Lose You Now - Voting

  • Everlasting
    3 years ago, updated 3 years ago

    Hello! What we have been waiting for is finally here. Please, read the three poems that I was sent. Then sent me a private message with your favorite one. Thank you!

    I will announce the winner on February 15!

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    Poem#1: Uncommitted absence.

    There is sorrow in
    knowing the best
    parts of you are
    ephemeral,
    in realizing that
    all the hollow
    places we tried to
    fill are now archaic.

    I will try to play
    back the memories,
    even the ones that
    obliterated my faith,

    and I only ask
    for you to take my
    hand and listen

    as the strings softly
    call us forward.

    I'll remind you
    why we're not meant
    to be this separated.

    When we've both
    forgotten the right words,
    and our mouths are
    dry, canyons in our hearts,
    we'll somehow still
    find a way to speak.

    Even if it's the
    most heartbreaking
    melodies that rush
    into corroded lungs,

    we have to start
    somewhere.

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    Poem #2 : Lose you now

    Leave now those faces
    Inside my dark dreams -
    No, but what of the traces, so
    Distant they seem?
    Slowly they’re slipping,
    Each moment less near -
    Yesterday’s kisses, today’s real fear.

    Streams that are flowing
    Towards a sheer fall,
    Instruct a now knowing:
    Reverse and stand tall!
    Leave doubt in the gutter,
    In with sunshine and facts.
    Now’s the time to utter:
    Go get that love back!

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    Poem#3: Lose You Now

    You joke to me;
    "Trade me in
    for a newer model."
    -
    I would sooner
    rip out
    my own heart
    than to
    lose you now...
    -
    You are my lifeline
    in this cruel world-
    The balm
    that healed
    my broken soul-
    A continual note
    that plays
    a tune
    that only I can hear...
    -
    I truly began
    to live-
    to love-
    when you came
    into my life...
    -
    So there will no
    "trading you in"
    for losing you
    would be the end
    of me...

  • Everlasting
    3 years ago

    I got two votes! Two votes!

    Keeep them coming. Send them my way.
    You know how? Just click on my profile and send me a private message. I mean, a private message with your favorite poem.