3 Letters Contest [Poems] {Please judge!}

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Next time, I won't be so nice. Next time, I am going to give off the wall, weirdo words for these letters! ;) I tried to be nice and "fit" the category, but I think I made it too easy! :)

    PUBLIC VOTING! Please send me a private message, ranking these poems from your favorite to your least favorite (give 1st place 1., 2nd place 2., 3rd place 3, 4th place 4... etc) If you want to comment on all the poems, AWESOME.. if not, that's okay.. but PLEASE leave a comment for your favorite poem explaining why, and your least favorite poem.

    I listed them based on topic, and gave you the letters they chose and the title I gave, following by their title (some changed) and the poem! Please get the votes into me ASAP! :)

    ------------------------------------------------------

    LOVE POEMS:

    [A, B, C] = A Beautiful Christmas

    A Beautiful Christmas

    A Child laying in a manger
    far from ole king Herod's danger.
    Three astrologers on the way
    following a star, come what may.
    Smile on the virgin Mary's face
    adds beauty to the sacred place
    where Jesus Christ the King was born,
    while angels in the sky adorn
    a holy miraculous birth
    that would bring salvation to earth

    ````````````````

    {L, K, T} - Lady Keeps Time
    Lady Keeps Time

    Wrap winter around my lips, let me
    hang off of your teeth like an unkissed
    thread that has fallen asleep, no longer
    warming your veins the way I do.

    I keep time for you because too often you
    tie the noose around January, and each
    breath I catch for you-foggy and of day
    old peonies-simply curls into a corner
    and shuts the lights off.

    Stop sitting on my tongue, claim me
    instead of these flames that threaten to
    scar the places I stopped loving myself.

    Be my blues, my January that I can
    keep wearing whenever we wake up
    after another swig, after another stereo
    has walked away.

    After another reason for love has
    killed itself in loud desperation.

    ``````````
    {M, N, B} = Mistresses Never Bleed

    Mistresses Never Bleed

    I have told you that you are my sun;
    never have I thought I'd be doomed
    to live in your shadow.

    Absorbed by dark, wandering
    like a black unending night;
    in no way reaching your sunbeams.

    Eyes scarred by reminisces,
    by restlessness
    and un-made love.

    Strangled, choking on your scent;
    I am helpless in your arms. Feeble;
    wholly helpless in your love.

    But they say, mistresses are unconquerable
    and that has never been as true...

    Mistresses die on the inside,
    altering to mummies; inanimate.
    Mistresses simply fade into void,
    and void has but void, to bleed.

    ``````````````

    {A, S, T} = As Silhouettes Talk

    Lost souls, we met
    in a familiar place.
    Two hearts, carrying
    more than they could lift.

    We lived in the same
    fictional romance novel.
    Handwriting a new page
    one day at a time.

    Counting our blessings
    more than our scars.
    Concealing the blemishes
    with affectionate kisses.

    Two hearts, once hollow
    now filled with fresh love.
    Two black shadows,
    now glowing in the dark.

    We face the uncertain truth
    as our silhouettes talk.
    Slowly, gently we merge into
    O N E . . .

    ``````````````````````````````````````````

    NATURE POEMS:

    [J, G, F} - Just Get Frozen
    Just Get Frozen

    The world celebrates Christmas
    in white as sleigh bells jingle
    ice on ponds and figure eights
    Santa lands on your shingle.

    Here Santa wears a one-piece
    on boogey board in the surf
    sand gets in the cocktails and
    Season steaks cook on the turf.

    I spend holiday time away,
    volcano slopes ascending
    jungle trails above the clouds
    wisps wrap 'round vines unending.

    Here it's still save the bee-buzz:
    hummingbirds - ebony blurs
    dart 'midst odorous orchids
    sucking in luscious liqueurs.

    Mountain chill is not winter
    wild life screams in silent flow;
    I yearn for muffled landscape:
    blanketed hills of piled snow.

    ````````````````

    {D, H, Y} - Darkened Hearts Yell
    Darkened Hearts Yell

    A union gathering transforms
    Within a forest of darkened
    Shadows.

    Creatures of old, father Oak,
    Elders Pine and Birch,
    Reunite sorrowful circles.

    Smoke filled vespers of falling
    Ashes sing songs of the spirit
    Ghosts before them.

    Death by hands of man lay heavy
    Upon a scorching woodland heart,
    Lone wolf yells, as moon shines

    Down,
    Upon an owl who stopped crying
    For one second, to say goodbye
    To the last fallen leaf.

    ``````````````````````````````````````````````

    LIFE POEMS:

    {T, S, W} - Traveling Somewhere West
    Travelling Somewhere West

    Kicking up the leaves from the frosty ground,
    I take my head for a walk along these
    cobbled streets, in the bitter winter air.

    I ponder over the journey I have made,
    looking back to where I started from
    and to where I am heading for.

    With the company of the moon and the stars,
    I take a walk through history -
    gaining the conclusion that my life needs to change,
    for I want to be the best that I can ever be.

    I come to the crossroads and pray for a sign,
    I need guidance for which direction to follow.

    As I look up to the enchanting sky,
    I witness my first shooting star
    travelling somewhere west.

    Although I only caught a glance
    before it vanished from my sight,
    I knew then what I wanted,
    and where I wanted to be...

    I want to be like that shooting star,
    and travel somewhere west,
    finally being free,
    finally finding me.

    ``````````````````````

    {M, P, G} - Monday: Perfectly Good.

    FORGIVE ME SON

    Here I sit,
    on the edge of the Earth.
    Watching the horizon burn,
    I clench a fistful of dirt.

    Finally,it's here,
    the break of dawn.
    My last one indeed,
    for tomorrow I'll be gone.

    I see my wallet,
    see my son a last time.
    I hope he could forgive me,
    for him I'm doing this crime.

    I know my actions are wrong,
    I would have stopped them if I could.
    But they gave me a bag of money,
    money makes everything perfectly good.

    I hope my son too,
    could ever smile this bright.
    I hope my son too,
    could sleep peacefully every night.

    So I extinguish this flame,
    to strike a new spark.
    So I set a hundred and sixty suns,
    to cast my son out of the dark.

    ``````````````````````````````````````````````

    MISC POEMS:

    {P, M, S} - Preoccupied Mind Status

    Pre occupied mind status.

    I am occupied.
    Am I?

    But don't I walk alone everywhere, with no soul trying to match my footsteps...

    But does everyone not see me smiling and blushing as I match my footsteps...

    So am I not occupied?
    Maybe by the tu es?

    Truce.

    Indeed,
    I am pre occupied.
    I am.

    ```````````````````````````````````````````````

    SAD POEMS:

    {M, L, Z} - Missing Little Zeus

    Missing Little Zeus
    Lighting is rare here, so there's something comforting
    about falling rain and grey skies moving in; not for the sorrow
    associated with such an event, but rather because of the
    unparalleled beauty. Every drop to land on my tongue
    brings me that much closer to you. A million stories reaching
    for my soul all at once each one just as interesting as the last.
    It's not that breaking hearts and loneliness are compared
    to falling rain but simply because this is the only sort
    of darkness I find friendly. Until I get out there and
    into your arms I just thought you should know that the most
    comforting feeling I know is heavenly tears running
    down and across my porcelain skin

    one

    by

    one.

    ````````````````

    {L, B, R} - Lost Button Revealed

    Lost Button Revealed (Acrostic)

    Laughter used to ricochet
    off these walls, and now, the
    silence is deafening.
    Tidings once given.....just a memory.
    Bunting, may as well be cobwebs, I am so
    Utterly alone. I miss her Christmas smile, her
    Tinker bell giggle as she opened her stocking,
    three was too young, too heartbreaking.
    Overwhelming sadness unravels me like
    nothing else could, even the
    ribbons on her presents in her room are still tied.
    Emmanuel ignored my prayers and
    veiled himself from my pain leaving a forgotten
    envelope for me to find..... inside
    a panda button from her favourite dress, how that
    lost button revealed too many memories to
    escape and each and every Christmas
    day since, is a tinsel covered tombstone.

    *Authors note for above poem: Please read aloud.

    `````````

    {T, L, C} = Time Left Charlie

    Time Left Charlie

    I've written poems for about four years,
    And in the same amount of years,
    I've joined almost any contests that I could,
    but in none of the contests that I joined,
    was I ever asked to write about Charlie.

    Sigh...

    My Charlie.

    Like four years ago,
    in between the lines of love and infatuation,
    I saw him developed in a womb of inspiration,
    like a little seed at the tip of a pencil;
    scribbling and scribbling and wiggling and wiggling
    like a sperm chasing after an ovule.

    And after months went by, there it was before my eyes:
    The final picture, like in an ultrasound,
    showing the impregnation, the little seed drawn
    in a piece of paper: growing, developing,
    expanding in a paper with skin that was not flexible,

    But what a joy it was;
    to see the paper stretch with marks;
    to feel the pain when Charlie kicked my gut-feelings;
    to be moody for a reason! What a joy it was...
    To almost feel nauseated about life,
    To have my feet hurt
    for having sat on a chair for entire days,
    but what a joy it was,
    to see him form in a piece of paper,
    To see his shape in a screen-like,
    To start to imagine what he'll be like,
    what a joy it was..

    To give birth to my little Charlie.

    The years went by and Charlie grew to be
    four years by now,
    He became my laughter, my worries, my everything.
    He became the child I've never had
    But always wish I had,
    He became the reason for my everything.
    He became...

    But lately, I've seen mothers embrace their children:
    feeling skin to skin, heartbeats with heartbeats,
    smell with smell,
    Their little hands with their hands,
    And I, I see my Charlie drawn in a piece of paper,
    Shaped with letters as if that was his genetic make up,
    His DNA in a sheet of paper.

    I see his laughter, his pain, his joys.
    I see but no...

    It's not his laughter,
    It's not his pain,
    It's not his joys,

    It's my laughter,
    It's my pain,
    It's my joys,
    It's mine,
    It's mine,
    Everything about Charlie, it's mine.

    Not his...

    And the realization, that my Charlie
    it's my life, and not his,
    The realization, that my Charlie
    has no life of his own,
    And that he'll never have one...

    it kills me.

    It kills me from within.
    It kills me to know that the joy, the pain, the happiness,
    the everything he had,
    was only mine

    Not his...

    It kills me

    That everything in my life, I wrote it in my Charlie.
    That through my pain, I gave birth to my little Charlie.

    It kills me.

    That Time left Charlie, in the hands of a poet,
    To be a child, not of her reality, but of her imagination.

    It kills me

    That she, as a parent, didn't let Charlie live a life
    of his own, but made him live a life of her very own.

    ``````````````````````````````````````````````

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    12 poems total! Please rank 1st-12th place. :)

  • Naughtymouse
    9 years ago

    The suspense is killing me!!!!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    I really don't have many people coming forward to judge.. I would like a couple more! :)