Amanda Bee
19 years ago
Many people on this site have inspired me to write different types of poetry. To challenge myself. I would like to thank them for helping me broaden my writing abilities and demand more from myself. It has really been inspiring. |
Sean
19 years ago
Roses, scattered among the grey, |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
Nice job Sean! And I counted the syllables...each line had 8. Making each line 8 syllables is the tricky part. My turn: |
Sean
19 years ago
So i did manage to write it correctly or i didn't? (Sorry my reading is a tad confused at times) |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
Oops I overlooked a couple of your lines: "Watch him, walk in the garden of love..." That has 9 syllables. And so does "Slowly, the garden so deep in red,.." |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
Gasp! |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
Mike that was fantastic. I loved it. And every line has 8 syllables. Nice job. |
EoB
19 years ago
I lied...got one now.. |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
They were both wonderful if you ask me, (of course mine was the best but hey...just joking). |
Dorotea©
19 years ago
Trodden Path |
HOLLY ARMER
19 years ago
I've been meaning to write one of these since you first posted this, but I kept forgetting! I have to say this was one of the most challenging poems I've ever written! It took me quite a while and I'm still not happy with it! |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
Your quatern was lovely Dorotea and I especially loved your quatern HOLLY! Terrific:) |
HOLLY ARMER
19 years ago
Thanks, Amanda! I'm glad you posted this challenge! It's really helped me as a writer! |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
This was original and it was good. But, "I really hope that flowers will come.." has 9 syllables. Nice try:) |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
I loved that poem, Chimane:) Good job, chick! |
EoB
19 years ago
I tried |
Amanda Bee
19 years ago
I've been off for a while but now I'm back and posting again. |
EoB
19 years ago
I gave Quaterns another shot.. |
Patrik
19 years ago
Hmm let's see what I can do:p Hope you enjoy:) |