poem i sent to my ex

  • Kacie
    19 years ago

    i sent this poem to my ex (he broke up with me):
    No matter what has happened in the past,
    Just remember how we had a blast.
    Here and there we had a glitch,
    Mostly because I was a b****.
    I would love for us to go back to before,
    When our friendship wasn't a war.
    Sometimes I wonder where it went wrong,
    Was it just that we didn't belong?
    Or that I just wasn't good enough
    For everything you gave me--dismissed as "stuff."
    I never paid enough attention to the clues you sent,
    Too focused on other non-important content.
    Even though you may be moving,
    I will still work hard and begin improving.
    So I guess i just want to say,
    whatever else happens, friends I hope we stay.

    i sent it because i didnt want to become one of those couples that breaks up and never talks to one other. we had that relationship where we became friends first and then he asked me out. so anyways, i sent him that poem and he told me that someone who he only talks to online and in school are people he calls "aquaintances." would this be true? because then i have a lot of "aquaintances"

  • Shædow Poet
    19 years ago

    I have NO idea what you're on about. Sorry. And you're not suppose to post poems in any forums, you should post them in the poetry section.

  • Kacie
    19 years ago

    it is in the poetry section, but i posted it because i wanted some advice on my problem

  • Shædow Poet
    19 years ago

    Then you should've posted a link to your poem in this thread, instead of posting it.
    I still don't understand why you wanted advice.