Free comments from Saerelune

I've been away from poetry for far too long, and also abandoned my responsibilities as a member of pnq. Therefore, free comments if you request them down here. :)

RULES:
- 1 poem request per post
- you can request a new poem again once I've commented on the one you requested before

Just to keep myself sane :P

Cheers!

When Water Is The Tricky Kind - only if you have time.
Many thanks and please feel free to pm me if you have anything specific you'd like read.
All the best,
Ben

Ben: done. :)

Frozen heart please I'll return the favor! :)

This one if you don't mind

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1248072

This one if you don't mind

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1248072

Many thanks - a great comment with some very helpful suggestions.

Moria: done.

No problem Ben, it was a pleasure to read your poem. :)

Thank you! :)

No problem Moria. :)

Lucero: I just commented on yours.

Anyone else who wants more comments? I am a bit slow but I'm trying to do this as best as I can. :)

Two trained cats please! :)

Generational ;)

Would you mind commenting on my newest poem "Fight".

Any of mine would work, just been awhile since i've had one and s'pose i'd enjoy it a bit.

Hi just put this one up yesterday its completely something new. Its inspired by a painting called five bells. Wonder what you make of it.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1249497