Brookeღ
19 years ago
I would have to say One Year Since! It was written with such true emtion behind it. U could feel ur pain as u read the poem. I lost my grandpa and I know how I was feeling as the time would pass. You never forget the people u love but as time goes by u learn to deal with the hurt. It's a part of life that we all have to except. U have a talent for writing and I picked up on that the very first time I read ur poems. U went on my favorites that day. U write what is real and true to ur heart. Thats what I like so much about ur work. I also like the fact that u were honest with me about my poems you have given me a new outlook on my writing I read them over and over and I now can see everything u were saying. I thank you so much for ur help. Oh and my son I have made the choice for him I picked Robert Frost one of my favorite poets and I think I made the right choice for him Fire And Ice it goes along the lines of the ice storm we just had this year. It hits home because we spent over a month in a hotel. Well thanx again! Keep up the writing! I will always be a fan of ur work! Brooke |
Hurtingsoul
19 years ago
i really liked the one year since too plus the final day that was great too!!! i loved both of them one year since showed true feelings in it so much emmotion .. the final day was good something about it caught my attention |
miss scooby
19 years ago
Mr.Bob your my hero. ;) |
miss scooby
19 years ago
I am a canadian??....And yah whats your point?....lol |
miss scooby
19 years ago
LOL ahaha no worries, I am too. Mabey its because i am canadian eh ;) |
Anne Conner
19 years ago
I liked One Year Since to. It had so much heart in it. That is what I like in poems emotion or creativity. I loved how you mention God in some of your poems it's real encouraging! |
Anne Conner
19 years ago
It's always an encouragement to other Christians when they no that they are helping others. I will be sure and comment (vote) on those poems as soon as possible. |