I need your critiques and comments.

  • DarkLight
    9 years ago

    Hi. I have poems I would like to hear people opinions and critiques.
    1. Confession.
    2. Silver love
    3. Fantasy rule
    4. Miscarriage of Insomnia
    5. Rose flower heart
    6. Online colony
    7. Black and beautiful
    8. Pure lie
    9. Mine is grave.