Number Game - Voting

  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Hi everyone! Please read the following poems and PM me with TWO votes each. 1st place, then 2nd place.

    Winners will be announced on Saturday morning! :)

    Good luck all!

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    #1
    Some Things Are Yet To Be Daffodils

    Your footsteps have built a metropolis,
    yet we remain
    in the distant plateaus
    where Manila faults meet,
    looking into a host of flowers,
    waiting for their shadows
    to turn amaranth.

    At a boulevard,
    one crystal night,
    May came barefooted
    (as she always is),
    slipping into my window,
    never bothering to wake me up...
    She remained placid and pensive,
    all I heard was the echoes
    of your footsteps...

    ...they camped
    deep within my heart
    where every dejavu lives on.

    Your underground promises
    have built a city,
    yet we remain here in
    these distant plateaus,
    looking into a host of flowers,
    waiting for them to turn

    into Daffodils.

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    #2
    Innocence Longings

    I wrote your name upon my soul, though your face drifted
    along the river of
    childhood amnesia.

    I yearned
    for nostalgia;
    hoping she will recall
    the roaming memories of you.

    While the tiny pieces you held
    together were washed away
    with the flowing bitter
    rough waters.

    I,
    stood within
    the valley of hope,
    earnestly waiting for
    you to return and sing your
    final medleys over my shoulders..

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    #3

    Horizons Hope

    Looking into the sunset,
    I watch the shadow of my heart
    skim over ice cream waves
    and disappear.

    Just like the sun, it searches.
    Counting minutes in between
    dark hours, whilst hungering for
    the sweetness of
    a morning kiss
    to bring it back once more
    above the sea,
    and banish shade.

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    #4
    Back To The Heart

    Lush
    lips kiss
    rubicund
    cheeks rebirthing
    innocent feelings.
    Infatuation yearns
    for flickering temptations
    through mahogany eyes that lick
    flames of passion; souls intertwine with
    heartbeats curling up with innocent love.

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    #5
    It was a war to remember,
    everything was always only ever
    all about you, but now
    it's time for you to hit the road -
    get out of here. It's hard to
    hear your name when everything
    reminds me of the starting line.

    I'm looking into your eyes
    through photographs of a long,
    long time again. And it doesn't help
    knowing that you're home
    all alone, curled up in a ball
    under your big purple blanket
    with red puffy eyes, and a
    shattered heart.

    What happened to us Dear?

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  • Beautiful Soul
    9 years ago

    Voted, nice poems all

  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Keep voting people, winner will be announced tomorrow :)

  • BlueJay
    9 years ago

    Voted, whoa these were amazing!

  • cassie hughes
    9 years ago

    Fantastic and so difficult to choose. :)