New Challenge!!! *Astronomy*

  • Hellon
    9 years ago

    Yep..based on the recent Pluto flyby (which is still going on I think) I challenge you to write an acrostic poem, using the word ASTRONOMY. Doesn't have to be about Pluto..that is just a prompt for you guys...the usual, a 4 day event so....GET CRACKING!!!

    Post them here....

  • Michael D Nalley
    9 years ago

    Astrology
    Symbolizes
    Theories
    Revealed
    Of
    Natural
    Observation
    Manifesting
    Years of heavenly curiosities

    ...OK ,I borrowed a few ideas from Kansas
    https://youtu.be/g0zSB2WEtwU

  • Larry Chamberlin
    9 years ago

    ASTRONOMY

    Astral bodies known to our forebears
    seemed to move among the stars;
    they were people in the sky
    revered and named as gods
    over man's fleeting existence -
    never ending beings of heaven
    on whose whims men lived or died;
    mortals might even be raised up:
    yearning for glory, man warred for gods.

  • Poet on the Piano
    9 years ago

    Crystal would love this!

    A 100 billion stars...
    sun's light doesn't grace you
    that quickly, 8 minutes pass until it
    reaches your recognition.
    Observations from ancients pin
    new positions, calendars created
    on stone monuments; the
    most important energy source - a
    young and brilliant goddess.

  • Everlasting
    9 years ago

    A star in my eyes gleamed
    Since the moment I saw him
    The night was still young
    Right when he approached me
    Oh I fell my universe unravelled
    Not to mention, my head spinning with a question
    "Oh God, why are you asking me?"
    My reply was, "No, thanks. Dance with her."
    Yet he still insisted, would you dance with me?

  • Hellon
    9 years ago

    Wow!!! Great entries so far...well done guys.

  • Hellon
    9 years ago

    Are there any more 'stars' out there? There's still time left for you to 'shine'. :)

  • Hellon
    9 years ago

    Just checking the p&q clock.

  • Hellon
    9 years ago

    Ok...I'm pretty sure the dead-line is now over. I have read the four entries over and over and...as no other 'stars' shot into this galaxy I can...without hesitating pronounce the winner. Can I first say that to win gains you no awards in my little random contests...they are only meant to get you writing forms that you have perhaps shied away from in the past so...in that respect you are all winner in my eyes. Acrostics, IMO, are not easy to write because, generally the flow is interrupted as you try to meet rules and, in this respect I think Michael was very clever in keeping all but one of his lines to a single word...some may feel it was a sentence but...even so, it was an extremely clever approach so...take a Bow Michael D Nalley. Thanks to all who entered...

  • Everlasting
    9 years ago

    Congratulation Michael!

  • Larry Chamberlin
    9 years ago

    Yes, nice one Michael.

  • Michael D Nalley
    9 years ago

    Thanks to all of you