ddavidd
5 years ago, updated 5 years ago
Today was the worst day ever |
Poet on the Piano
replied to ddavidd
5 years ago
Very neat and honestly, to me this seemed like an exercise in perception. |
ddavidd
replied to Poet on the Piano
5 years ago
It must be good for perception, I agree. I haven't try to come with a version of my own yet. First it is hard to find any subject as easily reversible as depression. Reversing like this I am sure would have a very positive psychological effect on the reader, because at first, it lets the depression settle and sinks in every sentence and then one by one goes and reverse every single negativity. This must be invented by a psychologist, on purpose, because it is very deliberate, turning the feeling inside out. The translation (I suppose it was) was lousy, so I did not spend too much time repairing, turning it to English. Though I know investing some time, one could come with a great piece of one's own. |
ddavidd
replied to Poet on the Piano
5 years ago, updated 5 years ago
Oops duplicate. |