(CONTEST) Word:Color Workshop VOTING

  • Star
    4 years ago

    It is time for voting!!!
    I wasn't sure how to make the voting given the small number of entries with four poems only, but since this is a contest I'm doing it the traditional way here anyways.
    So just rate your top three poems 10, 7 or 4 points, then send me the vote along with the number of the poem (given below).
    Voting will end Monday, 11 of May.
    Thank you to the members who participated I hope you enjoyed this :)

    Poems:

    #1 Blue Buckalew from Kalamazoo

    The blue Buckalew from Kalamazoo
    what a wondrous widget it was
    true, you can get one from Timbuktu
    but you knew it wasn’t the Buzz.

    Riding it ‘round raised neighbors’ fuss;
    folding and rolling it made me proud
    even jealous Bobby failed to cuss
    just pledged his ever friendship loud.

    The blue Buckalew was lost in time
    planned obsolescence so they say
    but that green Manalishi’s not so prime
    so I’m stuck with the old red Besteray.

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    #2 Melodries.

    Cerulean gives birth to oceans
    each time she closes her eyes;
    when the moon flirts with the sky,
    anxieties are cast away.
    Her mind becomes the shore,
    soothing the washed-up lovers
    from past centuries.
    Their heartbreak she sings of,
    until tragedies melt into lullabies
    and tension is released.
    Melodries drift on the waves,
    remembering the outcasts,
    navigating a new tide.

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    #3 Bruchexis

    And with its effulgent grandeur,
    I wanted to touch your soul
    as if I am Old Manila --
    that certain walk from
    Puente de España to Binondo,
    your lavish comprehension
    of Intramuros.

    One tiresome night,
    you came home with
    a pot of phloxes
    you bought from a
    local bookstore in Quiapo.

    "Isn't that store only selling
    segunda-mano books?",
    I asked.

    And then you went babbling
    about random luck.

    I still feel sad about
    how I couldn't seem to remember
    the name you gave those phloxes.
    And I miss the times
    you got angry at me because of that.

    But I remember you
    making a memoriam of
    the historical structures
    we lost over the years,
    and there were both
    the fascination and frustration
    in your face,
    the undying love
    for a city long forgotten.

    Cobalt...
    You used to address nostalgia
    as something cobalt.

    "Isn't it supposed to be red?",
    here I went asking again.
    Silly me.

    You just nodded.
    I wondered why.

    Years smoothen rough edges.
    But curiosity never goes away.
    I should've asked you that time.
    But sometimes,
    questions aren't meant to be asked,
    or chances just won't allow you to ask.

    Nostalgia pains me
    deep down inside...
    No, it isn't cobalt...

    I know now why the nod.

    You did agree.

    On the forgotten corners of Manila,
    I watched the once brilliant sky
    fade to black.
    It is another starless night.

    Shall we walk its streets again?
    The sunset reflected in the Pasig River
    brushes the city with gold,
    like the way it was reflected in your eyes
    and dyed my whole life orange.
    Half a century ago,
    this place once was
    the focal point of everything.
    Few years ago,
    this place was once
    a metaphor for
    something that blossoms,
    for a disaster as beautiful
    as transient fireworks,
    for the calmness
    that is always there
    in every infinite dream
    and every hopeful poem.

    Dainty and proud,
    you would always laugh about
    any unfinished joke,
    you would always love
    my weakest metaphors.
    I recall your serene gazes,
    your beautiful aura
    while walking on a sunburnt road...
    ...how I sincerely miss them.

    Some stray thoughts come to my mind
    and I now remember
    what you named those phloxes.

    But where is your nod?
    Where is the voice babbling
    about random luck?

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    #4

    when hurricanes mist into all the
    unspoken words we hoarded,
    the pale moonlight that once
    shone gold recedes into the
    deep night. the great
    unbecoming, we lay atop
    our mountains naked
    waiting to dissolve once
    the storm reaches the
    event horizon.

    the sparrows take flight
    before the poesmuth;
    we stream into
    infinite literature.

  • Kevin
    4 years ago

    Cool.

  • Poet on the Piano
    4 years ago

    So neat! Thanks, Star :)

  • prasanna
    4 years ago, updated 4 years ago

    bumping this, voting ends soon!

  • Star
    4 years ago

    Last day for voting :)