A bucket list adventure (Challenge)

  • Star
    3 years ago

    Soooo hope everyone is doing good :)

    PnQ was down for a little bit annnnd kinda quiet so I thought it's time for a challenge!!! It's simple write a poem with three things from your bucket list. Poems are due Friday, 12th of November via PM to me and I'll post for voting.

    Enjoyyy ^^

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Star
    3 years ago

    Yayyy!! Awesome idea, Star :)

  • Star replied to Poet on the Piano
    3 years ago

    Have fun with it!!! ^_^

  • Star
    3 years ago

    I have one poem in :) Come on everyone give it a shot!!

  • Star
    3 years ago

    I have three poems :)

  • Star
    3 years ago

    One day left!! But if anyone want to write something and they need more time please tell me :)

  • Star
    3 years ago

    I have four poems!!!

  • Star
    3 years ago, updated 3 years ago

    VOTING!!!!!

    I got 4 poems, and all of them are really special in their own unique way :) Voting is simple just choose a poem and send your vote to me!
    I will announce winners next Saturday the 20th of November. Thank you to all the participants, I really hope you enjoyed this!

    Poem 1

    The place my sister's life began
    Calls softly from across the sea
    I have not visited and yet
    I hope that it will wait for me

    Before I'm old and full of salt
    I plan to journey past the tide
    Land of the Rising Sun, I come
    And for a moment, I'll reside

    My scars will hide themselves away
    Beneath the artworks I design
    The friends I met online I'll see
    If ever all the stars align

    I'll watch the waves lap up the sun
    Till city lights are all that stay
    Enjoy the things I dreamed I'd do
    And hope life might turn out okay

    *****
    Poem 2: So I Could Be No One’s But Yours

    Right where the moon becomes full
    Up in the sky so clearly obscure
    I’d like to kiss those lips that are yours

    Up where no man can come near
    Up where the stars are closer to see
    Up up up

    Up where the air is so tight
    Up where the odds of thriving are low
    Up up up

    That’s where I’d like to be yours.

    *****
    Poem 3 Summit.

    There’s an unnamed force pulling me

    to indulge in a train ride through the Rocky
    Mountains, losing myself in the musical
    notes of passengers, the wonder and awe
    etched in soulful eyes, our pondering lips,
    our vulnerabilities mirroring the lush
    landscape outside, chromatic colors and moods.

    to refurnish an old cabin in the woods
    that’s rumored to be cursed, when,
    in reality, the dust and drafts and late-night
    croaks and creaks are only lonely ghosts
    who are looking for a friend to listen.

    to bathe in hot springs, respectful of the strangers
    I meet along the way, reconnecting with every
    part of ourselves we’d allowed to become neglected.

    to plan weekly trips to a nearby village and
    learn and revere its history; to be humbled
    by the hunters, the cooks, the gardeners, the
    artists, the lovers, and all those who surround
    the forest with their own visions, their respect
    for nature apparent in quiet yet noble footfalls
    and trekking not limited by time or weather.

    I don’t want to think I’m invincible, to neglect
    the threat of raging fires and the miraculous
    body of a storm. I am one tiny human among
    a million unknown, unwritten breaths.

    I don’t want to fly in the sky, I simply
    want to photograph the countless birds,
    the ones I’ll learn about, the indecipherable
    and incomprehensible melodies I’ll hear
    communicated through meadow and mountain.

    I want to not be laughed at when I tell someone of
    my dreams; to not be told that it’s a fantasy,
    that it’s unrealistic, not lucrative, that I’ll be
    cut off from resources and eventually, sanity.

    I am too old to be considered a child yet am often
    regarded as incapable of handling any unpredictability;
    perhaps it’s my own fear holding me back,
    or the way I get lost in others’ perception of me.
    I’ve let the scope of my dreams be mitigated,
    and one day, I’ll reach a point where I can slowly
    let myself ascend and enjoy the journey.

    One day, I’ll reach the summit, and I’ll climb back
    down, thanking the soil, bowing down to a sturdy,
    faithful foundation, and realize that I am more
    powerful than I’ve allowed myself to believe.

    *****
    Poem 4

    i dreamt of you again. you were a butterfly
    that i chased down the corridors of
    mont-saint michel – the same place
    we both decided would be the most
    apropos place to first visit.

    i open my mouth, searching for words,
    waiting for breath – and you fly in,
    and my stomach is churning as
    i get thrown towards the ground
    at terminal velocity; i reach out
    to pull the ripcord, and close
    my eyes.

    i touch ground;
    and when i feel stable
    enough, I open my eyes,
    watching the dance of
    green flash across
    the night sky.

  • Rayven
    3 years ago

    Great poems all. I have voted

  • silvershoes
    3 years ago

    These are wonderful poems, all. I'm struggling to choose a favorite but will send a vote shortly. Thanks for hosting this challenge.

  • prasanna
    3 years ago

    Love the poems!

  • Star
    3 years ago

    A BUCKET LIST ADVENTURE WINNER!!

    I hope everyone is having a good day :)

    Thank you for the participants; Obscure with Poem 1, Everlasting with Poem 2, Poet on the Piano with Poem 3 and hiraeth with Poem 4. Also thank you for everyone who voted. I hope everyone enjoyed the challenge!!

    You all can post your poems now!!

    I am happy to announce……… with no further delayyyyyyyyy,

    CONGRATULATIONS to our winner
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    ***Obscure***

    ^_^

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Star
    3 years ago

    Congrats, Obscure! I loved your piece :)

    Thanks again, Star, for the awesome challenge!

  • Everlasting
    3 years ago

    Congrats!

  • Obscure replied to Star
    3 years ago

    Oh my goodness, Thank you! I enjoyed this challenge so much and I loved seeing everyone's poems!!