need a suicide poem

  • »«¤ß詤»«
    19 years ago

    ive got this drama assesment on play building and one of our characters commits suicide and we need a dramatic monologue to show how she is feeling and what shes about to to eg a suicide poem
    we havnt decided on her way of suicide yet but we are open to suggestions please help

  • »«¤ß詤»«
    19 years ago

    im agasint it to but we are trying to show how cruel teenagers can be through allienation and peer pressure and one character commits suicide and its kinda how every one relises what their actions are doing its hard to explain but i really need to find a good dramatic monlogue for it

  • »«¤ß詤»«
    19 years ago

    lol ok then

  • »«¤ß詤»«
    19 years ago

    oh sorry yeah da plays bot bithchiness really dat silent treatment n yeah sorry bout dose bad memories but maybe u could write da monlogue 4 me? just a thought

  • »«¤ß詤»«
    19 years ago

    well asap da assesment is due in about 3 weeks n my gropu needs to polish everything up and the girl has to learn her lines soon to
    the story basically is the basic high school story right
    theres this popular bitchy group who allienate and torment this one girl right
    the girl makes a friend out of this new american girl who just moved there
    its like her first real friend ever
    then the bitchy girls take her away becuz they think shes cool becuz shes from america
    then the new girl gets caught up in being popular and ignores her new friend
    then the suicdal girl feels really alone and upset and well yeah we need a monolouge for this bit before she like kills her self then we the nbit where shes found
    n den a memorial service at the skool is held
    where all da bitchs like say wat der sorry for they relise wat they did n ders like a moral n all dis sorta stuff if u sorta get me so yeah
    if u wouldnt mind helping
    i would b very greatful

  • »«¤ß詤»«
    19 years ago

    we are still trying to think of a way to suicide cutting is to hard to do in a play we were thinking about a gun but then we don;t no how she would get it i guess the main thing is overdose at the moment any other suggestions

  • ღ*KiM*ღ
    19 years ago

    Well I don't really want to promote my poems, but my poem "Suicide" might fit into that category. I also do drama so I know what kind of things are needed in a piece. You might want to take a look.

  • ღ*KiM*ღ
    19 years ago

    Thanks for the comment Nada :) I've just finished it, but it seems empty, so i made add more later.

  • ღ*KiM*ღ
    19 years ago

    Yeah sure, I'll take a look now :)

  • »«¤ß詤»«
    19 years ago

    wow thanks for all the help every one but the poem needs to be in first person, shes talking about how she feels and how shes about to commit suicide if you get what i mean and thanks heaps i will take all of it into note

  • ღ*KiM*ღ
    19 years ago

    Hey bec, yeah course you can use my poem. Glad it fits in with what you are doing :)

  • Avrii Monrielle
    19 years ago

    LOOK AT MY POEM THE LADY FOR INSPIRATION

  • **Just Her**
    19 years ago

    siiigh i have a lot on suicide... you could try them out if you want.... actually "Long Sleeves" is like a storyish thing.. you could read that