My short story--Part One--

  • natasha
    19 years ago

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  • natasha
    19 years ago

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  • natasha
    19 years ago

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  • natasha
    19 years ago

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  • natasha
    19 years ago

    NADA- this is to the first comment you made-

    That is the precise idea, the reader isn't supposed to know what is going on at first. I am glad it worked! Thanks.

  • natasha
    19 years ago

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  • natasha
    19 years ago

    !!!!!!! THIS IS NOT PART OF THE STORY !!!!!!!!!!!

    NADA-ok well i decided to take your advice and am mending the beginning. thanks for all the suggestions, i really appriciate it!

    !!!!!!! THIS IS NOT PART OF THE STORY !!!!!!!!!!

  • natasha
    19 years ago

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  • natasha
    19 years ago

    NO!

  • natasha
    19 years ago

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