Share Your Talent

  • Hallucinostic
    19 years ago

    Have you ever stumbled upon a topic or instantly come up with an idea for a poem & after the 1st verse you go blank? Yesterday I did..... Anyways, could you share your talent for 1 time? Just for fun, let's collaborate. I'm sure it'll be a good 1. I know you guys prefer to work alone when it comes to writing your poems but, who knows? This could be the start of something big, like Woodstock, but then again, it might not. In my part, it's worth a try. Thank you! (Let's limit a verse to a 4- liner per person)..... & pls. let's not spoil this beautiful thing by turning it into a contest, cause it's not. Here goes:

    COMMON GROUND (Our Poetry)

    There's a place I've seen, where no one's ever been.
    Fields of green, sailing in my dream.
    And in this place there I'll go, where no one ever knows.
    On my own, I'm gonna call it home.

    (If you think the last person did a very good job & is an appropriate ending, pls. suggest on it, thanks.)

  • ~*^*~ longing to belong ~*^*~
    19 years ago

    Drooping like a broken doll,
    Truth and lies have taken their toll,
    Torn apart, section by section,
    Barely surviving amidst such desperation,

    hmmmm........many improvements needed, but still....

  • EoB
    19 years ago

    Sorry, no talent to share

  • Ria
    19 years ago

    never to see what lies beyond
    the last ship sailed with dreams onboard
    And left behind the memories hold
    all that we buried in the cold

    the winter's heart has sung her song
    in spells was bound my lonely soul
    As birds of prey we'll find our way
    and in the wind we'll learn to pray

  • Hallucinostic
    19 years ago

    Whoooah! This is kinda rowdy, maybe I'm gonna be right about the Woodstock thingie. Keep it comin' til we reach infinity & beyond!