Title Toss Voting

  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Please read each poem and PM me with TWO votes; your first choice, and then your second voice.

    PLEASE EVERYONE VOTE TWICE TO KEEP IT EVEN AND FAIR!

    Good luck everyone, I will post the winner Sunday night.

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    #1
    I Will Never Ask You

    There are so many things
    you will stumble over
    as you forge ahead
    without me into the future.

    Life deals heavy blows
    and doesn't wait until
    you are ready for them -
    usually just the opposite.

    You must have the freedom
    to discover these sorrows
    though I'd like to shield you.

    How much less you'd be
    if I asked you to give them up
    and stay sheltered in my arms.

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    #2
    Listen

    Love,

    I understand you've
    Been confused by
    The illusions I've let loose

    But the bottom line is
    keep it
    to yourself

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    #3
    Stars and butterflies

    Do you remember when time ended?
    We swore on every falling star that we
    would find a way to make it stop;
    just for an instant, but we missed it.

    We stumbled across hearts that flowed
    like the rivers of love on the moon;
    and as we fell do you remember screaming
    "Forever is not enough, just one more eternity"

    That's when the butterfly landed on your lips.

    It's been years now and nature tends to our souls,
    singing its eternal lullabies to keep us at peace
    but the butterflies at night still try to kiss their stars
    Flying hopelessly as they shoot from the sky one by one.

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    #4
    Secret Millionaire

    Have I embraced all
    the flaws that perfectly
    shape my human-class,
    that now I feel whole?

    Dead stars shining bright
    in the axis of my eyes,
    cracks deepening in
    this heart of floods and droughts,
    a fire core blazing in my soul-
    sunshine rays combed
    within my hair,
    hurricanes in my mind,
    roots branching their
    way into the deep
    layers of life and soil
    in this globe of death and tombs.

    Showered with blizzards
    of lightning and thunder
    that awaken the lion
    of spring running wild
    in my arteries and veins;
    roaring off the smoke
    of clouds I often wear as a crown,
    for the king of endurance
    owns a kingdom in my blood.

    Patterns of diverse moons
    and planets clinging to my eyelashes,
    stirring beneath my ears,
    widening my vision to ponder upon
    and listen passionately -
    to the harmony in this
    aligned chaos of mine;
    for I've embraced my flaws
    that perfectly shape my
    origin as a human;
    an identical twin to
    this imperfect but priceless universe;

    such a secret millionaire.

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    #5
    The End of Time

    Time is just an illusion
    measured by created suns.
    Egocentric delusion
    that we are the only ones
    who're working toward an end.
    What is an end, but a start,
    another chance to transcend
    to a loving sacred heart
    of infinite sole choices,
    to accept or reject light,
    silence or lifted voices,
    drifted out of our sight?

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    #6
    Keep It To Yourself

    No one desires to witness these outbursts,
    coffee grounds staining palms as love
    burns you, never fully out of your system.
    They're measuring you up, you know?
    Molding, building, mentoring with good
    intentions but you already struggle with
    the project of recovery. You still sleep
    next to bricks, exhaling locomotive steam
    because you hold yourself back -
    it's trying to travel without a backbone.

    No one, that you've known on this earth yet,
    will think of you both in the sunlit days and
    pain-darkened nights. No one can love you
    as brightly as you yearn for, rising from dreams,
    conviction in your chest, footsteps sure and steady.
    No one can accept you instantly and unregrettably.

    No one (but God).

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    #7
    slave across the street.

    hearken! for here he strips off dignity, though
    it's been chipping away for years. he never closed
    the door to temptation, so it knocks at 8 a.m. when
    he brushes his teeth near the mirror still foggy
    from a cold shower. his vices stalk him, no matter
    where new leases lead him.

    he invites the worst of him in, because he's too afraid
    that if he shatters their hold on him, he will wilt,
    not knowing how to sow and encourage life.

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  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Wow!

    You have ALL voted for different poems!!!

    Please vote if you have not voted already, it will help me out very much!

  • BlueJay
    9 years ago

    Wow, these are wonderful. very difficult to choose.

  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    4 people have voted... but every single poem has a vote next to it!! I will extend this through the night, and post the results in the morning, in hope that more people will vote! :)

  • Poet on the Piano
    9 years ago

    Voted! Hopefully more vote to break a tie.