i long to be a good writer so very badly

Yeah me too. Most of my poetry is complete shit :D Just keep writing and with practise you might get better. Sorry I cant think of anything more helpful to say!

Write about things that have happened in your life, or your emotions, if they are your true feelings I think that makes poetry beautiful. Keep writing though :) xxx

Just read your poetry, both you and Rachel are sooo good! I can't believe you say your getting no where, you both have so much talent :) xxx

I agree violet, you two have some really good poems Ive read them before, dont feel like you have to right all the time, just when you feel like it