hear in the night and although
    the house was empty and I nearly died
    of fright, I succeeded in making it
    a little bit emptier.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.4 Homelessness or poverty

    I remember how a teacher once told
    us how he would never give a homeless
    person money, but would instead
    offer to buy a coffee, a sandwich. I thought
    it incredible that somebody would beg for
    money and not spend it on what they needed
    to sustain life instead of wasting it on something
    that wore it away.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.5 Rhyme

    Ah rhyme, once my friend
    and now my nemesis,
    how fitting it is that I shall return
    on the last day to my poetic Genesis.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.6 Sad

    The pink roses you loved
    grew better on your grave
    than they ever did in our garden.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.7 Furniture

    Spring in my arse, cushions worn,
    uncomfortable with fabrics torn,
    to sit here longer I cannot bare,
    honey I think we need a new chair.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    2.8 This site

    Poems and Quotes and I were once
    the honeymoon period when a couple
    first meet and can't see each other's faults:
    now we are middle-aged married couple
    going about our business, dealing with our trouble.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.1 Formed poem within freestyle

    That's it, I'm done with
    all these haikus, dragging up
    google images of nature scenes
    and putting myself into them.

    No more winter nights,
    no more sunshine shimmering
    on meadows or hills.

    No sir, no more... just a second,
    how many syllables in my second verse...
    Oh! I've been hit by the haiku curse!

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.2 Stationary

    My pen sits ruefully on the desk,
    cursing the wearing-out letters on
    the keyboard edging him closer
    to retirement.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.3 Prison or crime

    I lived beside a prison once,
    we called it the hotel,
    it had lots of beds to let
    even an alarm bell!
    Full board included, gym and all,
    and me beside it, paying rent
    and food bills, ah why not,
    I'm giving up the law for lent!

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.4 Homelessness or poverty

    A barely-noticeable huddle
    near the entrance of an alleyway
    shuffled and muffled when a group
    of Superdry-wearing revelers
    passed by, shouting on the way
    to their warm beds.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.5 Rhyme

    Food delicious, food so nice,
    chocolate, pizza, chicken and rice,
    tasty treats of every-flavour sweets,
    I think I'll visit the buffet table twice.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.6 Sad

    The puppies were always full of life
    and they kept each other warm.
    Opened their eyes, their first steps,
    one month, two, and their personalities
    began to shine through. Playful and affectionate
    all six, and when we sold the one with more
    white on her back paws the others didn't
    realise they would likely never see
    their sister again.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.7 Furniture

    Unknowingly taking your bar stool when you
    were gone to the bathroom in a packed
    sports bar was the best mistake I made
    in some time.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    3.8 Poem about this site

    The fading mauve, almost as if
    once apricot splashing around this
    site is one of the most comforting
    unattractive things around.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    4.1 Form and freestyle

    (Naani)

    The date on the carton of low-fat milk,
    the buy-one-get-one free offers or
    availability of her favourite teabags
    are the worries of Mrs. Benson.

    Eighty-four, her days
    of losing sleep over
    wars or politics
    or lost relationships are finished.

    She has lived past all but
    the trivial troubles of life.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    4.2 Stationary

    It is lucky that school children aren't smart
    (or spoilt) enough to realise that
    the effort they put in for a monthly
    prize of a Frozen pencil or Despicable Me
    rubber is about as disproportionate
    as it gets.

  • Colm
    10 years ago

    4.3 Crime or prison

    The merchant navy captain transporting
    cargo from where the Red Sea greeted
    the Indian Ocean spotted a skiff in the distance,
    approaching. All the Somalian pirates
    were missing was a black, skull-emblazoned
    flag. They fired upon the ship with their
    AK's, hellbent on boarding the vast ship
    that paraded its affluence at their coast
    throughout the year. Fortunately this time
    the cargo vessel outran them and their crime
    was incomplete.