One Sad Line

Name : Augustus Black
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Augustus Black
7 years ago, updated 7 years ago

Here is mine:

On an old rocking chair she used to rock her kids to sleep; arms empty now, she starts to weep.
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Like to see yours. It should be interesting.

- Name : Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
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Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
7 years ago

A pinch of Love is lethal and falling in love is fatal

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- Name : H. Elizabeth
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H. Elizabeth
7 years ago

Deep down in my heart, it will always be him.

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- Name : Em
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Em
7 years ago

I want something I cannot have, ever.

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- Name : Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
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Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
7 years ago

^^^

Hi Pretty girls. ..

I love you, you love me, but it can't be

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- Name : Azrael
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Azrael
7 years ago

Where does goodness hide when evil takes over.

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- Name : Augustus Black
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Augustus Black replied to Azrael
7 years ago, updated 7 years ago

Azrael - That's a great sad line. But we need to have faith towards God.

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- Name : Azrael
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Azrael replied to Augustus Black
7 years ago

I have plenty of faith towards God, my sad line was more geared towards the current state of the World.

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- Name : Augustus Black
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Augustus Black replied to Azrael
7 years ago

I'm completely agree with your statement. Your one line explained a lot. Take care.

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- Name : Shruti
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Shruti
7 years ago

It's easy to say 'I don't care', but very hard to really stop caring...

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- Name : Azrael
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Azrael replied to Augustus Black
7 years ago

Thanks, you take care as well.

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- Name : Gem
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Gem
7 years ago

Goodbye may seem forever. Farewell is like the end. But in my heart's the memory, and there you'll always be.

Fox and the hound

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Name : silvershoes
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silvershoes
7 years ago

Time steals you further and further as your little body disintegrates in the cold, dark earth beneath my feet, and my breath still rattles in my empty lungs and my broken heart somehow finds its beat.

- Name : Augustus Black
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Augustus Black
7 years ago

Result

1st - Azrael
2nd - Silvershoes
3rd - Gem

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- Name : 2luv
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2luv
7 years ago, updated 7 years ago

didn't know this one was over sorry

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