Timothy Bledsoe
19 years ago
Hey. You can write good poetry. Everybody can write good poetry. If I can do it, you can to. Anywho, why don't you post what you need help with. I'm sure you'll get the help you want. |
Kaitlin Kristina
19 years ago
I disagree with Timothy on this one, not everyone can write GOOD poetry. |
Mel
19 years ago
There's so much pomposity when it comes to poetry - as with literature. we're taught at school what's good and what's not good. The majority of this work is supposed to teach us good morals within society (like the classics in literature). Strange how what's regarded as 'good poetry' often talks of nature and life in its positive light or seeks a solution to it (like the Hollywood movies and the good guys winning in the end etc). Let no rules be your rule and remember that if it's set out on the page in stanzas or with a few margines, then it becomes poetry by its 'look', regardles of a rhyme, beat or whatever. Just say it how you think it is. *He steps down off his soapbox, ah* |
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19 years ago
here here Mel *claps* |
Gemma Sinead Hayward
19 years ago
Ah, the debate turning to the philosophical as ever... |
Mel
19 years ago
justplainme |
Mel
19 years ago
You miss my point. The so called 'classics' do indeed have the immoral as well as moral characters and plot: as does mythology etc etc. There has to be binary oppositions to make the story work. But the point is, that the immoral is present only so that the moral can eventually shine through and win the day. I say 'moral' and 'immoral', I might as well just say 'good' and 'evil'- it works just the same. Hollywood will not let a film on to the so called big screen unless it deems it ideologically sound - not much changed there, then, in the last couple of hundred years, eh. Check out the work of F.R Leavis (literary critic), who was so far up his own arse in 'high literature' that he discredited anything if it wasn't loaded in moral output. He, like many, regarded the so called 'classics' as the finest pieces of fiction on the planet (not my thoughts). They are well written, yes, but many are merely attempts at a realistic snapshot of society at the time of writing - hence the cute little orphans in Dickens and the 'character grotesque'. Look at the art (paintings) at that time - the roadside peasants and the poor all look extremely healthy. Only the rich consumed art and literature and so the producers did not want to leave a bad taste in the mouths of the people who bought up their work, and so they bent the truth or shielded over it all together. Why do you think the modernist movement came to fruition? (thank god) They tried to turn things upside down (and did) and said bollocks to the middle class consumers, who they saw responsible only for two things: greed and war. So now signing a piss pot 'R mutt' and cutting up words for poetry gave us the free expression we have today; and yes, the immoral does have a voice in art now, but not then - which is what i was hinting at above. |
Mel
19 years ago
I guess that the play shows the destructive force of love and what that can lead to. The character, Romeo, is intelligent but also both immature and impulsive (not seen as a good trait at the time). Fuse this with the love force and maybe the moral message is that within society it's not just hatred that leads you to the graveyard, but its antithesis: love - as with religion. |
Mel
19 years ago
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