Poetry Competion - Mythical / Magical Creatures - Judging

  • Milly Hayward
    5 years ago, updated 5 years ago

    Judging is open to everyone - please send in to me your three votes First, Second and Third choices and all votes must be in by end of evening Sunday 30th June for results publication on the Monday.

    (1) Thestrals.

    Black horses roam through forest gloom
    Gentle though often perceived as doom
    Invisible to those who have never grieved
    Comforting the lost, hopeless and bereaved.

    Skeletal bodies with bat-like wings
    They bring no bad omen, only truth that stings
    Misunderstood, they uncover death's veil
    Harmless, they help soothe the scared and frail.

    Death is a storm that will touch us all;
    When we feel we can do nothing but crawl
    We'll fly on the backs of creatures who see
    The pain and grace of one's final plea.
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    (2) Luxpiritus

    Swing-swing,
    from her earring
    Clink-clink,
    is what she’s hearing.
    The night so dark,
    the moon so dim,
    the streetlight sparks,
    so she chants a hymn.

    Bling-bling,
    from the distance
    Blink-blink,
    his light an assistances.
    The way he moves,
    illuminates her way.
    Together they groove,
    by her side he stays.

    Cling-cling,
    onto her ankle
    Chink-chink,
    he softly dangles.
    Safe and sound,
    she’s back to her home.
    He turns around,
    and away he roams.

    *Luxpiritus is a light spirit I made up. A part of it hangs on women ears, like an earring. When in danger at night, he clinks in their ears, so women chant a hymn, like a calling. He approaches them light their way, and guide them back home.

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    (3) Dark Mystique

    Elvin darkness brings a vibe
    of mystic potions locked away
    certain circles embrace the realm
    of shadowy figures, as whispers sway.

    She comes to me when night divides
    earthy spirits start to play
    adorned in diamonds, rubies and gold
    echoes slumber as night swallows day.

    An apparition or subconscious notion
    a beautiful being here to stay
    dusting tears away from my face
    she covets my slumber with magical display.
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    (4) A Mother’s Love, Cry For Vengence

    I, Echidna, plead for justice, oh mother Hera,
    for, having given life to dog, lion and snake,
    I’ve borne their deaths at the hand of a hero
    this Heracles, false hero - murderer, fake!

    Faithful son Orthos, with two canine heads,
    clubbed by Heracles who stole the herd
    from he who guarded Geryon’s red cattle,
    this dog did no wrong, his death is absurd

    That same Demi-god destroyed my Hydra
    while sauntering on one of his many vile treks
    chopped each of her nine serpentine heads
    denied her eternity by burning her necks

    Mother Hera, will you not kill your step-son
    even now he wears impenetrable hide torn
    from my Nemean leonine son; end him
    before he slays all children from me born

    My queen, you must intercede at last I beg
    he’s stolen your own Hesperidean fruit of gold
    and slain my dragon-son Ladon, your guardian.
    A mother’s hope begs the law you uphold!

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    (5) The Pigmypot

    The Pigmypot just knows a lot
    the wisest of them all
    he's round and fat, an acrobat
    and only three feet tall

    He hides away from human sight
    in case he causes fright
    with big grey eye and wings that fly
    he really is a sight

    Each night he calls out for his dear
    but never is she there
    then sinks he in a vat of beer
    to drink his sorrows bare

    Alas poor pigmypot has died
    of broken heart despair
    over loss of his darling bride
    too much for him to bear
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    (6) The Sock Monster

    My coat it shimmers in the night.
    sometimes its black sometimes its white.
    sometimes its blue some times its gold,
    It all depends upon what my bellie holds.

    I've had it change from red to green.
    So many colours my fur has been.
    While you enjoy your dinner or lunch,
    It is upon your socks that I do munch.

    But I can only eat one from a pair you see.
    For if I eat them both, I'm that colour for eternity.
    I came to your house because it is warm and nice.
    And not like my home in Russia which is as cold as ice.

    So in the morn when you despair.
    With odd socks you hobble down the stairs.
    Do not swear and bear me no ill,
    And smile because my tummys filled.

    So in the morn when you despair.
    With odd socks you hobble down the stairs.
    Do not swear and bear me no ill,
    And smile because my tummys filled.

    You will never see me because I can move so fast.
    A flash across your eyes, a vision that will not last.
    One day perhaps you'll catch me and I'll not be dishonest.
    I'll say hello my dears I'm a sock monster,

    But you can call me Boris.

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  • Poet on the Piano
    5 years ago

    Love these so much! ^_^

  • Larry Chamberlin
    5 years ago

    Clever and difficult to choose

  • Milly Hayward
    5 years ago

    Everyone is entitled to submit a vote regardless of whether you entered the competition or not- so please do remember to send in your first, second and third vote to me privately and I will publish the results on Sunday evening. Milly x