What ya think about this poem I just wrote.

  • Manders
    20 years ago

    I just broke it off with my bestfriend of 15 years.. And I had to write this.. Feels like a thousand punds have been lifted off my shoulders.. What do you think of the poem??

    15 Years Of Friendship For What??

    I trusted you with my life
    15 years of growing to know you
    And i sit here wondering why?
    After all this I really have no idea who "you" is?
    You drove the knife into my back
    Now it's time for you to finish
    So many secrets shared for what?
    To have them spilled on the dry floor
    Verbal abuse is your key to destroy those weaker then you
    Evil moves through your body
    As you watch me fall apart
    The pain is much to real
    Something I have blocked myself from feeling may years ago
    I am better then you
    I will not allow your words to drive me insane
    This battle you cannot win
    Every part of me despises you
    The site of you fills my hands with rage
    One day you will be a memory
    A person on my list i wish to never speak to again.
    The hate I have for you runs so deep.
    Never will I allow you to be a part of my life again.

  • heather
    20 years ago

    sounds like it was rough and i loved it keep up the great work

  • Walter F Alvarado
    20 years ago

    great job

  • Kevin J
    20 years ago

    Didn't sound like much of a friend to me.

    Nice write b.t.w ;)