Tara
20 years ago
Hey, I just thought I'd throw out a suggestion to ya. The poem was really good, I liked it a lot. I'm not sure if I understand the third part, though....the first two were really consistant. If I'm correct, maybe a title about leaving the past behind ("Stepping out of the Past," "The Past is Behind Me," "No Place in the Past.") Again, I could be totally off-topic, but just a thought ;-) Take care! |