Contest Voting

  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Please read each poem and PM me with

    TWO VOTES -
    1ST PLACE
    2ND PLACE

    and I will announce the winners Saturday midnight. (UK time)

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    #1

    I.

    Her soul lights the galaxies;
    she teaches fire to the drifting
    sun and faithless moon, dashing
    out of corners of the world that
    have been too neglected, untouched,
    without a spark. She sleeps miracles,
    realizing how graceful the human soul is.

    II.

    Her lungs - black holes,
    tattoos of mythical lives
    she fantasizes about, stories
    that thrive then fade into the dark
    smoke that always chokes her. She
    crawls into nothingness, realizing
    how weak the human body is.

    III.

    These two women live in separate
    beds, in alternate universes. One
    a constant leap ahead, one pushed
    down by life's cruel tides.
    They're not married, no, they're
    two identities fighting for a voice -
    light and dark attempting to love each
    other despite the discord that can't always be
    forgiven.

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    #2
    Gravedigger

    Breathe air in my lungs,
    you're the only addiction
    I will ever need.

    Sentiments ripple
    through ocean reflections when
    waves crash on blue shores.

    Hearts can break when you're
    gone; death is ambiguous
    when it fills a void.

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    #3
    Hold My Hand And Bring Me To The Sun

    Catch my heart before it plummets
    from this lofty perch onto the
    stony ground that lies beneath,
    to shatter 'midst a million broken dreams.
    Dry the tears which follow in its wake
    to paint a salty trail down cheeks
    no longer flushed with loves wild promise,
    after hope of reconciliation fails.
    Hold my hand as icy fingers trail
    a hot tattoo of pain around my heart
    when real life crashes in with sudden,
    fierce all-consuming fury.
    Soothe my soul when all I wish
    is for a hole to open up and swallow
    down the senseless desperation
    for a love long lost but by myself denied.
    Hide away the told you so's that
    spout in painful bursts from lips
    now eager to recall the painful truth,
    that loss hurts even more the second time around.
    Stay beside me as I gather up what's left
    of pride and build a bonfire for the
    tattered remnants of a life spent living in the past,
    then turn me round and point me t'wards the sun.

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    #4
    Eighteen and Counting

    It seems I've spent years learning
    to understand how to get it right
    having been granted a chance
    this second time around.

    You make it hard sometimes
    until I realize that I'm the one
    making it harder than it needs
    then the path is easier to amends.

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    Good luck all!

  • Beautiful Soul
    9 years ago

    Voted, good luck all

  • cassie hughes
    9 years ago

    Voted. Great pieces!

  • Baby Rainbow
    9 years ago

    Winner announced tonight, for those who haven't voted - still a few hours left!

  • cassie hughes
    9 years ago

    Do you have a winner yet Saffie?