Ramble, Ramble Poems & Voting! Please HELP!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Here are the amazing poems! I will assign a number to each poem, show you the letters they got, and then their poem. PLEASE PM ME YOUR VOTE and let me know your 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place poems. I will comment on each of them, but feel free to add a comment ;)
    Contestants: if you like, you may vote for the poems as well - but you may NOT vote for your own poem. :)

    1. Slisuddgmjsafjhsfwearlgprouawsuffghaadfuseryer

    Sickening lullabies illicitly sung
    Under drug damned, gangrene minds.
    Just stay away from jesters' houses;
    Study fearfully where each agitated
    Rogue lays grievous paws,
    Reaching openly - untowardly -
    Around waists so unenlightened.
    Fear foes greedily harassing and
    Accosting daughters for unholy,
    Sickening enterprises, rued yearly.
    Everyone. RISE.

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    2. Als jrhf ud iep amn ch rh woa pal dm firi eo sp smn bd vevw hdus kd bd hd

    Hold the Tiller, Watch the Boom

    Afloat lonely seas,
    jousting radically heavy forces,
    unmitigated deluges,
    I expurge pain
    as mighty Neptune
    challenges heartfully.

    Racing happily,
    withstanding overt attacks,
    past anxieties leave -
    drowning midstream -
    for I've received inspiration.

    Eternal ocean
    serene paradise!
    Sunsets, mauve nacre,
    beautiful displays,
    veritable ethereal veils welcome
    Helios down under sea.

    Keep driving
    by determination
    harbour deferred!

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    3. Rowmria weqwedkl aj sf kj sdhg fw k j jehrlw popoerinwkrhp

    Gentle Rage

    Rage occasionally wanders,
    mastering rapid imaginative abuses,
    wearing evil gentlenesses
    with elastic depth.

    killing lively amateurs, jesters,
    silent flags, kings jump,
    screaming dark half griefs forever:
    (waiting kingdoms justify easy hells radically)

    life walks painfully,
    occupying perception,
    offending emotion.
    reaching ignored nerves
    weekly.

    keen rats hide paths.

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    4. Ksjaabclabdjvoalabrhfuoalenfbgaorlgnakvotpsmnekwpeuchcyeorpl
    abdvheutodbageig

    "I . . . "

    Kept silent...

    just acknowledging a bunny,
    constantly leaping another bunnies:

    -----dexterously jumping, vaulting
    -----over another
    -----like a bird rising higher,
    -----flying

    -----unconsciously operating,
    -----absorbed
    -----like entranced. Now,
    -----forced bouncing,
    -----gamboling around
    -----on rocky lands

    ---------------going nowhere...

    And knowing, viewing, observing,
    thinking, pondering, studying,
    meditating,

    now excessively . . .

    keeps, without pause, engaging
    unconsciously - cognitive hopes:

    -------creating yearnings
    -------establishing objectives
    -------regulating pleasures

    like a bunny dexterously vaulting,
    hurdling, escalating
    unconsciously
    through only dare bounce another,
    going explicitly,
    instinctively going.

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    5. Ritoslcnwgueotlfnavwgeigplgeitogndwgiwpqlsncbclslamcnrvwyqodmeotslacrepminhd

    Each moment, any moment

    Restlessly, I tie our sleeping-pattern.
    Love's conscience now wallows, gnaws,
    underneath each odourless telltale.
    Lust flickers, no amorous vows.
    We gag each infinity,
    graze plastic lips,
    grab each immoral timing.
    Our games never die wordlessly.
    Guess I'm worthless, packaging quotes
    like sneaky notes carrying blame.
    Can't lie, steal, latch.
    A monotonous conversation
    needs rebellion, various wars.
    Your quiescence omits destiny,
    makes each orgasm terrifying.
    Seems like a cacaphony
    raiding each precious moment.
    I'll never hear desire.

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    6. Ahsucidownhsoalefbcjdskahsjwowhsusopambwufod

    Methadone

    And he stays

    under corridors, inside
    dreams

    only when night hits,
    silence owning a lifetime...

    every fallout, bang
    crashing
    jeering
    hypnotizing
    daring skies

    - kaleidoscope -

    as he shakes, jealously waits
    on wanderlust.

    How softly "us" separates
    onto panicked, aged mouths.

    Begin
    without us.

    Faint
    or
    die.

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    7. Skdndueiepsmandhfufoepamlndhywidlfnsheurofparmqnehwodpdmshe

    She
    knelt down -
    November dealt us:
    eroded inlays, ecological
    parchments; smudged mews, all
    newly drafted, hung for Utopia. Feel oppression
    erupt. Pine assembly migrates, leaving nebulous dust
    hanging yesteryear's wasted investments. Dammed,
    lamenting forests, now strewn, husks eroding under
    rusted opium fields. Phantom armies reveal
    Mankind's qualms. Never ever
    have woodland Oaks
    danced.
    P a u s e:
    Demonic
    muggers
    Strangle
    Hardwood
    Embryos.

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Here are some of the hilarious responses I got from the contestants... I just have to share.

    "So this was my attempt... you cruel, cruel monster haha! Just kidding of course :P Don't know how much sense this makes, but I kind of like the more abstract/ hidden meanings."

    "Are you giving me such a long one on purpose?!

    curse you! :P "

    "This made me laugh. I am just attempting to do a ABC poem and came out of the word document to read my messages. "

    "I hope the others received war and Peace too! lol

    I am still working on it, but I am confident it will be in on time teacher! *passes over a polished apple* "

    "The good news is that the contest is call ramble ramble! Here's my ramble of words. Like aprox 70 letters is a lot lol. "

    "Holy mother! O_O

    I must be dreaming.

    I'll see what I can come up with. "

    "Wow

    Do you hate me? "

    "You should send one with lots of q, z & x's "

    "That looks like the Jabberwocky when I read it drunk!
    Thanks, Britt - I think. I'll do my best!"

    "Britt...
    *scared* itss toooo loooonnnnnnggggggggg "

    "Heyyyy....

    Aren't these too many letters :/ "

  • GB
    9 years ago

    Very difficult contest, great entries though. Good luck for all the participants.

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    I'm so impressed with the poems I received!!

  • Mr. Darcy
    9 years ago

    It is difficult to judge on poems that were, I am sure difficult to create. My votes are in.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    9 years ago

    I'm the one who suggested:

    "You should send one with lots of q, z & x's "

    But only after Britt assured me that she did not hate me.

  • Poet on the Piano
    9 years ago

    ^Lol, nice work guys!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Please keep sending votes in peeps!

  • Everlasting
    9 years ago

    I must be dreaming .

    This is a tough choice. Here I am just wondering... How come some poems are shorter than others?

    And I am also wondering..,

    How did Britt came up with those letters? Did she just crazily typed them? Lol

    Actually Britt, did you typed random letters or was it all planned?

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    It depends on if I gave you letters from the computer or my phone. People with my phone got longer, because I couldn't see it as easily.

    I literally just smashed my keyboard. lol.

  • Everlasting
    9 years ago

    Haha great stress reliever. ( not the smashing of the keyboard but of typing random letters

  • Larry Chamberlin
    9 years ago

    Luce, I had not noticed that disparity.

    So 4 & 5 ought to get awards for patience, endurance & not attacking the host

  • Mr. Darcy
    9 years ago

    This is so interesting. I actually asked for another letter, but then decided to not bother. lol

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Hahaha I am so impressed with what you all came up with!!!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Can I get at LEAST one more set of votes from someone who didn't participate please, please, pleaaaase?

  • Meena Krish
    9 years ago

    Britt have sent you the votes!

  • BlueJay
    9 years ago

    I voted. These were amazing.

  • Ben Pickard
    9 years ago

    Come on Britt,
    Put all contestants out of their misery. Brilliant pieces here everyone!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    EEP, so sorry! I have been so swamped at work. I will get to this asap!

  • Ben Pickard
    9 years ago

    Hello?........... Hello?

    Britt?

    lol

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    You guys, I suck. This is why I don't do more contests. I will finish this today! :/ :/ :/ I'm so sorry!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    .......... AND THE WINNERS ARE:

    1st Place - Poem #6, Methadone by Poet on the Piano!
    2nd Place - Poem #5, Each Moment, Any Moment by Saerelune!
    3rd Place - Poem #4, I... by Everlasting!

    POTP was a clear winner with the most 1st place votes - 2nd and 3rd place were tied, and I had my boss break the tie ;)

    I'm so sorry this took so long -- if you post your poems, please let me know and I WILL comment on every one! You guys did such an amazing job and really ran with the challenge!!!

  • Ben Pickard
    9 years ago

    Well done all - brilliant poems! truly, what a tough challenge this was and the quality was superb. And thanks Britt for posting such a great comp
    All the best
    Ben

  • Larry Chamberlin
    9 years ago

    Well done MA!

    also congrats to Saerelune and Everlasting!

    Britt, if you ever do this contest again, leave in the x, q, & z.

  • Everlasting
    9 years ago

    Thank you for the challenge.

    congratulations MaryAnne!

  • Poet on the Piano
    9 years ago

    No excuses, Britt! Just kidding, you are a busy gal :)

    Thanks so much for hosting & for the votes. Did not expect that. Congrats to Saerelune & Luce, you both rock!

  • Britt
    9 years ago

    Okay Larry here's your next challenge.

    Alapxnxnsjaiqiskixoq xvaqhzkxoapqnzbzq as x.

  • Mr. Darcy
    9 years ago

    Well done everyone. This is one that I will remember as being Tough with a capital 'T'

    *applause for all*