Will someone rate my poem?

Hey anyone out there? I have a b/f and I want to write him a poem for Valentines Day and give him it but I dont know if it is good enough. The title of the poem is "My Call to God" By Melody if anyone would rate/comment I would e very happy. I just need to know if he would like it. I really want him to be happy. Pleeasseee will someone help me?? :(

i will rate it for you hun, just afread its to late though, lol, l8r

nikki

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