Quick prompt!

  • Poet on the Piano
    4 years ago

    Hope everyone is doing alright. It's been especially quiet lately.

    You wake up in a new land, not knowing how much time has passed, realizing you are far away from home.
    What do you see when you open your eyes?

    Don't think - write the first thing(s) you see.

  • Star replied to Poet on the Piano
    4 years ago

    I feel the cold tapping my body and
    the rain singing beautiful melodies
    as it trickles over the wooden roof,
    I pull the blanket over my head
    to open my eyes in the darkness.

    I carefully peak over the blanket,
    the sun is out but it’s dark outside
    I see a mountain hiding behind
    the heavy rain, tall grasses tickling
    the windowpane, and an oak tree
    dancing with no pain.

    I take a deep breath and smile.
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    It’s really been quiet here :) what about you, where do you wake up?

  • Em replied to Poet on the Piano
    4 years ago

    I feel a pain deep in my chest
    as, like every morning,
    the first thing I see is him...
    His eyes, deep blue and aging unkind,
    His smile, always smiling but never happy,
    His mouth open declaring his honesty, his love for when infact, all he's done is lie to me and show me I'm worthless...

    I get out of bed knowing seeing his face will only ever be in my imagination now.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    4 years ago

    A hood is taken from my head but darkness shields the horizon,
    the sounds of moving men and stamping feet surround me.
    The smell of dusty sand and acrid camel odor sends clues
    that my abductors were in the pay of Colonel Cobanli.

    Little hope was there for my survival, but my hands were free
    this mistake would cost them dearly when the time came
    for an honorable death must be bought in the blood
    of the oppressors of my people in this bloody war game.

  • Everlasting replied to Poet on the Piano
    4 years ago

    Upon waking up,
    I see sunshine rays shining through closed shutters
    I see a fan oscillating,
    keeping the room chill while I remain still-
    unmoving,
    just laid down on a hill of blankets and pillows
    while my hair resembles foliages of trees
    during Autumn:
    kind of Reddish, semi-brownish,
    all over the place

    I see waterfalls distilling from my eyes
    through a mirror on a wall
    and through that mirror, I see me
    looking at my nature
    and I see my nature
    and I see how free my nature seems
    as I wake up

  • Maple Tree
    4 years ago, updated 4 years ago

    I found my Wings
    By Maple Tree

    Dewdrops
    are but a kiss away
    from my hushing whispers.

    Questions surround
    my mind as a hint of
    lavender, kiss my nose
    awakening the inner blessings
    of me.

    Iridescent wings, flutter
    as midnight cascades twirl
    upon a toadstool and dancing
    pixies.

    Encased in a mystical
    illusion of summer
    nightingales and prancing nymphs.

    Fairy's shall fly upon sparkling
    angels, as my limbs take flight
    I become one with the night shadows.

  • Obscure
    4 years ago

    I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this one, but I did my best.

    My face is damp
    cool with morning dew
    The shadows of branches
    dance over my face

    The sun peers down at me from above
    leaves whisper rumors of my stirring
    The wind rises as if to ask
    Who are you stranger?

    But then it falls back
    Watching, wondering
    My fingers brush over cool stones
    And I push myself up

    How long have I slept
    on the cool forest floor
    And who all knows
    of my presence?

    This is a land I have never seen before
    The trees still hold their souls
    And there is magic in the air
    I can feel it, taste it, touch it

    My chest aches as I realize
    That time and distance keep me
    From all I ever knew and loved
    And from all that ever hurt me

    A twinkle of light signals
    a sudden arrival
    Pale wings flutter softly
    nearly hidden behind a tree

    A warm voice calls out
    "What are you?"
    I search my memory
    foggy from years of disuse

    I am a friend, not a foe
    I am a human, if just barely
    I suppose in the end
    I am merely me

  • Everlasting replied to Poet on the Piano
    4 years ago

    the sea and shore is what I see
    there’s sand, some blood, and boats,
    there’s lads with opened throats
    all tied up to a tree