Wake Up (Time to VOTE)

Hello everyone, This was a quickie challenge just to get the poetic juices flowing and what beauty I have collected, just stunning Senryu's and Haiku's

Please send me your vote , you may choose only ONE that you feel stands out about the rest, I will grant 10 points... we have a today and tomorrow to vote, please send me your votes via private message. I will post the winners on Monday

Have fun everyone -

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#1

Wake up dead man (senryu)

Rainbow chasing joy
Flying, falling, slow running
Alarm resurrects

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#2
Smokey Mountains Spring

Rays burst between peaks
Melting snowcapped mountain tops
Mother bear peers out

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#3
Wake Up (Senryu)

through my grazing mind
unicorns suddenly jolt
at my barking dogs

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#4
Don’t Get Up

Rustling outside
BEARS ARE RUMMAGING THE CAMP
back in sleeping bag

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#5
Steps Away

Dew drips on flower
makes it droop and spring back up
trail becomes lightened

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#6

I've been dead for years
then she leaned against my back -
now my branches bend.

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#7
Waking Up

Good morning sunshine,
busy bees and humming birds,
spread your hope and joy.

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#8
Bad Dream

I open my eyes
For a moment I question
Is this a nightmare?

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#9
The bird which lives on a maple tree... Haiku

For the little bird,
spring couldn't harvest any sap
of a maple tree.

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#10
The wrong fairytale?

Leaning over to
kiss his sleeping beauty's lips
He became wolf's tea

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#11
Coma

Consciousness returned
to my sons eyes as my prayers
were answered today

Terrific!

these are all very well written

#4 made me laugh as the experience is familiar. I’ve had quite a few bear interactions while camping ;). I think I would consider “rustling” 2 syllables, though it could easily be 3.

#9 I believe has an extra syllable in line two?

Keep the votes coming in folks... whoooot, I will post 1st,2nd,and 3rd place

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