Weekly Contest Winners November 16th

  • Meena Krish
    3 years ago

    Good morning Everyone,
    Sorry for the delay in posting the results. Still waiting on one more
    set of comments and as soon as I get them will update this thread.
    Congrats to our front page Winners:
    Savannah-Tuesday in November,
    Lost Star-Lucky to have loved and
    Kate-Grandma.

    Well done to all those who received a HM too!

    WINNERS://:

    Tuesday in November by Savannah (11 points)

    Lucky to have loved (Alphabet) by Lost Star (10 points)

    Grandma by Kate (10 points)

    COMMENTS://:

    Tuesday in November by Savannah (7 points)

    I truly am out of words after reading this. I'm mind blown
    by the strength you have, not just anyone can write and share
    a piece like this full of raw emotions. Thank you for sharing
    this with us!

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    Tuesday In November by Savannah (4 points)

    A hard-hitting write, that unfortunately many will relate
    to. Trying to move on after something traumatic, and not
    being able to trust your surroundings and strangers is just
    so difficult. Time will heal some wounds but you're still won't
    be left whole, there's always that question of safety lingering.
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    Grandma by Kate (10 points)

    What a beautiful ode to your grandma. Grandmothers are
    truly the glue to many families and I'm sure a lot of people
    can relate to how much they've relied on their grandmas in the childhood,
    from them wiping away tears to cooking up a storm in the kitchen to feed
    your family on holidays, they're truly special and it's always hard to say
    goodbye. This really hits home for me.

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    Lucky to have loved (Alphabet) by Lost Star (10 points)

    HM’s://:

    Hometown by Kate (10 points)

    My life in boxes by Hellon (8 points)

    Nature, you and fresh air by Michael (7 points)

    Vent by Poet on the Piano (7 points)

    COMMENTS://:

    Hometown by Kate (10 points)

    The first half of the poem is full of nostalgic warmth, the
    second full of pain. The place that once felt safe is no longer
    what it’s used to be. This poem is full of relatable emotions,
    I love it.

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    (Vent) by POTP (7 points)

    I had qualms about voting on a poem so personal, but there's
    aspects here that I can relate to, but above all I think it's amazing
    that POTP is still able to write something poetic, profound and
    hard-hitting even when venting, using poetry as an outlet at the
    highest form. The ending verse 'am i even allowed to vent?' just
    breaks my heart.

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    My Life in Boxes by Hellon (4 points)

    I’m not a mother, but when some features of my home the one
    I grew up in were gone I felt sad about it. I can’t imagine how
    difficult it is packing up the home you raised your kids in is. This
    felt like a scene out of a movie.
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    Nature, you and fresh air by Michael (7 points)

    Will update the missing comments once I receive them, thank you
    for your patience..

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Meena Krish
    3 years ago

    Congrats to all! Many thanks to the judge for the HM. And thanks to Meena, for hosting.

  • Lost star replied to Meena Krish
    3 years ago

    Congratulations winners and hm's this week had a wonderful set of poems:)

  • Larry Chamberlin
    3 years ago

    Congrats to the winners & nice to have so many HMs!

    Thanks, judges & thanks, Meena for posting.

  • Michael
    3 years ago

    congratulations to all front page winners and HMs :)

    thank you to the judges for their time, and for my vote for a HM

    Thank you to Scott for nominating my poem

    M x