Maple's Holiday Present - Poem Entries, Time to Vote!

  • Maple Tree
    9 years ago

    It is now time to vote on these Lovely gifts I received back... What a beautiful turnout for this challenge, I am so excited!! When I first started this challenge my thoughts were to have judges, but since we had such a huge turnout and it being so close to the Holidays, I felt that site wide judging would be best!

    Yes this is a white elephant gift party!! Ha ha... I am glad you all enjoyed this challenge and while you read each poem, make sure you look at the gifts everyone received... :-)

    Everyone votes, even if you wrote a poem for this... Just send me your 1st, 2nd, and 3rd choice poems...
    Please send it like this: example:

    1st - Poem 5
    2- Poem 10
    3- Poem 2

    1st choice will have 15, 2nd will have 10 and 3rd will have 5 .... I'm terrible at math so my Husband Jim will help me tally the votes... He doesn't know it yet but he will, giggles!!

    Ok everyone, happy reading and happy Voting!
    I will post the results and winners on Friday ~

    PLEASE send me a Private message with your votes, do NOT post them in a comment below, thank you :-)

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    Poem #1

    White Elephant Disaster
    Gift:President Obama ear muffs

    Boys and girls gather around the classroom in a circle,
    it's the Friday before their winter break and all the third grade teachers
    have arranged a game of White Elephant. The gifts are piled in the center
    of the children's circle and child number one picks one to open.
    Child number two takes one as well. The third steals the first gift and
    the game continues until there is only one little boy left without a box or toy
    in his hand. So he goes to the center and gently picks up a silver box tied with
    a sparkling green bow, maybe it's a new video game, or a book to read over the break, could it be a toy train for his collection or do the others not know each other
    well enough for something like that?

    "Unwrap your presents children!" One of the teachers exclaims as the boy
    sits back down. There are dolls and cars and a few books scattered through
    the crowd, but the most unique thing of all is in the last little boy's hand.
    A pair of Alaskan earmuffs, too big for his fragile head, signed by the 44th President
    of the United States - President Obama. Such an odd gift, but maybe,
    just maybe, his dad would take them off his hands for a few dollars or so.

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    Poem #2

    The Chocolatier
    Gift:Candy that makes you dance when you eat it

    With eyes so big, round, and blue.
    For you I do have a clue.
    A Hershey's kiss is all I want this Christmas, or maybe two.
    For a Hershey's kiss is a candy that will make me dance like a kitty, and I could never say "no mas" to a kiss from you.
    The one with eyes so big, round, and blue, all I ask is for one thing, or maybe two.

    Can I have a kiss from you?

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    Poem #3

    Circular Senses
    Gift:A Merry Go Round that whistles

    When I was child on Christmas night
    with all my worries out of sight,
    like painted ponies on a wheel
    my fantasies and dreams seemed real.
    Making images with bristles
    A Merry Go Round that whistles
    Yet it is not what I could hear,
    see, smell or taste giving me cheer.
    Twas a spirit I could not touch
    that caused my mind to spin so much.

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    Poem #4

    Pixie Dust
    Gift:Pixie Dust that makes you whisper

    She smiled sweetly
    The sweet, little fairy
    Ironically named Marry Poppins
    Dainty was her hair to her tiny feet
    Like an angel she spoke...
    Well that is until she made you croak.

    Her pixie dust made you whisper
    Your darkest fears,
    Then she'd make them appear
    Laugh musically as you struggled to stay alive,

    This fairy wasn't lovely
    Not since the day her heart broke
    Her compassion vanished
    And a heartless killer consumed what used to be
    A nice, happy giving, dream fairy

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    Poem #5

    We Called Her Sniffles
    Gift:A Dragon who has the sniffles

    Bluebell butterflies flutter fluently
    Throughout these snow covered skies
    As dragons sneeze through the cream clouds

    Childhood dreams race into me
    As memories of Dragon tale story books
    Read to me when I had the flu

    Anticipation rises as I ready my
    Butterfly net preparing to catch
    A Dragon in these netted dreams

    Woosh!
    Up we go as I fly up higher then
    Any bluebell butterfly could go!

    As we sneezed though the candy
    Coated caramel clouds I whispered
    "Is this what dreaming feels like?"

    With that I awoke with the moon
    Up high and the stars smiling
    As I noticed something at my bedside

    It was a Dragon that sneezed
    Every time you squeezed her.
    With tears in my eyes i said

    "I'll call her sniffles"

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    Poem #6

    Dancer
    Gift: Squirrel that plays the violin.

    Scurrying alongside
    the dirty road,
    scavenging for a miracle,
    we often find ourselves
    lost in the direction
    we wanted to go.

    Sometimes there are
    chimes that ring
    throughout our souls,
    and soon we will find
    that Guide we should
    have listened to.

    They say the violin
    plays the saddest song,
    yet I hear a beautiful melody
    every time that bow
    glides across the strings.

    Perhaps one day,
    we will find our inner musical
    to dance to.

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    Poem #7

    A diamond that glows in the dark
    Gift: A diamond that glows in the dark

    Crystallized intelligence
    forms in caves of sheathed light,
    reprogramming what our senses feel.

    Hearts thump with anticipated exhilaration,
    love is known for being a paradox.
    Often words stutter from trembling lips.

    Symbols replace gestures with simple actions,
    pecks remain innocent between hidden veils.
    White looks gorgeous upon gossamer wings.

    Heavenly testimonies are fulfilled by promises
    of vows to live a life of happily ever after.

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    Poem #8

    The Edgar Allan Poe Doll
    Gift: An Edgar Allan Poe Doll

    My sister has a doll collection
    not unusual, you think,
    but you'd be wrong,
    for her dolls are no Barbies
    or Kens or even Raggedy Anns.

    She has a row of poets and writers
    from Chaucer to Shakespeare,
    from Wadsworth to cummins,
    from Frost to Angelou:
    Christmas gifts lining her shelf.

    Most of them are decent sorts,
    minding their p's and q's,
    they dot their i's, cross their t's,
    and never leave their spots
    mounted above their own works.

    Save one, the incorrigible Poe;
    Edgar Allan never seems to be
    where he belongs, on the tome
    of his works - red embossed
    leather binding, gold edged pages.

    I used to get the blame
    until I went away to camp
    and his wanderings continued,
    winding up under sofas
    or in the back yard.

    No one could understand
    why this macabre poet alone
    was staked out for anguish -
    unless perhaps it was fair
    recompense for all he wrote.

    Would some raven swoop down
    and carry him off unseen
    by any living creature,
    to await the rebuilding
    of the house of Usher?

    Or is he seeking a cask
    of fine Amontillado
    in a walled-up dungeon
    guarded by some grisly
    skeleton with faded grin?

    My dear elder sister,
    had you never tormented me
    I would never have sewn
    the catnip inside him
    for your black cat to relish so.

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    Poem #9

    Rage out of me
    Gift: a screaming disco ball

    You rush within me, my veins
    terrestrial planets that orbit you like
    a screaming disco ball, chained to the
    foot of a mahogany bed we never could
    quite escape from. We were criminals -
    not of the law, no, of gravity. You tried
    to love me into another galaxy but eventually
    I choked on the battleground of reality.
    Stop here. Don't save me this time. Let me
    die as my pulse ends the night and you live
    for darkness once more.

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    Poem #10

    A bird named George
    Gift: A bird named George

    Hollow Bones
    So this is how I end,
    burning with a hectic glow.
    Providing no warmth or light,
    burning away selfishly, though.

    I feel my pomp burning,
    my fat melting to rivers of sludge.
    My heart so cold didn't ignite,
    and to burn it, I didn't try much.

    My valleys of blood have already dried,
    leaving behinds streaks of blue.
    Still alive is this bastard brain,
    about my end, everything he knew.

    So as I make the endless fall,
    I see a fire but nothing burn.
    "It's no good to have hollow bones",
    from this life: it's all I could learn.

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    Poem #11

    A Plastic Flower
    Gift: A Plastic Flower

    I was once a blooming blossom,
    the most beautiful flower,
    who exuded the sweetest fragrance from my soul which elated every heart it touched.
    Each petal of mine was painted with the colours of the rainbow that brought joy to the most withered land.

    Although tinged with the element of melancholy,
    I only felt ecstatic and emanated a euphoric aura.

    But this was all once.
    I was once.

    Now, I am a flower turned into plastic that can no longer take others to an ethereal land.
    I am all but a mere show piece,
    who stays in the loneliness of glasses, away from the land of ecstasy
    and can only for a second, light up some one's face.

    Now all I am is a plastic flower.
    Dead.

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    Poem #12

    Memories this Christmas
    gift: A camel with three humps

    Still only a memory in this heart of mine,
    yet a feeling that engulfs me rests upon my soul

    I can barely think without you creeping in,
    every whisper in my ear,
    every touch of a hand leads me back
    to those moments lying in your arms...

    I'm like a camel with three humps,
    in the desert without water,
    trecking for miles with the weight of the world
    weighing me down and every step is a gift
    that brings me closer to you

    Yet you keep moving
    and my heart remembers
    you're just a mirage I cannot grasp...

    And this Christmas,
    when I thought I'd wake with you against my chest,
    I'll just have those memories, however brief

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    Poem #13

    The Happy Holiday
    Gift: A magical Fairy Wand

    Sallow lights,
    foggy skies
    white snow,
    face-nibbling December-cold;
    I remember, not so cold before.

    But this is a happy holiday,
    for after all the time of being numb
    now I'm feeling all over again,
    my heart soaked in misery,
    finally breathing in some pain.

    So I bought myself a brush
    and painted a Christmas tree,
    painted hope on the ceiling,
    I painted God above me,
    angels on the floor,
    I drew myself a window, an exit, a door..
    I set warmth to the vain wall;
    hung pictures of those I've loved,
    but have glimpsed no more.

    I watered then,
    my solid face,
    cried some spirit,
    lost my breath...
    I wept some life,
    sobbed some death.

    But this is, a happy holiday,
    for after all the time of being numb,
    now I'm feeling all over again,
    my heart soaked in misery,
    finally breathing out the pain.

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    Poem #14

    Fairy Circle (Pantoum)
    Gift: A dancing mushroom

    She gracefully glides across the moist grass
    you could see it forming to her feets side
    a peculiar creature, tall, thin and brass
    with a cap on its head, so great and wide

    You could see it forming to her feets' side
    extending its body high, it awakes
    with a cap on its head, so great and wide
    its enormous head wobbles, topples and shakes

    Extending its body high, it awakes
    around its beauteous leader it dances
    its enormous head wobbles, topples and shakes
    it bows, and to her who freed them it glances

    Around its beauteous leader it dances
    it halts to her glory and sinks in the soil
    it bows, and to her who freed them it glances
    allured by her charm, in a circle they coil

    It halts to her glory and sinks in the soil
    and so it watches as she whirls to the night
    allured by her charm, in a circle they coil
    as she lights the dark until dawns sight

    And so it watches as she whirls to the night
    a peculiar creature, tall, thin and brass
    as she lights the dark until dawns sight
    she gracefully glides across the moist grass

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    Poem #15

    Vincent's Ear
    Gift: Vincent Van Gogh's Ear (replica)

    Don't listen to what they tell you
    about Vincent's ear.
    Believe this lunatic here.
    The woman whose only quest
    is art. And whose hobby
    is designing the man of her dreams
    from artists' body parts.
    And after five years of sleeping
    with men I later excised, my masterpiece
    was still unperfected. It needed
    the final touch. And Vincent was
    standing there. I swear I could hear
    his ear screaming my name.
    So I took it out. And as I sewed
    it into the rest of the body parts,
    I stood there, in the middle of my workplace,
    satisfied, watching the man of my dreams
    finally come to life.

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    Poem #16

    Gathering in a Forest
    Gift: A tree that talks in Riddles

    In the mountains, somewhere where
    humans have yet to set their foot on,
    a gathering was taking place.

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    "Eyed from above,
    you are like an ocean of greens,
    reds, and yellows,
    Though from you,
    the thirsty remain thirsty,
    Thus,
    they must thirst for y'all so much,
    that they strip you
    even out of your roots,
    as if they are trying to wring
    out of y'all
    at least one drop
    that could satiate
    the drought
    in their souls"

    Said the Eagle,

    To which the trees replied,

    "But no matter what,
    we will stand tall."

    Then in seconds came a little frog,
    and with a hippy-jump said,

    "Croak!!!" ( In agreement )

    Then came a deer
    followed by tiger, and with
    a roar the tiger said

    "From below,
    You are my home,
    I will protect you all"

    To which the trees replied,

    "Thank you,
    Though no matter what,
    we will stand tall.
    Because the older we get,
    the strongest our barks are
    And soon, they will find out,
    that they may climb us,
    or cut us!
    But no matter what
    we will stand tall"

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    The sun set and the eagle,
    the deer, and the tiger left
    but the little frog,
    remained on her spot
    contemplating the moon
    and the sound
    of vehicles approaching
    through the night.

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    Poem #17

    Untitled
    Gift: A moon rock that glitters

    You traveled miles and miles;
    traversed through the coldest depths
    of the unknown and burned at the
    slightest embrace of life - crash landing
    upon my skin.

    The dirtiest - grungiest shade
    of slate grey that glistens under the
    crisp of sunlight;

    you were my moon rock
    that glittered - you were mines,
    and I was yours.

  • BlueJay
    9 years ago

    Wow this was a huge turnout and deciding which three to vote for was tough. Amazing pieces everyone

  • Maple Tree
    9 years ago

    Hi everyone, Voting is open until Late Friday... So continue to message me your votes! I'm off to work soon...

    Happy Voting!!

  • La Reina De Corazones
    9 years ago

    I loved the poetry here! :) Some was for the holidays some weren't and it was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Poet on the Piano
    9 years ago

    Wonderful entries... will be tough indeed to pick!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Dang this was hard!

  • Naughtymouse
    9 years ago

    These poems are awesome! Votes in :)

  • Maple Tree
    9 years ago

    Ohhhh the excitement begins!! get those votes in sweet ones :-)

  • Beautiful Soul
    9 years ago

    Great poetry y'all. Well done. Voted.

  • gumshuda
    9 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Don't people here think that Andrea deserves a gift herself, for handing out all those beautiful gifts... :-D

  • CuteThingsGoneWrong
    9 years ago

    Obviously this was a tie between every one

  • Maple Tree
    9 years ago

    The voting is wonderful! Please keep in mind, if you haven't voted please do... I will post results tomorrow :-)

  • John Doe
    9 years ago

    Oh the choice was difficult but I cast my vote!

  • Maple Tree
    9 years ago

    Waiting on a couple people for voting, The results will be posted today... I'm thinking in a few hours...

    Very excited to share the results... :-)