RTR Hurtful City

This is a poem based on the translation of a song. The original structure and rhyming (every line) is lost in direct translation. For the poem, I used ABAB rhyming with wording that alternate in pronunciation where possible/suitable. The acrostic played out quite well to return the poem to a lyrical state. Please read and comment/pm if there's any resonating appeal/connection with Hurtful City. Much appreciation either way :)
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1241072