a little sumthin' i put together....

kk.. i was in the "other" category and saw this rap battle post, so i went into it and just started writing a rap for fun, but it actually came out to be something useful (i think). it may not be great, but check it out neways

So you come into this place
With bruises on your face
A gun at your side
With no place to hide
Red lines on your wrist
Hands curled into a fist
Lost and confused
Because you used to use
A bottle of beer
Inhaled by your fear
And now your running away
From the world again
Mom and dad won't say good night tonight
Too many problems will start another fight

Look at the world, stare at the ground
All we are is just a rap line now
All the problems we share
"Oh nothing can compare"
But lots of people feel the same
But its only "me, me, me" in this game

So wake up, its a brand new day
Let's solve the drama in the right way
Break the bottle, put down the gun
Burry the knife, and stop trying to run
Each one of us will be okay
Our problems will help us find ways

I like that... well said

thank you:)

i like yours too ismail:)

thank u very much lol

Hahaha....those are all really good. I like 'em!!!! It was fun.

I'm not one to contradict
But I'm gunna say what I want direct
Cutting yourself is not the way
Value your life for another day
Find another way to stop the pain
I know it's hard but your not to blame
Things go wrong for everyone
Just hold on tight the end will come
The answer isn't held in that knife
Nothing holds the elixir of life
You will struggle all the way along
But so does everyone, just keep strong
Someone is there to help you pull through
Just find that person to help you pursue
Just remember your bodys a case
Which allows a shelter for your soul's embrace
Please be careful don't break its protection
Treat it with love, care and affection
That first tiny cut allows a release
But the energy your soul has will slowly decrease
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger
Stopping this now will make your life longer
The message in this? Cutting's not the way out
Ceasing this habit will help without a doubt.

theyre all excellent!

i like ismail and bobs, i 100% agree cutting is stupid.

HAHAHAHAHA

Bob said slicing and dicing. And here I thought I was the only one and have been told that it's vicious. Bob made it sound so sweet....LMAO