Space - Imagination without Limit - Contest Poems VOTE!

  • Larry Chamberlin
    8 years ago

    Space - Imagination without Limit
    Here they are, arranged alphabetically and presented for your appreciation and votes.
    Send me your vote by PM:
    10 points for first place,
    7 points for second place and
    4 points for third.

    I'll leave the voting open through Monday.

    1 The Apprentice
    2 Bones
    3 Continuing mission... (13 films and counting)
    4 The Expansion of Thoughts
    5 Forbidden fruit - (Sonnet)
    6 Inner Space
    7 Leonard Nimoy - 1931 - 2015 (Syntuit)
    8 Theory of Generality
    9 Untitled

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    1 The Apprentice

    Darkness brews an
    evil that lurks within
    a split mind,
    psychopath
    is born upon
    a star of death.

    Horned, disfigured
    eyes of the bloodiest
    river, flowing electric
    veins connect with
    a light saber, slashing.

    Darth Sideous's love child-

    a spawn of horned evil
    evolution gone wrong.

    The universe of mayhem
    cradles cells of a demon,
    hatred welcomes....

    Darth Maul.

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    2 Bones

    Blood spilled here
    blood spilled there
    your lifeless body
    displayed in a chair
    looking for evidence
    "Oh look, I found a hair!"

    One FBI agent
    named Agent Booth
    gets on my nerves
    while I'm looking for proof
    I'm the best anthropologist,
    bones always tell the truth.

    In season six we give in
    to our certain desires
    from the start, a rocky relationship
    filled with secret admirers
    Pelant killing friends
    his plan eventually backfires

    Free to marry
    continue our jobs
    Booth ends up in jail
    I keep taking crime scene swabs
    I save his life yet again
    he makes my heart throb.

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    3 Continuing mission... (13 films and counting)

    Star Trek: The Motion Picture teleported young minds, watching,
    The Wrath of Khan on Betamax tape warped dreams, where,
    The search for Spock like aliens became a mission,
    The Voyage Home, to find life, to discover,
    The Final Frontier was actually,
    The Undiscovered Country, my own earth, where
    Generations of my kin had lived before.
    First Contact came without notice, my personal
    Insurrection against a
    Nemesis whose loved to mock
    Star Trek, saying, thrust
    Star Trek into Darkness - I would say:
    Star Trek Beyond your comprehension my humanoid fool.

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    4 The Expansion of Thoughts

    It is through you, my beloved, poetry
    that I have found a universe.
    One that expands each and every day
    with the thoughts I never thought
    I would have one day.
    It is through you that I can see
    with my mind.
    But also that with my mind,
    I can feel emotions that I hadn't felt before
    like as if someone's touch
    was cast upon my skin
    even when not

    Poetry,
    I dare say
    that the moment when I met you,
    It was as if we experienced the Big Bang!
    It was some sort of explosion
    that has no explanation
    but it caused a commotion
    in my heart...
    then suddenly,
    my thoughts started to expand...

    (Out of nowhere!)

    it's as if those thoughts started
    to be like a universe
    full of galaxies
    that I must began to explore

    Through out my life,
    I had remained locked in my own Earth.
    Not wanting to think
    what was beyond.

    but poetry,

    something came along
    and it made me realize
    that there's much more...

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    5 Forbidden fruit - (Sonnet)

    Your imaged swayed between the licking flames,
    Cracking a fortress carved from Godly rock.
    Why did your furrowed gaze pull on my name,
    Teasing the chains that shook upon the lock?
    Our faiths are born from worlds light years apart,
    With kin that will defend all bloodline sins.
    How can this love bear out such selfish art,
    as Bat'leths' swipe the night for traitor skin?
    Religion gifts a light for those lost souls
    Seeking a path to lead them through the storm.
    When love becomes the brightest star of gold,
    Cling onto human new life to be born.

    When hearts deliver promise to this land,
    Allow the stars to save the warring clans.

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    6 Inner Space

    I once sat in the dark in my parents' basement and wrote songs
    of nebulae,
    deep space, and Jupiter.
    I scribbled them into a unifying album, Solar Rising, and
    I knew myself as Luna Rebellion.
    I felt young enough then to make huge decisions

    later.

    Decisions like will I spend my impending fortune on moon visits?
    Will I be one of the brave few to live and die on Mars?
    Will I discover my hidden genius in astrophysics?
    Will NASA write me into its history?

    I listen to words I wrote a decade ago
    while sitting hunched in a small room over my desk.
    The same image, but not the same person.

    I haven't sung of space beyond this one for years,
    and I don't know if I should laugh at my optimistic youth
    or cry because I've grown too old to dream.

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    7 Leonard Nimoy - 1931 - 2015 (Syntuit)

    Ambassador Spock
    Knew fulfillment required time:
    Live long and prosper

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    8 Theory of Generality

    You could call it a dream
    but it is not as it seems;
    it's a hallucination/
    universal vibration.

    Married to the minimal
    I'm throwing electrons, still
    hoping one
    hits a home run
    or grazes a star
    near where you are.

    I believe in the vacuum,
    a path to a sacred room
    where I am warmly received,
    helped up from my knees;
    it is Nature's duty to forgive
    all that is relative.

    What guides me through the human condition
    is her code, etched into our intuition.

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    9 Untitled

    It all started here, in the scorching sands of
    Egypt, our petty human commands nothing
    compared to travel across intergalactic worlds.
    You, the superconductive minerals
    I, the ring you center on.

    I am the portal and you are the bridge to
    extraneous planets.

    Put away your goddamn guns.
    Those toy soldiers.
    Those collectible spaceships.
    That's not the way to save the world
    and you know we're not here to protect
    what never could shelter us.

    This world failed us.
    It's too human for us to remain.

    Our love - interstellar
    for we will rename ourselves, far above
    what the Earth is known for.

    They worship Ra, while I worship you.
    So get on your knees, boy.

    Be my Starboy.

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    Poem inspired by the sci-fi show "Stargate"
    Title also inspired by The Weekend's new song "Starboy" (also the name of his new album)

  • hiraeth
    8 years ago

    +1 for starboy reference

    excellent poems!

  • Em
    8 years ago

    Some excellent pieces here. I shall send in my votes later when I've had chance to re-read.

  • Naughtymouse
    8 years ago

    AMAZZZZZING:)

  • ether
    8 years ago

    This is going to be such a hard vote - I'm gonna need at least 24 hours to deliberate. Well done!!

  • BlueJay
    8 years ago

    These are amazing!

  • Darren
    8 years ago

    Great job

    voted.

  • Mr. Darcy
    8 years ago

    Superb - out of space - cosmic!

    My votes are warping their way to you Larry.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    8 years ago

    I have six votes so far plus one member included comments.

  • Em
    8 years ago

    My votes/comments have been sent

    Edit: When will this be announced?

  • Larry Chamberlin
    8 years ago

    This is the final day for votes/comments. Good turnout & I'll post it tonite.

  • Em
    8 years ago

    Good luck everyone.

  • Phil
    8 years ago

    So sad to have missed this.