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  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Only two poems were entered, but posting them anyway.

    Please PM me with the number of the poem you want to win, and the winner will be announced tomorrow.

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    #1
    A Song for the Season

    It has been one love's arduous journey
    to say goodbye to black magic spells
    and accept a wedding without you
    despite the promise and it's aftermath:
    that kiss beneath the rowan tree.

    We were stealing a blessing we had
    no right to - a romance for a nanny;
    it was almost a fairy-tale:

    make three wishes and catch a star
    make it the topper ornament,
    oh what a lovely tree, and
    such a priceless gift, the card reads
    "a home for your heart!"

    Toss it out with the dross;
    this holiday is anything but past
    and the miracle is sold out:
    standing room only at the lodge.

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    #2
    Three Christmas Wishes:

    I found three shooting stars on Christmas Eve,
    though I guess really, more than anything, they were

    f
    ..a
    .....l
    .......l
    .........i
    ...........n
    ..............g

    not

    s. h.. o... o.... t.... i...... n...... g....

    I.

    So because you are not here to take the wishes
    that I would offer you. I wish for you to enjoy
    your holiday beyond belief. Smile as much as
    possible while you're surrounded by the people
    who love you most in the world - minus myself
    (of course - everyone knows I'm 1600 miles away).

    II.

    Secondly, I wish that you knew just how brightly
    you shine to me. Darling, you are the most stunning
    angelic soul I have ever seen but at the same time
    you are my lovely black hole my daemonic crimson
    breath. The worst best friend of an addiction I have
    ever known. This being said, you my love, are beautiful.

    III.

    And finally, my last wish for you, the one I hope for
    most of all - I wish I may, I wish I might, get the wish
    I wish tonight: I wish that starting this year you would
    begin a Christmas tradition of having someone lovely,
    someone brilliant and brave, kind and sweet pour
    their heart out to you as purely as possible. Because you,
    you my love, deserve nothing less than to have the entire
    universe in the palm of your hand and this is as close as
    I can get to offering you that. Please, take this as my heart.

    I found three shooting stars on Christmas Eve,
    though I guess really, more than anything, they were

    f
    ..a
    .....l
    .......l
    .........i
    ...........n
    ..............g

    not

    s. h.. o... o.... t.... i...... n...... g....

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  • Larry Chamberlin
    9 years ago

    # 1 & # 2 are ok

    but

    # 3 blows me away with it's simplicity - almost like it's not even there, yet says so much anyway.

  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Lol!

    #3 is good.

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