Poetry Lovers Club

I guess you'd have to explain it...I didn't understand it before I read the comment you left on it.

Sounds like a great idea but it takes me days to write a poem not 30 seconds. Oh and Born it was Babyboy not blue so I don't think you will be adding any color. I just hope I am not in the same league as BabyBoy that would be sad. I haven't looked at his poems yet kind of afraid to. Well maybe once I get in the same leauge with you guys I will be in your club! Right now I still suck! I am trying to mow my grass but the damn mower won't start so here I am. I might be back later and change my mind after I am full of anxiety! Thanx guys!

No, I read and understood that whole last post, so you are not in the same league!...lol It doesn't take me 30 seconds to write a poem...and hunbun is my sister so I know it doesn't take her 30 seconds....There are a couple poems that her and I have written very quickly but that doesn't happen often. So you don't need to write a poem in 30 seconds to be part of our club. Born is a special case...he can write a poem in 30 seconds, he is special...lol

It's not that I'm gay, I just like guys......SOME TIMES. Let's get that straight here ok......lol I read one a long time ago. Carrie...You know....I was at a loss for words, but I commented nicely because....well I don't remember because I really don't remember what it was about. HaHa I'm a nice person....Anyhoo talk to you all later. Have a good week end!!

Oh...hope it all works out...I'm sure you'll get it together. I've been waiting for a new one.

So, what's our next project?

i read the poem, its awesome. everyone else should read it too!

Yes, I read it too..I like..I like

Come one Born....Give me a project!!

You're club president!! You call the shots!!

That is depressing....I know I've read it before but it's the same every time....

I need to write a death poem....?? UGH! Well I guess I better get on it!

I heard you. I don't think I can either. Sorry people.

Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!

My Wednesday love:

Please don’t be sad
Happy you should be
That pretty little smile
You need to let me see

What ever it is
It couldn’t be that bad
Just let it go
I hate to see you so sad

I want to see you laugh
And have a little fun
Even if just for a while
From your problems you can run

You changed so suddenly
Now all you do is cry
It’s driving me crazy
Because I don’t why

I know you’re going through a lot
But I wish you would tell me
Talk to me, just let me know
I know it won’t be easy

I can help you through it
Just take my hand
Friends forever
So next to you I’ll stand

Are we getting bored with the club or something?I like the club and I think we should keep it going!! Get with it people!!! HURRY BEFORE I CRY!!!

hey matthew good poem, made me laugh

I’ve told you before
And I’ll say it again
So please listen to me
As I weep through this pen

You’ve hurt me enough
So now I must leave
You’re an unfaithful man
That’s what I believe

I’ve spent many years
Next to your side
And all of these feelings
I have had to hide

I am no longer afraid
To say what I feel
This thing we call “love”
Has never been real

There’s nothing you can do
So please don’t explain
You were the one
Who caused all this pain

I’m ready to move on
And start completely new
Because I am no longer happy
Living this life with you

I can not pretend
To be content as your girl
The pain in my eyes
Can be seen by the world

Time and time again
We’ve tried to work it out
But you don’t really know
What love is all about

So now that we’re done
It’s time for you to pack
Please just hurry up and leave
And never come back

I don’t ever want to see you
Or hear from you anymore
Don’t ever come around
Forever walk out that door

Not sure what Thursday is but here is my poem for the day....

Oh dear Matt
It was not you
But another that
Was so untrue

My fiance lost
His mind last night
At any cost
He'll start a fight

He lied so much
And hurt me so bad
I gave him a touch
Of what makes me so sad

He's gone insane
Said he'll kill me
There's so much pain
I wish he could see

You've been so sweet
You definately swept
Me right off my feet
Your love I'll accept

Please don't you cry
I hope you understand
My reasons why
Won't you take my hand?

Carrie I thought about it! And I still may do that but I'm thinking maybe I want to be some where he can't find...Ya know? I don't even want him to know where I am, I don't want him to beable to find me even if he wanted. I may just go home too...I don't know. It depends on what happens today. He's been calling all day and talking to me like we were fine. I don't know what the hell his problem is....Thank you Carewee Barewee! Love you!

Matt:

You made me smile
As I was reading
I felt good all the while
Made me forget what I was feeling

Thank you
So very much
I wish I knew
Of real love and such

You've made me feel better
And that's great for now
I'll remember it forever
To you right now I'll bow

My poem of the day....is sort of a poem about war. A war between, shall we say lovers? Yes, I wrote a poem of war! No one specified what exactly the poems about "war" had to be. Anyhoo....Talk to you all later....Toodles!

HAHAHAH BORN THAT WAS AN AWARD WINNER!!! I LOVE THAT!!

Born...I know what you mean. I've seen your stalkers on your comments page. Yesterday I sumbitted Get Out and it started with 10 votes at a 5.0...And a couple people voted and went sky diving. I am not saying the poem is perfect but I KNOW the only reason it got those low votes is because it was on the top page.....It's there right now but I know someone will vote it down again by the end of the day. People get jealous...You just have to over look it. Suck it up because we KNOW that the poems up there on the top page are normally garbage....And not to say what comes from someone's heart is garbage but let's be real. Anyhoo you know what your poetry is and anyone with half a brain who reads your poems know what they are and how good they are regardless of how they vote.....so just ignore it....I try to get hunbun to post hers but she won't. I guess I can understand because I did pull all of mine. I started posting again because I get extremely bored at work....

I know it is nice...but it won't happen. The only reason My Heart On Paper has been up there for two weeks is because the members on here don't have anything to do with it. Trust me if they did, it would have been booted off in the first couple of minutes. Look I told you just little while ago someone would give Get Out a bad rating so it would get kicked off and sure enough they did.

So it's been you this whole time? YOU TRADER!!!!!! And I thought you were on my side!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

No, she is not serious. She wouldn't do that!!

Ha

We're letting the club slowly go down the drain!! NO! I love the "CLUB" I don't want it to end! So get with it people. Let's get this thing moving. Mr. President? What's the next assignment?

WOOHOO

lol to make something enjoyable it doesn't have to be something big as long as people share their thoughts..you are quite right ^_^

see, popularity isn't everything, just the people that matter are.

aawwww that made me feel good. Ok so our club isn't going down the drain.....Truthfully I DO look forward to coming on here and talking to everyone.

Oh dear Matt
Please tell me
What's up with that
Make me see

What is wrong
In your life
You have to be strong
To remove pain and strife

Be nice
And be happy
I'll tell you twice
Don't be so pissy

I hope you are ok
Until you are better
I will stay away
I hope it's not for ever

I wish to help
And see you through
I hate to stand back
And watch this beat you

Please my dear friend
For me be strong
To let you down
Would be so wrong

That is why
I will be right here
Forever and always
To remove your fears

I'll try my best
To soothe your pain
There's no need
For you to explain

I don't need to know
What makes you so sad
Regardless I will be here
My dearest comrade

Stand up
Stand tall
And you shall
Never fall

Please my dear
Be strong
Hold your head up
And nothing will go wrong

Don't give in
To the devil's request
Rise above him
Let the evil rest

Monday poem:

This frail little girl
Dying such a slow death
Growing weaker and weaker
With each and every breath

At such a young age
She was torn apart
He reached into her chest
And ripped out her heart

Stealing her innocence
All of her treasures
What she once valued
Was stolen by her father

He looked into her eyes
And demanded her love
She prayed every night
To be sent to the Lord above

Sadness is all she knew
She never enjoyed life
For her dreadful father
Filled her with strife

It hurt much more
My dear Mommy
That you didn't know
This little girl was me

The blood is flowing down
I can no longer live this lie
So I took matters into my own hands
And I’m saying good-bye

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

My Monday poem sucks but hey....I WROTE ONE!!! Come on people!!! GET WITH IT! WRITE ME A MONDAY POEM!!!!!!!!!!

Depressing

hey born veeeeeeeery good poem lol...it was umm...very good! especially the butter knife part or whatever it was. GREAT POEM LOL :D wink wink

LOL born.....I was hoping it was a joke all the way through it....I was going to tell you it was NOT your best!!! ANYHOO........